This is my second first story because the other one i made was a break down,it didn't really go well for it.
well i'll try making this something the readers will like(i'm not such a good writer)because i wanted to. This is just the story of Luffy but i skipped the part when he was young and he has a different ability other than the rubber rubber fruit...LuffyxOC mine.
just review what you think and maybe some ideas to help me with some of my wrongness :D i really need some help but it's not like i'm demanding them just asking if you can offer some new stuff that will happen maybe on the future or some characters to have powers or change some, yeah anything goes, i just hope you'll like my story...
Luffy was on his small boat , he was just minding hi own business until he saw the water burst in the air and their appeared a seaking. It took the shape of an eel and had sharp fangs ready to rip apart anything.
"Ooooh, look! the food showed itself" exclaimed Luffy standing still and had a small smile on his face.
The monster started moving about to attack the boy but Luffy just stood there and was doing something with his hands."Gravity:Raise!"whispered Luffy while moving his index finger in a circle and there appeared a ring of water around the monster, he then opened his fingers and closed them making the water ring slash at the neck of the seaking,slicing it clean of its head.
Luffy then jumped on the head of the seaking still afloat and grabbed the body ready to eat it all,while Luffy was eating he didn't noticed the huge whirlpool pulling him in.
As Luffy was staring at what was happening he looked around the area to find something that will help him with the problem(forgetting about his powers).As he was nearing at the center he found a barrel and jump in it without a second thought and closed the lid tight making his way under the swirling water.
'at a cruise ship'
A ship full of passengers was being attacked by the so called 'Alvida pirates' and was sent into a total panic spree area.
a small boy with a pair of glasses and pink hair was going to the kitchen trying to hide from the commotion on the tried to look at the storage room and saw some barrels that looked like they weren't touched yet.
He tried to open the lid of the barrels but had no progress, as he tried again two pirates came in and saw what the boy was doing.
"oi, Coby!are you trying to hide again? hehehe" asked the first pirate."what you got there?" asked the other one.
"u-u-umm,i-i was t-trying to open this b-barrel to bring t-t-to the ship" he stuttered while shaking out of fear if the pirates told their captain what he was doing.
"lets see...*kick*...looks like it full,lets try and open it" said the pirate."what!?but i-if you do that then lady Alvida will get angry" Coby said to the pirates who was getting close to him for some reason.
"Tell lady Alvida what?huh, Coby?" threatened the pirate putting a knife on Coby's neck."you're gonna keep your mouth shut about this or we'll run this knife through your neck,got that!?"
"y-y-yes"replied Coby with a scared looked on his face.
the pirates then tried to open the lid but like Coby they couldn't make a single budge on they decided to cut it open but as they were about to do so, a hand come leaping out of the barrel hitting them both resulting in broken jaws and were completely knocked out.
"aaah, what a great nap" said the boy who was wearing a black long sleeved cardigan, white pants that looked like they were cut around the knees and a bracelet and a tattoo on his right arm that both said LEGENDS.
Coby looked at the boy with a shocked face that looked like his eyes were about to fall anytime soon."w-w-who are you?" Coby asked with still a shocked face at seeing what the boy just did.
"me?i'm monkey D. Luffy and going to become the 'PIRATE KING' "exclaimed Luffy."who are you?"
"huh?me?my name is Coby an-"Coby stopped after registering what Luffy said in his mind."P-P-PIRATE KING!?"yelled Coby looking at Luffy with disbelief."that's impossible,in order to do that you need to have a strong crew,fame,power,and wealth that would be imp-" *boink* "ow!"said Coby while rubbing a big red bump on his head."what did you do that for?"asked Coby.
"you were both being hysterical and annoying...besides even if you say it's impossible i'll still try my best and die happily knowing i tried hard reaching my dream" Luffy told Coby earning a little respect from the little boy.
"d-do you think i'll reach my dream and become a great marine?" asked Coby a little shy at what he said.
"i don't know ..."said Luffy bluntly."but if you try hard maybe you will." finished Luffy.
"you really think so?but i'm stuck with some pirates and they're making me into their monkey" said Coby.
"haven't you tried escaping?"asked Luffy." I tried but they always catch me before leaving 7 meters"replied Coby with a disappointed face."hahahah,your a coward, ,i don't like you"teased Luffy making Coby red due to embarrassment.
"but one day i'll become a marine and hunt down bad pirates like Alvida!"yelled Coby.
Then suddenly the roof of the kitchen tore open and their appeared a large woman holding an iron club."Huh?, who are you going to capture,eh, Coby?" asked alvida.
"AAAAAAHHHHH!,l-lady a-alvida,i-i-i-" "COBY,who is the most beautiful woman in east blue?" shouted alvida cutting Coby of what he was about say."of course its-(Coby started remembering what Luffy had said earlier)n-n-NOT YOU,yo-y-YOU FAT UGLY WALRUS"yelled the pink-haired boy nervously.
Alvida flinched from hearing those words came out of Coby."you really done it now,Coby!,i'm gonna blow all your bones along with that 'legend' boy" threatened alvida, clearly noticing the bracelet of Luffy .
Alvida was now ready to swing at both Coby and Luffy but suddenly Luffy walked in front of alvida and said to Coby."Coby, you've done enough just let take care of the rest" and with those words Coby backed upped. Alvida swung her iron club down,straight to Luffy's head but was suddenly stopped, then Alvida stared at scene and also the other pirates with gaping mouth,they saw the tatooed boy just standing there holding the club with just one finger and he didn't even do anything not even put haki on his fingers or use his powers, he was just holding the heavy club like it was a feather and seeing 'that' made all the people present there shocked.
"so?was that all you've got or was that all trash talk?" Luffy said calmly with a disappointed look on his face.
"y-y-y-y-you !?,what are you ?" asked the big pirate still shaking at what she just witnessed.
"I'm Monkey D. Luffy, an apprentice of a yonko and i dream to be the next PIRATE KING" he said .Then he walked to her and punched her on the stomach and nothing happened, but as the pirates were thinking that nothing will happen, then the unexpected, after a minute alvida flew 50 feet away from the ship making her look like a dot at the then demanded a small ship for him and Coby, the stunned pirates then moved quickly to avoid unnecessary quarrel.
They then set sail to the sea. But for Coby's curiosity reaching the peak, he then asked Luffy."u-um,are you really an apprentice of a yonko?" Luffy then looked at him with a weird face then sat down "of course i am,hehe" said Luffy with smile on his face.
Coby was shocked to hear those words."but,why'd you tell them that?"Coby asked. Then Luffy grew his smile as he told Coby why."I tried saying that 'she was just weak' but i remembered a friend say something during my ten year training... that my strength was of that a yonko and also my ability was quite 'unique'. That's why told them that i was a student of a yonko." finished Luffy stunning Coby.
"WHAT!?,you were training f-f-for ten years...SUGOI!"Coby exclaimed."so?where are you going now?"he asked.
"i'm looking for this so called "pirate hunter" Zoro, i heard that he's really strong,hehe" replied Luffy shocking Coby.
"p-pirate hunter Zoro!,thats impossible.I heard that he has been captured for being a bad guy,it's impossible" Coby warned Luffy but to no avail Luffy was already hell bent on meeting this pirate hunter,all he did was punch him on his head to shut him up from complaining just told Coby that not all people are what they are based on rumors and that gave Coby some respect for Luffy knowing that Luffy was a pirate but didn't do any harm.
"OI!,COBY!on to the next island,YAHOOOO!"
well this is the ending feel free to review any thing like some of my mistakes T_T...well...this is a bad story isn't it,right? i don't know if you like it but i'll try to meet all of your expectations _sorry for sudden stupidity!