Stand up

by hypercon

Hehe....first serious story, takes place during the final fight between Luffy and Crocodile.EDIT:reposted cause it didn't turn out right.

Hey all the readers out there! This is my first attempt at a serious fic. It's One Piece, during the Luffy vs. Crocodile fight final round. So, read and review.

Stand Up

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Stand up

Rock was falling. Luffy stood as the crypt fell

Look forward

Crocodile rushed toward Luffy, hook out stretched. Luffy swung his head up.

Remember your purpose

'I want to defeat him and bring back Vivi's land.'

Look forward

Luffy saw crocodile rushing toward him

And finally,

Crocodile was about to strike,

Remember you purpose and shout,

Crocodile lunged forward, Luffy caught the hook with his foot and brought it down.

"I WILL SURPASS YOU!"

And have no fear.

So, how do you think it turned up? Bad, Good, plain awful? Please give my some advice, I'm a cheeky new writer. I got the idea after reading Bleach when he finds Zangetsu's name.