AN:

When I got my first review on the original story it got me thinking and this is what resulted. Others seem to like the original so I'm keeping it up but heres a more emotional version for the ones that want it. Enjoy.

Also note that you will find parts from the original in here and I'm just revising it in a way. Chapter one I'll keep the same from the original up to a certain point.

Kit kat.

Chapter one:

No one's P.O.V.

Drew walks along the edge of the forest with a bored sigh. He stayed in the coliseum for awhile before leaving to where he is now. He had lectured May about how she was pathetic to loose but he of course added some words to boast himself. He later had seen Harley talking to May and she got this really sad depressed face then ran off into the forest. Drew wont just go after her, no she should be able to take care of herself.

Harley waited awhile before going into the forest saying he was going to just continue traveling and such.

Drew leans against a tree and thinks of what he could do for the next contest and how he could improve his pokemon.

Suddenly theres a scream that comes from the forest making all but Drew jump.

Drew looks up and turns to the forest. "Whhats going on now?" He groans.

Harley races out of the forest crying sadly in a loud voice. He starts running around spewing nonsense while having a major crying fit going on.

The others watch Harley surprised and confused.

Drew looks questioningly at Harley. "What are you up to this time Harley?" He questions.

Harley suddenly appears right in front of Drew close with wide scared and sad eyes. "I-I saw May's ghost!"

Drew sighs. "Really? Stop lying Harley. Theres no way-" He is cut off when two men close to them turn to each other and talk as if trying to keep it a secret, they don't seem to notice Drew and Harley.

"But didn't you hear that girl scream earlier?" One said.

"Wasn't it a little after that one girl ran out into the forest?" The other asks earing a nod from the man hes talking to. "Didn't I hear something about officer Jenny about a raging Rhydon and Aggron chasing some people for no reason in there. Heard some almost went off cliffs."

"Then she must've been killed that way or something." The one man shivers. "Oh man that's scary to even think about!"

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"Just so we're clear I'm only coming to prove you wrong about this." Drew says as he and Harley walk in the forest looking for May or 'her spirit'.

Harley is more jumpy now as if it'll come out and attack him if he isnt over the extremes to be careful.

They find an area where the forest becomes a rocky ground and theres a giant chasm there.

"This is the area I saw her in!" Harley leaps scared and hides behind Drew while looking for any sign of May's spirit cowering behind Drew.

Drew looks around for any signs of May or something that could make this look real, like a projector, while Harley tags along close to the other male. Drew spots something then puts his hand by the time flower (I think that's what its called.) making it open up and eliminates the tape it got. "A time flower. Maybe this will help. It shows the past no matter how old it is." Drew explains seeing Harley look surprised and confused.

The two males watch as the projected May is chassed by an Aggron then a Rhydon as well.

The two pokemon look angry, real angry.

May stops seeing the edge of the cliff and she glances down before turning to look back at the two advancing pokemon. "Why are you attacking me! I didn't do anything to you!" May shouts and the pokemon still advance backing her to the cliffs edge which she spares a second glance back down the chasm before looking back to the pokemon. "Now I'm going to die and I only ran out here to get away from Drew and Harley's insults!" She is forced to try to back away from the two pokemon and she just falls back falling down…. Down to her death… with a scream.

"May!" Drew rushes forward only to stop after a few steps as everything stops.

The time flower closes letting things go back to normal but both Drew and Harley are frozen on the spot.

"May hun! No! You cant die! Please come back! I wont be able to do anything right knowing I'm the reason behind someones death!" Harley is in tears and is on his hands and knees just sobbing and crying.

Drew doesn't let a tear slide down his face but his eyes became teary the moment May had fallen.

Suddenly May appears at the cliff's edge not too close to the edge though. She's pale skinned, wearing a white dress, has angel wings and a halo above her head. She doesn't even touch the ground below as she just stands, or well floats, there. She brings her hands up to her chest together in a ball like form that people use when waiting hopeful for something to come or to plead for something.

Arceus comes over and behind May. "Yes you are dead and yes I have come to take you away from this world but you can say some final things you wish to say on Earth." It tells her.

May turns so shes facing Arceus and pauses half a second. She nods and tilts her head down but only just a little. "I just wish I had a longer life or knew that my death would come to me at such a young age. I never got the chance to have a daughter I would have named June. I never got the chance to marry, become top coordinator or even have my first kiss. I guess I'll have to leave with those regrets."

Mays list of things she regretted not being able to do hit a nerve with Drew.

"May! No come back! Don't go! I need you! I need your happy smile! I need that cheery attitude of yours! I need you May!" He shouts running towards May and the great pokemon standing in front of here.

Arceus takes a step closer and lowers its head so it touched the top of Mays head.

With that May becomes a bunch of sparkle dust that flies off into the air.

"MAY!" Both Drew and Harley scream only to both end up in a mess of tears on their hands and knees on the ground crying really upset.

Arceus leaves the scene but manages to hide far enough from Drew and Harley so that they wont notice.

Harley is going on and on about something in incoherent sentences, it sounds like how hell never sleep again or win another contest as May's death will haunt him.

Drew opens up letting out his true feelings out. "May. May! MAY!" He sobs and pleas. "Please come back! I love you! I love you more than life itself! I want to give you your first kiss, I want to marry you and I want to have a beautiful child named June with you and you alone! Please!" He throws his head back to look to the sky looking so broken hearted and pleading with all his heart. "Give her back to me! I want her to come back! It shouldn't have been her time for death!" He yells to the sky. "Just… Just…. Bring her back." His head falls down hanging in despair as he cries harder. "Please!"

Harley and Drew stay there crying for a good while till they ran out of tears they could shed on the outside but mentally still crying, well more Drew than Harley.

Drew sniffles and stands shakily. "Celebi….." He mummers the name. "Celebi can fix this. I can save her!" His voice is very raspy from crying so much. He turns to run off but Harley stops him grabbing his arm. "Let go!" Drew says though it hurts to speak.

"No." Harley's voice is also raspy and hurts to talk but he forces the words out anyways. "If you go back in time to change the past that can result to bad things." He tries to reason with Drew.

Drew struggles. "No. I don't care! I want May!" He manages to get out of Harleys grip and heads deeper into the woods.

"Drew!" Harley calls trying to get him to even just pause but is ignored.