THE ULTIMATE NIN-(Naruto Vs Aze)
Chapter 1 - The beginning
Author's note: this is a rewrite,the story had too much errors so I decided to write it again. Note for those who have read this story before there will be a little addition though it won't be much.
I would also like reviews from both those who have read this story before and those who haven't so please do review.
DISCLAIMER: I do not own Naruto if not he would have been a doujutsu user.
Human speaking- "Naruto"
Demon speaking- "Gaki"
Inner being speaking- "cha!"
Jutsu name- "katon"
Human thinking- 'Naruto'
Inner being thinking- 'Naruto'
Beast thinking- 'Naruto'
In summary this story is about Senju Aze, the son of Senju Minato (the container of the 10 tailed demon wolf and also the riakage) and Uchiha Kushina (the wife of Minato and Jinchuriki of the 9 tailed demon)
Many years ago in the heart of Japan, before civilization came was where the greatest ninja villages existed. One of these villages was Kumogakure the village hidden in the cloud. It was said to be the strongest village among the greatest five and there was a prophecy that… why am I saying all these why don't I take you back in time so you could witness it your self.
KUMOGAKURE
NIGHT TIME
SMALL LEMON
Minato woke up in the middle of the night feeling terribly hot.
"Hmmm… you feel it too, dont you Minato?" Asked Minato's bijuu.
"What do you mean?" Relied Minato.
"Don't act all innocent with me, wake her up and get down to business." said the latter.
"Okay." Minato starts to kiss the sleeping Kushina by his side who wakes up and replies to his kiss surprised at Minato's kiss intensity.
Minato's right hand goes to her left chest grabbing her breast, Kushina moans and dips her hand inside his boxer bring out a gigantic dick Minato deeps it into her and Kushina cries out with joy. Unknown to them Kyuubi was ovulating same with kushina and juubi was Cuming so was Minato
TWO WEEKS LATER
"Minato! Minato! Minato! Where are you?" screamed Kushina at the top of her lungs. Minato rushes quickly to his love.
"What's wrong love?" He asked.
"Im 2 weeks pregnant!" She said and kissed him.
"Mitchew." minato hissed.
"I Thought it was something impor… WHAT!?" Minato was speechless with his jaws on the ground.
"What's wrong? Are you not happy." She asked.
"Im going to be a father." minato said before fainting.
30 MINUTES LATER IN THE HOSPITAL
"Hmmm… what do you think of about our future child minato?" asked the imprisoned.
"What? are you crazy? He is my son!" Said the prisoner to the caged.
"Hehehe… minato you should thank me and Kyuubi in your wife, your son will be a mass of walking chakra." said juubi.
"What do you mean?" asked the Jinchuriki.
"In the heat of you and your wife's passion my chakra and Kyuubi's got in-between now your son will be a human made up of chakra! Even his hair will be chakra.
"OMG! Wait you mean my son will be a half-breed?" Asked minato.
"Something of that sort… im so lucky to be a dad… aint i?" said the juubi teasing minato.
"Don't count on it, he is my son and mine alone!" minato affirmed.
9 MONTHS LATER
A knock on the door
"Come in" Minato said.
"Riakage-sama there's an emergency, your wife is in the labor room!" Minato's secetary said.
"What!" In the blink of an eye minato was in the hospital with the use of the jutsu that helped make him Raikage HIRAISHIN NO JUTSU (flight of the thunder god)
"My love im here with you don't be afraid... does it hurt?" minato said to his wife who was clearly in pain.
"if not that i am in too much pain right now you would have been in the air for asking such a stupid question" Kushina said.
"Raikage-sama you shouldnt be here." one of the doctors present voiced out their concered but a look from thier leader changed all thier mind.
"Minato we havnt thought of a name for our child…" kushina said.
"Hmmmmm… if it's a boy…Aze… And if its a girl…" before he could finish his sentence he saw his wife was suddenly covered with an aura of red chakra kushina who gave a hard push sending minato flying.
And a young baby or lets say human-wolf looking baby with red chakra body and a tail was out of kushina.
"My baby boy." said an exhusted kushina with tears of joy.
Minato who had just recovered from the flight walked up to the fire looking human baby wolf with a smile on his face and carried his 'SON'…
Seconds later his face suddenly turned red and immediately minato threw the baby up in the air and started to shout… "My hand! My hand! My hand!" as he was blowing air from his mouth onto his burning hands forgetting he threw his 'son' in the air.
Kushina who was already in stage 4 of her transformation (i.e having 4 tails) saw this and quickly caught the baby with one of her tails and used another to knock minato who was running around like a hen with its head cut off out.
6 YEARS LATER
"DAMN TAU-SAN YOU ARE TOO STRONG,CAN I EVER BEAT YOU?" Shouted Aze angrily.
"If I was beaten easily do you think I would be the Raikage?" replied minato.
"But atleast let me just hit you even though its just once." aze said.
"Lets get on with the fight." Said Minato running towards Aze with 2 kunais in hand.
Aze throws 5 shurikens at Minato aiming his vital organs, Minato dodges the in coming attack, teleports behind Aze, gives him a knock on the head, whispered "too slow", teleports in front of Aze as Aze turned to see who gave him a knock then blows Aze slightly, Aze changes into a log of wood.
"A replacement." Said minato.
Aze comes from below Minato and cuts him on the leg with a kunai.
"Yes I hit you! I hit you! I hit you! Said Aze dancing around.
"Puff" was heard and Aze's joy was cut short when he realized that it was a clone he attacked.
"Ooooh… not fair Tau-san!" Barked Aze.
"What's not fair?" Minato asked as he came into the view of Aze.
"The fact that you can create a clone and I cant." Aze said.
"I didn't say you shouldn't use clone, did i?" asked Minato.
"Well no.. its just that I don't know how to create a clone. Sasuke tried to teach me but I just couldn't get it, his father said it was bcos I had too much chakra and I should try learning the KAGE BUSHIN NO JUTSU (SHADOW CLONE TECH). BUT he didn't want to teach me, he said it wasn't in his place to do so.
"Hmmm… I understand but I don't think you can learn it." Teased Minato.
"Ofcouse I can learn it please tau-san?" Aze begged giving Minato his cute babyish pleading eye.
"You know I would do almost anything 4 you if you do that." Said Minato who then explained the concept of the jutsu and showed him how it was done.
After about 30 minutes of continues failure by Aze he managed to create 5 bushins.
"I did it tau-san!" Yelled Aze.
"So I see... Try increasing the number of bushins, pump in more chakra." Minato said.
"Okay." Aze said and screamed "KAGE BUSHIN NO JUTSU" as he pushed into the jutsu all the chakra he could muster and created a thousand clones.
"We did it! we did it! Give me 5! Give me 10!" Aze and his clones said shaking hands and playing around.
"Now Aze this is the most important part." minato said.
"In dispelling the clones, do not dispel at once dispel gradually."
"Okay tau-san." Chorused all the Azes.
"But who said anything about dispelling?" Asked all the Azes asked as they gave Minato a mischievous smile and started squeezing their hands as if getting ready to beat the hell out of someone.
"What do you mean?" Asked Minato before realizing what Aze meant.
"Oooh no you don't!" Minato shouted as he took to his heels and was pursued by a thousand Azes.
"Stop this rough play this minute Aze!" Minato shouted as he was running before teleporting away as he was almost caught by the army of Azes.
"Damn cheat using an S-rank jutsu to escape. Well he'll be back and I'll be waiting. But for now, am going to train till my content." said Aze to his army.
"Hai!"All the Azes said as they turned to go back to the training spot of the house while announcing "TRAINING THINGS ON POINT NODISTURBANCE!"
And that's it for chapter one hope its better that before and I have correct all the defects it had before? So you know im writing a rewrite on chapter one to chapter five.
Also if you took time to read this chapter I say thank you but don't only read, also review it really helps please do so. I wanna know what you think till next time.
JA NE!
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