Like I said in the summary, I really need your help! You see I was going through my old stories in the past and thought that this would be a Great story if it hadn't have been my first one... So I thought to myself as quoted "Why not redo my first fanfic, but this time completely redo it!" There was actually one itsy bitsy problem with that statement. If I was going to completely redo it then I would need some very original, creative, and out of this world ideas!
You see I've been busy lately, and I thought that maybe you guys could possibly help me out. I went ahead and edited the first chapter which is really like the beginning, you know what the story is going to mainly be about. So please read this part and tell me what your ideas are.
Danny was sleeping peacefully and silently in his room with his door closed so that no one would bother him on his Saturday morning. For once all the ghosts were staying as far away as they could from the human world so that night Danny was able to get that Saturday night he had always longed for. At least he was having that until his door slammed open waking him up abruptly. His sister, Jazz, came running into the room pushing him wildly from side to side not knowing that he was already awake.
"Quit pushing me already. I'm up," Danny moaned rudely as he took the pillow he was laying on and moved it on top of his head trying to block out all the sound his overly protective sister was about to say.
"Get up, Danny. Mom and Dad have made up some kind of goofy looking invention and they want you to see it. There saying that it's dangerous," she warned as her brother only clutched his pillow harder onto his head.
"Tell them I'm asleep," Danny told her only making Jazz frown by how lazy his behavior was today, but her frown slowly turned into a small devilish smile as she thought up of a plan.
"I guess you win," Jazz signed using a fake sadness tone as she spoke, "Looks like I'll just have to bring them in here. You know how Dad is when he starts to blather on about his new invention. He might even jump on top of the bed with you,"
Danny after hearing that pulled his body up on the floor and pushed her out of his room and into the hall. "Well come on slowpoke Mom and Dad have just made another invention we need to hurry down there and see what it is," Danny said in a rushy tone as he pushed her down the stairs and into the basement. Once Jack saw his son come down the stairs he grabbed him by the shirt and held him next to him tightly. He showed Danny a small remote looking device up into his face.
"Kids this is the Fenton Controller it gives the user the power to control any ghost he or she desires, no matter how powerful. If everything goes according to plan then I'm going to use it to get the Ghostboy out of our town once and for all," Jack announced loudly still squeezing Danny beside him.
"Well is there anyway to turn the ghost back to normal?" Jazz asked a little worried wanting to know incase her little brother was to get hit by it.
"The only way to do that is if the person who hits the ghost presses the off button on the remote. It would either free the specter or kill it instantly," Maddie explained as she pointed to the red button on it that red off.
Danny shivered a little to himself, "Well that's nice to know," he said as he pushed away from his father's tight bear hug.
"Here's even better news we heard that the Wisconsin Ghost was seen flying around the town today. If we get lucky then we can use it on him to see if he knows where his son is," Jack exclaimed feeling good about himself and his device.
"His son?" Danny asked confused by what his father had meant. Vlad didn't have a son even though he wished everyday of his lonely life he did.
"Yeah, the Ghostboy. Everybody's been saying that the ghost had been talking about how him and his son would take over our city today, but if I was to get to him first then both of them will be history," Jack declared happily.
Danny felt his eyes turn green from anger. Now the man was saying that he and him was going to take over Amity Park. "In his dreams," he muttered under his breath.
"What was that, dear?" Maddie asked her son who was now growling a little.
"Nothing. I'm going out for some fresh air," Danny replied as he left the basement keeping his eyes a bright neon green. Once he reached the kitchen and was out of eyesight of his family he changed into his ghost half, Danny Phantom, and flew out of the house. He wasn't to surprised to see Vlad out waiting for him. His arms were crossed, and he was smiling evilly at Danny.
"What's the deal, Plasmius? Why did you tell the town that I was your son and that we were planning to take over this town?" he questioned as his hand were glowing green showing signs of an ecto attack erupting from them.
"Oh dear did that come out of my mouth? I'm so sorry, Daniel. I guess they overheard me talking to myself. I promise you it was an accident," Vlad responded using his innocent voice that he had so much practice with from the past.
"Yeah I'm sure it was an accident, because I know that you of all people would never do anything that would hurt me in any way," Danny said sarcastically, "I can't wait to see the townspeople face when you can't back up those words."
"Who said that I couldn't back up my words? Especially when my plan is only beginning," Vlad said joyfully as he held out his arms.
"Let me guess your going to try to steal my Dad's Controller so that you'll make me think that I'm your son," Danny guessed feeling a little confident that his plan this time wouldn't work.
"Wow, did your I.Q. finally go up?" he mocked. With that remark Danny came flying straight toward him menacingly ready to attack, but before he could launch one blast Vlad had caught him by the neck and began shocking him making Danny go limp in his arm.
"How many times are you going to use the same attack on me?" he asked annoyed at being in this position yet again.
"Your right for once. Maybe it's time I try something a little different," he agreed as he opened his mouth up wide next to his face. Danny's face fell once a ghastly wail came out of it forcing Danny into a nearby building knocking him against it. Once the wail was over Danny collapsed to the ground in his human form. Lucky for him it was so early in the morning nobody was up to see him change, and they were all to lazy to get up to see where the noise had came from. He opened his blurry eyes slowly after a while of keeping them closed from the pain in his body. He was surprised to see Vlad now only a few feet away from him holding the Fenton Controller in his two palms. Before another word could escape his mouth Vlad used the Controller on him.
Danny felt his body's muscles tense up as he was fired. The pain from the invention was even more powerful then when Vlad had used his unexpected ghostly wail. His brain was now growing mushy to where he couldn't think properly, and he was beginning to lose his conscious along with his mind. Danny let his body fall to the ground with a light thud, and he stayed down there for quite some time holding his head from the strong headache he was getting. After a few minutes had passed Danny rose up on his feet keeping his head down so that he couldn't see his face.
"Is there anything you want me to do, father?" Danny asked with no emotion at all in his young voice. His eyes were now crimson red soulless as they burned into Vlad's. He couldn't help himself but start to chuckle, but it soon began to rise into a thundering laughter. He had finally gotten one of the three things he ever wanted in life.
Well if your all the way down to the ending then that means your either doing one of three things.
A: You've decided to have a heart and help me out in my time of need.
B:You just wanted to read this chapter and not send in your Excellent idea that will help this story out.
C: Or you are just bored, and you just scrolled all the way down to the ending to see if I would blather on more like Jack.
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