Hey everyone! This is Ike here! I just wanted to thank Xynth for giving me the permission to write this. The original idea is all his. I made a few changes to it though.
WARNING! This is dark Naruto. He's going to be an amoral sociopath. If you don't like this, then don't read.
This is also going to be a Naruto x Visas Marr from KOTOR 2
Thank you all for reading this and please review.
The Nine-Tailed Dark Lord
Chapter 1: Master Revan
A cloaked figure stepped out from the space ship. He observed his surroundings. He was in a clearing of a forest. The sky was dark, filled with stars and a moon. He parked his ship in the clearing incase it was a primitive planet.
He cloaked the ship, just in case someone was to come by.
He remembered seeing a village on his way down. It was a while down south. He began to run down the forest in search of the village. He used the force to push himself to his body's limits and beyond. Something his foolish Jedi masters do not like him using. Afraid of the consequences.
His dark cloak flew back in the wind. It revealed the tight dark leather combat gear he always had, and the mask he used to cover his face. Years ago, a dark Jedi had burnt half of his face with force lightning, causing nasty scars on the left side of his face. It was a reminder to him of what could happen if you loose focus in battle. He was just a young padawan when it happened.
Lost in his thoughts, he arrived at the village faster then he assumed he would. Two men jumped down from a very large wooden gate. 'I could just force it open, but I don't want to raise suspicion,' he thought to himself. The two men were wearing tight blue attire, with a bulky green flak jacket over it. He assumed there would be more hostility towards him considering how he was dressed, but how the two acted, it seemed common to see someone in clothing like his.
"Please state your name and business in Konoha sir." One of the guards asked the cloaked man.
The man obliged, using no hostility in his voice, so as to not put off the guards.
"my name is Revan. I have come as a…" Revan paused, thinking of an excuse to come to the village. "…tourist." He finished.
The guard nodded, as if understanding something.
"Yeah, were getting a lot of tourists on account of the celebration."His voice had a depressed and slightly guilty tone too it.
Revan was about to ask what celebration, but then he would have to give another reason for why he was touring in… Konoha was it? He would play along.
"Of course, the celebration. I've so been looking forward to it." Revan's acting was perfect. The guard didn't suspect a thing.
Revan, however, was confused when the other guard glared at him.
"Just don't hurt the boy, okay?" The guard asked, pleadingly. "He's been through so much already.:
Revan had no idea what this guard was talking about, but it intrigued him so. He would sear for the boy.
"Of course. That is not why I came. I will help the boy if I see him. Good day." Revan finished, walking toward the now open gates. As he walked by the guard, the guard said, "thank you."
As soon as Revan walked into the village, and the gates closed, an overloading feeling of dread and darkness flushed over him. Revan wondered if this was the work of one of those guards were talking about. Now he really was intrigued.
Revan spent the day in one of the many hotels of the village. He awoke in the morning, climbing out of bed. He walked to the bathroom, took off the small amount of clothing he had on, and got in the shower.
After he was done, he looked at himself in the mirror. He had long dark hair. Long bangs covered the scars on his face. His eyes were an emerald green color.
He walked out, already drying himself off with a towel, putting on the clothes he had on yesterday.
Walking downstairs, he went up to the front desk and checking out. He was about to leave when an idea came to him. He turned to the owner of the hotel.
"Can you tell me about a certain boy that everyone talks about?"
The owner glared at him. He obviously knew who he was talking about.
"We're not allowed to speak about him."
Revan wouldn't leave with just that. He moved his hand in front of the mans face.
"You will tell me what I need to know."
The man's eyes went blank. He looked to be in a trance like state.
"I will tell you what you need to know." He said without any emotion. "The boy's name is Uzumaki Naruto. He's a demon." He was going to continue but Revan cut him off.
"A demon? But isn't such a thing impossible?" Revan asked, a slight hint of surprise in his voice.
"No." The owner shook his head. "5 years ago, our village was attacked by a great demon named the Kyuubi no Kitsune." The man used a voice an old man would use telling a story to a child. "Our village leader at the time, Namikaze Minato, fought the demon. It was useless though, because a human could never kill a demon. The only way he could bet it, was to seal it into a baby boy. Naruto was that boy. He's the Kyuubi reincarnate. Today we celebrate the defeat of Kyuubi every year. Ever year Naruto is beaten by angry villagers and ninja's who lost people because of the Kyuubi."
Revan nodded. It was very informational. He would look for a large mob and join them to find this demon child. He thanked the man and left.
The owner blinked. "What the hell just happened?"
Revan waited until night for the festivities to begin. He walked around, seeing all of the shameless drunks and druggies lining the streets. He could hear some of the conversations about a certain boy. Let's just say, they weren't very nice conversations.
Revan looked on in discussed. These people were completely repulsive. They smelled of nothing but alcohol, and seemed to have no sense of mind. Revan shook his head. Force help them.
"I just saw the demon boy!" Revan's head shot around. He stared at the man pointing down an ally way. "Look, he's eating out of the trash down this alley." Other's joined the man as they all ran down the alley after the boy. Revan followed, so he could stop them. He looked down the alley. There was a small blonde boy, who must have been this demon child. The boy had a horrified look on his face and he quickly turned around and ran. He didn't get very far though, because a dead end blocked his path.
Revan watched in discussed as the people slowly approached the boy and started beating him. Some even used weapons such as a sake bottle and something that looked like a knife. He heard a villager say something along the lines of, "kunai."
Revan had seen enough. He breathed in a large intake of breath, and screamed at the top of his lungs. Three people in the back of the mob, closest to Revan, fell dead. Everyone turned around, holding their ears. The small blonde boy was in the middle, covered in blood.
Revan glared at everyone. One of the brave villagers stepped forward, glaring back.
"What do you think you're doing demon lover?" Revan felt a sense of power from the man. Probably one of this village's military forces. He still wasn't much though.
"Tell me, who is the demon here." Revan retorted. "The small 4 year old, cowering boy. Or the mob of 20 people, beating on him?"
Revan held out his hand. The man grabbed his throat and started lifting off the ground. After he got a few feet off, Revan closed his hand, and a crack was heard. The man fell down to the ground, dead.
People in the crowd screamed, not believing their eyes. The small blonde boy looked up and smiled slightly. The smile had an evil feel to it. He held out his hand to Revan. Revan noticed this and smiled a second at the boy, before turning back to the villagers and glaring.
He held out his hand again. The kunai that one of the villagers was holding started floating in the air. It turned, in front of its original owner. It plunged itself into his neck. The man gurgled at bit, before falling to his knees, then his hands, then to the ground.
Revan's other hand went up, so now both were. He spoke in a cold and emotionless voice. "Die." Lightning shot from his hands, frying the rest of the villagers.
Revan rushed over to the now unconscious Naruto. He picked him up bridal-style, and ran out of the alley. He didn't stop, eventually reaching the gates, then the forest, then his ship. He dropped the cloak, and stood in front of the ship with Naruto. He didn't go in yet…
He wasn't alone… and he wasn't talking about Naruto…
He turned feeling another presence. A man stood at the other end of the clearing, gaping at the ship. Must have never seen one.
The man himself, despite looking extremely old, had a dangerous and powerful aura around him. Revan could tell this man was someone to both fear and respect. If he got in a fight with this man now, he had no idea what the outcome would be.
The man was wearing a long white coat, with red. On the back it had a Japanese symbol. Revan learned Japanese in his academe days, just in case he had to use it in his mission. He figured the symbol said "Third". His hair was white, and his skin tan. He had a goatee, and a diamond shaped hat in his hand. He probably took it off when he saw the ship, to get a better look.
The man finally got over his shock and looked down at the man. Okay he didn't look, he glared.
"What do you want with Naruto?" The man said simply. His voice held strength, but concern for the boy at the same time.
"Freedom." Revan gave the man his answer. The man looked surprised for a split second, before going back to his glaring.
"What do you mean?" Came the man's second question.
"Why do you even care? None of those damned villagers did." Revan retorted back. Who was this man to order him around? Nobody, that's who!
"I lead those damned villagers. Yet I love Naruto as if he was my own Grandson, so whatever you do to him, concerns me." Despite Revan's cold attitude and killing intent, the old man stayed strong.
"How… Ironic." Revan chuckled darkly. He instantly sobered though, and went back to his seriousness. "I am taking the boy to train him and to give him what he could never have in this village."
Now the man looked really surprised. A question still bothered him though. "Why do you want to help him?"
Revan's nostalgia kicked in. "I see a little of myself in him. You see I wasn't really liked all too much around my peers when I was younger. They feared me, my power. Even now my foolish masters fear my strength, and so they hold me back." Revan chuckled again. "I think, that if I take Naruto as my apprentice, then I could save him. I'll give him the life he deserves, serving under me. Revan, the strongest knight the Old Republic has ever known!"
Sarutobi, the old man, was surprised by the man's sudden outburst at the end of his sentence. It slightly reminded him of Naruto every time the little boy told him about wanting to become the Hokage.
He was also surprised by what the man was offering. He was going to give Naruto everything. How could one pass up this opportunity.
There was just only one problem.
Trust.
Sarutobi did not trust this man. Sure he had seen the man save Naruto from the villagers, but this man was just too shady!
"Your offer sounds nice and all, but how can I trust you? I don't even know who you are." Sarutobi spoke, his voice disbelieving.
Revan thought over this. How could the old man trust him? Wait, he wouldn't have too! Naruto could make the decision, and then there would be no room for the old man to complain.
"Why not let Naruto decide?" Revan offered. The man seemed to think of this, before nodding.
Revan let Naruto down. In a few minutes he awoke. Naruto looked around and saw a familiar face, smiling at him.
"Hello Naruto-kun."
"Jiji!" Naruto yelled, glomping them man. They both chuckled. "Jiji, jiji. You'll never guess what happened! This strange man saved me from the mob! He had this special power that made this float, even people! And, And…!" Naruto rambled on but Sarutobi shushed him, chuckling.
"Okay, okay Naruto, that's enough. We have things to discuss." Sarutobi spoke in a stern voice. Naruto nodded and sat down. It was at this point, that he noticed the large space ship that was once behind him.
"Whoa…" He exclaimed, looking at the large flying object.
"Like it Naruto-san." Said a man's voice. Naruto turned and met the eyes… well mask, of the man that saved him.
"Ah! It's you!" Naruto exclaimed, pointing at the man.
The man chuckled and looked at Naruto. "Yes, it is me. How are you feeling?"
Naruto nodded childishly. "Fine Fine!"
"Well, that's good. Can't have my apprentice injured now can I?" The man said. Naruto's eyes widened.
"A-Apprentice?" He sounded uncertain.
"That's right Naruto-kun." Sarutobi answered for the man. "Revan here wishes to take you on as an apprentice."
Naruto's eyes shined with glee. "Does that mean I can use those cool powers that you used mister!?" He jumped up and down, begging to whatever god out there that he could learn those moves.
"Yes, that's one of the things I will be teaching you." You could feel the smile on Revan's face. He was usually a cold heartless man, but around children like Naruto, he lightened up a bit.
"YATTA!" Naruto screamed to the skies, becoming even more hyper, if that was possible. Both Revan and Sarutobi chuckled.
Sarutobi then got serious. "Naruto-kun please settle down, this is serious. You must make the decision to go or not yourself."
Naruto seemed to think about this. A question popped into his mind. "Will I be able to come back and see jiji if I go?"
Sarutobi nodded, he had been wondering that as well.
Revan looked to the left, thinking of an answer. He turned back around. "No probably not. But it might be possible."
Naruto seemed downtrodden. On one hand, he could go with the man and gain really cool powers and a new chance at life. On the other hand, he would never see jiji again.
Revan saw the sad look on Naruto's face, and tried to think of a solution. He remembered something, and let out an "Ah!" He started to dig through his cloak, both Naruto and Sarutobi looking at him strange.
He found what he was looking for and pulled out two crystal looking things. They were absolutely beautiful and shined in the moons light.
"These force crystals should let you communicate with each other. They are not tested yet, but hopefully work." Revan explained.
"Waaaa! That means I can go, right jiji!" Naruto turned to Sarutobi, who was holding one of the crystals.
Sarutobi looked over at Naruto, and nodded, smiling. He was sad that Naruto was leaving forever. But was happy that Naruto would get a second chance at life, and he could still contact him.
"Then it's all settled. Now Naruto, say your goodbyes and come with me. We should leave immediately." Revan walked to the large ship. A drop bridge opened up, and Revan stepped on.
Naruto turned to Sarutobi and gave him a long and strong hug. They finally let go and Naruto jumped onto the ship that Revan was on. As the draw bridge closed, Naruto waved to Sarutobi, a single tear drop falling from his eye.
As the ship left the planet, at high speeds, Sarutobi shook his head. He turned back to the village, stuffing the crystal into his pocket.
Naruto was in for a long and painful ride.
Well that's all everyone. Hope you all liked this. Thanks for taking the time to read. Please review. And if you see any mistakes, please let me know.
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