This is a fic written by another of my ESL students named Alexis. Hope you like it!
"THE BIRTH OF Baion"
After heroically Goku had killed the dragons of the 7 areas and the evil Baby, there was peace and serenity on planet earth, all living happily in a while because it was not presented a new threat to the planet and the universe, but... in hell Goku's enemies which were already dead began to organize a revenge against Goku and his family, they started training hard and practicing fusion techniques to become even stronger. All alike cooperated from Frieza, Cell, Kid Boo to Baby, and of course the 7 dragons of the dragon balls.
Months passed, years even until Goku's enemies finished to train and improve their techniques to remove Goku from all the face of the universe. They merged with a new technique they learned to form such a powerful being that was ruthless and was intended to kill Goku and his loved ones, this evil being called himself Baion.
The supreme Kaiosama was aware of what happened from the beginning of this new enemy plan and warned Goku. Without falling behind Goku trained hard with the Supreme Kaiosama on the Planet along with his sons Gohan and Goten, like Trunks, Vegeta and Oob.
The six Saiyans trained together to increase their skills and strength, Vegeta gave special training to have a tail like Goku to transform into Super Saiyan phase 4 without any problems and return to fuse with Goku as he had previously done.
Time passed, and the day arrived; it was feared. Baion escaped hell. It was an achievement and an accomplishment. Through their powers, Goku detected the Kii and used teleportation to reach the supreme planet.
They were all taken by surprise that Baion had appeared out of nowhere on this planet, being that they were not yet ready to face such a powerful enemy. Goku realizing the imminent danger that was Baion, decided to fight only because he was the cause of all, he was dead when they wanted not to others.
He became a Super Saiyan stage 4 and started the fight.
The others were left with arms crossed and decided to help in this fight Goku, Vegeta became Super Saiyan 4, and others except Oob who was not a Saiyan, went on to become super saiyans phase 3. All while Baion began to attack, but unfortunately it did not hurt him, they kept attacking, combining their most powerful techniques, but nonetheless managed to give a scratch to Baion.
This situation about the fight and what could happen was all frustrating and very worrying. Baion as if nothing was standing, not moving, not saying a word, and this increasingly angered Goku and his friends, but after a while this changed, Baion began attacking and left seriously injured all. The minutes passed and attempted attacks of saiyans were useless, Baion increasingly made them more damaged and were closer to the brink of death.
But Supreme Kaiosama came up with a great idea which could help in this situation. He decided to give the earrings to Goku and Vegeta so he could merge and become stronger, they also suggested that after they merged one of the earrings was passed to others so they could merge the 6 saiyajines and be able to match the situation.
And so were the 6 saiyans merged and used the name Vegito as previously in the fight against Boo had already appeared.
And so the real battle began...
(To be continued)...
So, what do you think about my student's writing skills in English? Reviews would be awesome!