Disclaimer: I do not
own Outlaw Star or any of its characters. This story is for non-profit use only.
Notes: I have only seen the cut version of Outlaw
star at the time of this writing, but I am going to get the uncut version
soon. Next please be nice and review
this for me. If you are going to flame
me go right ahead but please tell me why you don't like it and also please make
sure your flame makes sense. I once
read a flame the said and I quote "Go eat a bag of Hell." I'm not quite sure if "a bag of Hell" is
some spicy dish where he comes from or he just has the English skills of a five
year old, but either way please be coherent.
This is my first story and I believe that R is the right rating for this
but if it is not please let me know.
One more thing if anybody is OOC I'm sorry but you will have to deal
with it. I rewrote Chapter 1 so it would be a bit longer. Could someone tell me the name of the bar
Iris works at? It would help a lot. Also could someone help me think up a new title? "Gene and Melfina" is a bit lame. Now enjoy the story.
Chapter 1: thoughts
on an outlaw.
Gene felt a heavy feeling in his
stomach. "How could I do that to poor
Melfina?" He thought out loud. It seems that old habits had caught up to
Gene Starwind. It had only been one
night since Melfina had found him in his room with Iris. The seen kept replaying in his mind over and
over.
It was a chilly September
night. He went to his favorite bar for
a drink and ran in to Iris. She sat
down with him and they had a few drinks.
After a while both of them were stone face drunk. "Come on over to my place." Gene said to
Iris with a slur.
"But what about Melfina?" Iris asked
Gene also with a slur. "Huh, oh don't
worry she's gone some where."
They arrived at Starwind and Hawking
enterprises at about seven o'clock.
They made there way back to Gene's room. Both quickly unrobed and got in the bed. Gene started kissing down her body till he
got to Iris's breasts. He wan gently
licking and kissing each one when Melfina walked in to let Gene know she was
back.
Melfina's words still rang clear in
his hear. "You said you loved me!" That was all Gene heard before Melfina ran
into her room. He chased after her but
fell and badly hurt his foot.
"How could I've been so stupid?" The outlaw screamed mentally. "Damnit!" Gene shouted out loud, "Why did I
go to that stupid bar? Why!"
Standing outside her door Gene could
hear quiet sobs coming from a certain Bio-Android. He thought back to the Layline "All I need is you." Thinking about that and what he did to
Melfina just made him sick.
Gene decided to go out for a walk to get his mind off things. Going out the door he tripped, "Damn foot"
he murmured. As he was walking he
passed a bar he had never noticed before.
"Why not have a few drinks." Gene thought, "No, Drinking was what got me
in to this mess and I'll be damned if I'm going to go drink again."
Gene went back home and sat down on the couch and watched TV even
though he could not pay attention to what was going on. After a While he thought "I might as well go
try to talk to her I don't having anything to lose." With that Gene went to knock on Melfina's door.
Notes: Ok still somewhat short
but a little longer. Don't worry though
I'll have chapter 2 up in about three days.
Well please tell me what you think.
