Hey guys its MaxRigeGirl14! So this is my one…two...my fifth fanfiction and I also co-wrote a fanfiction with UrWrstNitemare, if you want to check those out please do. So I got this idea randomly and it just blew up in my head and I hope you enjoy it! It's rated T because I'm paranoid and it leaves me with room to do pretty much anything I want. Except you know really bad stuff that I will not mention.
Full Description: On another mission for CMS and the Flock meet an interesting girl named Raven. She is actually Fang's biological sister who escaped the school as well. But the bad news is that she has her own pack of feline human hybrids. How will the Flock get along with the Pack? How will Fang get along with his equally dark and mysterious sister? How will Iggy get along with her? How will they fight off the new threat if they can't get along?
Hope it sounds interesting. Please R&R it really makes deference and lets me know you guys appreciate what I write. Okay here's chapter 1!
Disclaimer: I do not own Maximum Ride JP does. But I do own Raven and all the new characters!
Chapter 1: The Name's Raven
Fang POV
I hate planes. I hate them so much. It's not natural for a human that can fly to fly "artificially". But unfortunately the Flock didn't want fly to LA. So we are stuck on a stuffy plane heading to the city of the stars to participate in another thing for CMS. Turbulence started to rattle the plane and a cold sweat broke out on my neck. I felt a hand creep into mine; I look over to see Max's nervous face.
"It's okay, I'm right here," I say and she lays her head on my shoulder. Nudge and Angel give me the thumbs up and Gazzy pretends to gag while Iggy listens to music to calm his nerves.
"Finally, I thought plane ride would never end! Now I can go to the beach and sun bath and maybe pick up some hot guys," Nudge says while putting on her sunglasses that cover half her face.
"Nudge why do you need a hot guy when you are only twelve?" Max asks, still holding my hand.
"Because life is short and I'd like to get my first kiss before I expire," she says. Iggy and Gazzy pretend to gag and I roll my eyes.
"Let me out please," A voice says coming out of my backpack.
"Stop talking and I will," I say to the furry creature rustling in my backpack.
"I think this is animal abuse," Total says growling but he just gets laughs in response.
"You have no idea what abuse is," I say.
"Oh cry me a river," Total snaps back and I knock the backpack into the wall.
"Ouch!" Total says and Angel lets him out finally.
"Thanks Anglican. At least someone cares,"
"It's called tough love, get used to it," Iggy says.
"OMG! These suites are so awesome!" Nudge screams into the guys' room.
"And it begins," Iggy says, eating some crackers.
"Why couldn't the girls' room be on the other side of the hotel?" Gazzy asks.
"So Fang and Max can have romantic rendezvous' without walking far," Iggy says. I threw a pillow at his face with he didn't 'see' coming.
"It's not like it's not true," Iggy says smiling evilly.
"What's not true?" Max says walking into the room.
"That you and Fang don't have romantic rendyvos," Gazzy says.
"Rendezvous Gazzy, there's a 'z'" Iggy corrected him. Max's face turns red.
"You have to stop watching late night television Iggy," I say to save Max from further embarrassment.
"Hey Jersey Shore is the need to watch show of America," Iggy says.
"Can I watch Jersey Shore?" Gazzy asks.
"Hell no," Max and I say at the same time.
"Anyways, I was thinking of going to a show tonight," Max says.
"Like the circus?" Gazzy asks.
"Yeah sure, something to get us out of the hotel," Max replies.
"Sounds good," I say, she smiles and leaves the room.
"Who's that?" Nudge asks me during the show. She points the dark haired girl climbing multiple obstacles.
"How should I know?" I ask.
"Well she reminds me of someone," Nudge says. I shrug and she sighs in frustration.
"That was so cool!" Angel says. I pick her up and put her on my shoulders.
"Yeah! I liked the motorcycles riding in the ball. That was so cool," Gazzy chimed in.
"Hey! There's that girl!" Nudge says while pointing to the dark haired girl from the show.
"Nudge don't-" I say but she already runs over to the girl. From here I get a better look at her, her long dark hair is in a braid that goes down her back. She shakes hands with people like a robot, like she doesn't want to be there. I don't blame her. I see Nudge approach her and start talking to her, then she takes her hand and brings the girl to the Flock.
"This is the girl that I was talking to you about," Nudge says. The girl is about Max's height and has really dark eyes. She wears fake cat ears on her head, I guess because she's supposed to be a cat in the show? Weird.
"You did a really good job, you were my favorite act," Angel says from my shoulders. The girl half smiles and then looks at me. Her eyes look like they are about to pop out of her head. I usually have that effect on girls, but I don't like the brag.
"The name's Raven," she says. Whoa, I think I saw her fake ears move. Probably just my imagination.
"I'm Nudge that's Max, Iggy, and Gazzy. The little girl is Angel and the tall one is Fang," Nudge says while Raven just stares at me.
"Nice to meet you," she says. It's creepy but I have a feeling that we've met before.
"Can you climb trees?" Gazzy asks Raven.
"Of course," she says. She looks around.
"Can we see?" Angel asks.
"Sure meet me tomorrow at the board walk at noon and I'll show you all my tricks," she says and Nudge squeals in excitement.
"Cool!" Angel says.
"Awesome, see ya tomorrow," Raven says and walks away.
"Who does she remind me of?" Max asks.
"Isn't obvious?" Angel says.
"No,"
"It's Fang of course!" Angel says.
"Why do you say that?" Max asks while looking at me.
"Duh, because Raven is Fang's sister," Angel says and everyone looks at me.
Hope you liked it! Please R&R!