Hi this is my first time publishing a fanfic and reviews would be a great help. [That also encourages flamers ;) ]
I don't own Naruto or any of the characters except my OC.
The clash of metal could be heard throughout the Akatsuki base with the occasional shout of a jutsu. A battle was taking place within the training hall.
"Ha! I told you .You couldn't lay a finger on me!" A little girl no more then the age of thirteen shouted at her opponent, a man with slick back hair and a scythe. The girl taunted as she dodge his next three attempts of impaling her. "Immortal bas-"
"Shut up you little brat! Kisame's here with another brat like you!" Her opponent shouted ending their fight.
Not two seconds later a man that resembles a shark walked in with a boy about the age of fifteen, tall, black hair held together at the base of his neck, and obsidian eyes.
"Hey Kisame-chan whose the kid?" The girl asked as she walked towards them from the other side of the room.
"Why are you calling him a kid for, he must be older than you. Stupid brat can't even see when someone is older than her that she's the kid." The man with slicked back hair said as he replaced the scythe to the holder on his back.
"Oh shut the hell up Hidan none asked you ok." the little girl shot back at the man hat was older than her.
" To answer your question Kurisutaru, this is Itachi Uchiha. Leader-sama just enlisted him into our organization." Kisame said with a little distaste in his voice probably because there will be another child in the ranks of Akatsuki.
"Fine by me, but according to that headband of yours, Itachi, your from Konohagakure. More than likely an excellent shinobi on your part to even be considered Akatsuki material at your age. Just so you know, because you murdered your clan doesn't make me one bit scarred of you. Just whatever you do stay away from Oro-chan he might just want a taste of that power you posses." Kurisutaru said walking past the Uchiha towards the door. "Hidan-chan I'll finish kicking your ass later," were the last words to leave her mouth as she left the room.
"She actually spoke to you without cussing once. Hidan what on earth the two of fighting about this time?" Kisame turned to the other man that was fighting Kirisutaru, forgetting about the young boy he was left with.
'I wonder why she spoke to me like that when she must be at least two years younger. Well if I'm to be here Madara-sama must be happy about my progress. I only wonder what that little girl is going to do next.'
"Itachi I will show you to room now and worry about Kurisutaru. She's normally in a bad mood and talkative. Believe me you'll get to her. Though if you upset her, boy you better run back to your village because her wrath is worst than any ANBU torture I've ever seen."
I hoped you like my first chapter. And please review.