A/N: This is something I came up with a few days ago. I'm not sure if it'll work, but I'm gonna give it a shot anyway
Losing
Chapter 1
By Word Life 316
It seemed like any other day for local half Danny Phantom slash Danny Fenton, it had been another gratifying day of ghost hunting with his friends Sam, Tucker and his sister Jazz as he sucked the last stray ghost into the Fenton Thermos.
"DANNY LOOK OUT!" screamed Sam, That's when he felt something coming fast behind him and narrowly missing, jus brushing his hair on his head, he turned around and saw his parents, completely armed with weapons.
"Mom, Dad! What are you doing!" screamed Jazz as the trio ran over to the ghost obsessed adults.
"What I've been wanting to do for a long time, tearing that ghost molecule by molecule" said Jack as he shot a sort of dart right into Danny's shoulder, a moment later Danny's body was racked with pain, he screamed as waves of pain surged throughout his body while his friends watched in horror, Danny's screams had also attracted a large crowd. Finally the screaming stopped and Danny's head slumped forward, he wasn't dead, just very weak. He also realized that he couldn't move or do anything.
"What did you do to him" asked Sam hysterically.
Jack grinned "It's the Fenton Immobilizer, it sort of paralyses a ghost for a good 15 minutes, just enough time to BRING HIM DOWN" he yelled the last path as Maddie and him aimed their guns at the ghost boy, unaware that they were aiming at their own flesh and blood.
Inside the crowd their was a mixture of emotions, most of the adults were happy that the pest was finally getting what was coming to him, most of the little kids who saw Danny Phantom as their hero were crying and begging them no to hurt him however one person in particular was watching with a huge smile on her face, her name was Valerie Grey and watching this was the greatest moment of her life.
"FIRE!"
"NOOOOOOOOOOOO!" screamed the three as Jack and Maddie shot a powerful ball of energy right at Danny, who could only watch in horror as they came closer and closer towards.
Then they hit.
Danny's body started to fall; to Sam it seemed like forever as she started running towards his falling body, finally Danny landed on the ground with a massive thump on the sidewalk, right in front of her. She screamed as she fell to her knees and held him in her arms.
"DANNY! DANNY SPEAK TO ME!" screamed Sam who was even more hysterical then before, Jazz and Tucker were standing over them while the crowd had also came over as Jack, Maddie and Valerie looked on and wondered what the hell Sam was doing.
Danny's eyes slowly opened revealing the glowing green orbs that Sam had grown to adore.
"Sam..." he said weakly.
"What?" she asked, putting her ear close to his lips.
"I...I...lo...love you" he said before his eyes closed shut.
Sam was so over come with emotions she held Danny's limp body close to hers as the tears fell like mad, just then two rings formed around his waist, one went up, the other went down. What was revealed made everybody gasp; Jack and Maddie dropped their weapons in horror. Danny Phantom was...a kid, a living breathing human kid or at least he used to be living and breathing.
Maddie slowly walked over to Danny, "This can't be right, this has to be a dream" she thought. She couldn't believe it; she refused to believe it SHE HAD KILLED HER ONLY SON!
"Danny?" she said in a soft voice, which was met by the anger glare of her daughter.
"YOU STAY AWAY YOU, YOU...MONSTER! YOU OBSESSION OF GHOSTS HAS KILLED YOU SON! YOUR AN EVIL COLDHEARTED BITCH!" screamed Jazz at her mothers face.
"Wait, he's alive" screamed Tucker, feeling a faint but quite obvious pulse. Sam removed her head from the crook of Danny's neck, wiping the tears away and started to smile when she noticed the slight rise and fall of Danny's chest.
"Quick we got to get him to the hospital!" ordered Jazz as Sam and Tucker picked Danny up. Jack headed towards them to help but was halted by Jazz.
"You've done enough already tonight Jack" she said the last word like it was the most vile word in the world, and as of right now to her, it was "Quick get him into my car" ordered Jazz as they placed him in the back seat, with his head in Sam's lap as she sped away.
Valerie couldn't believe it "Danny Fenton was Danny Phantom" she said to herself over and over again. People in the crowd were speechless, the kids were crying.
And that's when Maddie fainted
TO BE CONTINUED