Change of attitude.
WARNING READ THIS FIRST: First of all, the characters and all the elements of Naruto not belong to me, unfortunately they are property of Masashi Kishimoto, and I say unfortunately because anyone can make this story better than him.
The reason for my previous statement is because I discovered why the story of Masashi has so many plot holes, failure of character development, and most importantly, the terrible execution of story, those details will be in a section that is in the end of each episode, and I realize now that the name of this section will upset all the fans of Masashi Kishimoto but is the phrase that best serve to describe it, because the reason that ruined his own story is incredibly stupid.
Second, I am Mexican, and my native language is Spanish, and for that reason if you found problems with my orthography and grammar, please, tell me in the comments, to make the necessary corrections.
Now the review, this is a 2 story I'm doing and try to publish these two stories at the same time, this story is narusaku, and the other will be a naruhina story and recommend to fans of these couples who read 2 work even if they hate the other couple, because later you will understand that that's important.
Summary: To Sakura Haruno, Naruto Uzumaki is someone despicable, annoying and that did not deserve some attention, but one night he discovered his dark secret that hid all even own that made Naruto see the blond boy with different eyes.
Sakura Haruno was finishing grooming, and about to leave home, she had to leave quickly, because today was a great day, today was the day of graduation from the academy, and as a result she became a real kunoichi, and would be proud of their parents, and of course, she would fulfill her other goal, win the heart of the rookie of her generation, Uchiha Sasuke, "I leave," said Sakura as she left the house "be careful Sakura, we go after class to celebrate your graduation" said her mother before she started her way to the ninja academy.
Sakura come to the academy, she started her day with tradition she had with all the girls, fight for the privilege of sitting beside Sasuke, for her competition between fangirls really the only one that was a real threat was his best friend before, Yamanaka Ino, heiress of Yamanaka clan, who always maintained a fierce fight almost daily, "GET OUT OF MY WAY PIG" "TAKE OFF YOU, SASUKE IS MINE BILLBOARD BROW" were words that regularly echoed in the classroom, Sakura tried to win the seat next to the last Uchiha, but that ended when reached Iruka and Mizuki-sensei, and for the misfortune of the fangirls, the noise attracted the attention of both sensei, "Sakura, Ino, please go look to sit, but none can sit next to Sasuke," Iruka said, with a face that was noted that this was nothing new, and for him, the best punishment for fangirls, was taking away the possibility of sitting next to Sasuke, both had to resign, and obey, and both sought another seat, Ino ended up sitting next to the heirs of the Nara and the Akimichi clan. But to her bad luck, the only seat that found Sakura was really in her opinion, the last person she wanted to be, Uzumaki Naruto, the pariah of the village, the class clown, and in her personal opinion, the most annoying person she ever know.
Resigned, Sakura sat next to Naruto, and as she expected, Naruto approached her. "Hello Sakura-chan, are you ready for the graduation exam, maybe you and I could go to celebrate in Ichiraku when we give our hitai-ate, I invite" Naruto was telling Sakura with a big goofy smile. Sakura didn't understand what was wrong with Naruto, from her point of view, he was an idiot, someone who didn't deserve some attention, he was annoying, besides, she felt disturbed he ever showed that goofy smile, she didn't understand why he smiled so much, but she thought is disturbing, plus he had a bad reputation as a prankster, the most recognized of his pranks was the yesterday prank, no one knew how, but Naruto managed to paint all the Hokage Monument. she liked Naruto´s pranks, but she would never admit it, after all Sakura had a reputation to maintain.
She also regarded Naruto as a nuisance by a simple reason, she has a crush with the rookie of the year, Uchiha Sasuke, for her, Sasuke was perfect, strong, smart, handsome, and of course, the last survivor of the prestigious Uchiha clan. he was just the one that was perfect for her to become her boyfriend, but Naruto insisted again and again her out on a date, which made her angry, not just because she didn't want to be with him, but because however much she refused, he didn't seem to stop insisting on the subject, her mother told her several times that didn't relate to him in any way and to stay away from him, and she obeyed, especially by the annoying personality he has. "AS IF I WERE TO GO OUT WITH YOU IDIOT" Sakura yelled back as she gave him a blow on the head, causing him to crash to the desktop.
"Okay class, today we begin the graduation exam to become a ninja, so to hear their names, please go to the graduation test, the necessary techniques to graduate this year are the "henge" the "Kawarimi no jutsu" and "bunshin no jutsu." Listening to say this, Naruto was pulling the hair, and very concerned 'damn, the "bunshin" is my worst technique' thought Naruto.
After completing her test, Sakura was happy to receive your hitai-ate, she had no problem, and she had no doubt that had the highest rating among the aspiring class kunoichis went out, she tried to get closer to Sasuke but she just finished entering the fierce fight with the other Fangirls.
Sakura after school saw all celebrate their graduation, her parents were happy that she was now a kunoichi of Konoha, as she watched as her mother spoke with her father from the excitement of graduation, she heard the murmurs of the other parents. "You saw that guy" "Yes, is "that" guy, and he was the only one who didn't graduate" "Good, it's better this way, he can't be a ninja. he it is the..." "We can't say it" listen Sakura among many parents, following the sight of women talking, she saw Naruto hanging swing, with a sad expression on his face 'I agree with these women, he is a good for nothing and he did not become a ninja, he is a loser, I don't understand why he entered the ninja academy to begin with, but... What they can't say about that idiot?' Sakura thought with a little curiosity, but this curiosity ended when her mother called to go to celebrate.
After the celebration that lasted until sunset, Sakura and her parents were on their way home, but Sakura suddenly stopped "I forget a book at the academy, I'll go for it, be right back," Sakura said as she ran to the school, hoping not to get in trouble.
When Sakura arrived at the room, and picked up the book to leave on the desk, she decided to walk to the back exit to take a shortcut, but before leaving the yard, she remained hidden because she saw Naruto in the yard still sitting on the swing, the last thing she wanted was to ruin this day with Naruto requests or a date, 'goddamned, i have to wait until he leave' 'Why that jerk still here, he doesn't understand that he is a failure as a ninja, shannaro' she thought and her bizarre alter-ego, but then she saw that Naruto was crying. which was unusual in him, when Sakura saw Naruto, she saw him with a goofy smile, now she saw a side of Naruto had never seen before, 'it's strange, I had never seen Naruto act that way' thought feeling a little sorry for him 'it doesn't change the fact that he is an idiot' inner Sakura thought.
She waited for Naruto to go, but then Mizuki appeared, "Naruto" "Mizuki-sensei" they said to each other "I know you're sad because you failed the exam, but you have to understand that Iruka is a serious person, his parents were killed when He was young, and he had to take care of yourself," Mizuki said to Naruto in a pleasant tone "then because he rages with me?" said Naruto sadly 'cause you're an idiot, now get out of here I have to go home' inner Sakura said "probably because he sees himself in you," said Mizuki who left surprised both Naruto and Sakura who was still hidden "sure he wants you to become stronger, and try to understand you, and you don't have parents too" Mizuki said, making Naruto lowered his head, "I should have approved" Naruto said still disappointed "then let me tell you a secret," Mizuki said making Naruto and Sakura put so much attention, "there is a secret test to become genin its not in the academy," said Mizuki while it did show a smile to Naruto and Sakura put more attention, Sakura did not need to be a genius to know that Mizuki was lying, if such test existed, then why it would be secret? "Really Mizuki-sensei, what do I do?" Naruto said excitedly "the test consist in go at night to the Hokage mansion, get the large scroll that is in his office, and bring to training field number 2 where I'll see you at midnight. if you learn one of the jutsus on the scroll, you'll pass the test," said Mizuki to a excited Naruto "then prepared my hitai-ate because I will pass, and I will become a ninja-tebbayo" said Naruto as he left to start the "test." When he was out of sight, Mizuki started laughing "HAHAHAHA, he easily fell into my lie, tonight I'll go to the village with the forbidden scroll. Orochimaru-sama will be very happy about this," said Mizuki without knowing there was a third person present listening. Sakura hated Naruto, that was a fact, but even she understood that Naruto was being manipulated to unknowingly commit an act of treason, even for her, the play of Mizuki was disgusting 'I have to tell immediately Iruka-sensei 'she thought and silently fleeing the place.
Sakura scampered off to find Iruka, she sought for almost the entire village until he found Iruka walking down the street 'maybe I was too rough with Naruto,' Iruka thought as he continued walking, "IRUKA-SENSEI," Sakura shouted making Iruka stopped his walk "what happens Sakura?" asked Iruka, Sakura told him all that Mizuki told Naruto and the instructions given to him "we have to go tell the Hokage immediately" Iruka and Sakura were direct Hokage's mansion to tell, but when they arrived they found the Hokage lying on the ground unconscious and bleeding from the nose with a dumb smile on his face, "we are late, Naruto took the scroll" Iruka said as he tried to revive the Hokage.
When the Hokage woke Sakura told him all she hear the conversation between Naruto and Mizuki, and the words he heard after Naruto retired, and the Hokage was concerned when he heard the name of Orochimaru "well, Iruka, you will go to find Naruto and explain everything that is happening here, I send some ANBU to find Mizuki before he meets with Naruto, Sakura, you don't say anything about what you just told us at not until this is over. Dismiss, "said the Hokage while Iruka went to look for Naruto and Sakura went way home.
As she walked through the streets of Konoha, she just felt something was wrong. with the cryptic words that villagers said about Naruto, and that she saw him cry, made her feel that she didn't know some of Naruto, something important, that made her walk stop 'Why do I care about him? He's an idiot,' thought the inner Sakura 'but there's something wrong, Why so much secrecy about Naruto? Why all the hate? I mean, yeah, he's a prankster, but that's not enough reason to hate him so much,' Sakura thought, she decided to stop "maybe Naruto is an idiot, but he shouldn't be convicted of something he didn't commit" Sakura said as she headed to training field 2.
When Sakura arrived at the field, she came only to see Mizuki had already arrived at the scene, she saw Iruka wounded and even with kunais stuck in your body, and in the middle, holding a huge parchment Naruto, "Naruto, under any circumstances give the forbidden scroll even if it means your death," Iruka shouted "oh, Iruka, I don't know how you knew, but that doesn't matter anymore, I'll just take the scroll and go, but before that, I'll tell Naruto the truth," Mizuki said with a smile that made Iruka understand what he meant, "DON'T YOU DARE!" Iruka cry, but it was obvious that Iruka would ignore "for 12 years, has been a law, but we were forbidden to tell you" Mizuki said "tell me, tell me what?" asked Naruto "tell you that you are the Kyubi that attacked the village 12 years ago," said Mizuki while enjoying the look of horror on the face of Naruto, "What are you talking about?" he said Naruto completely scared of Mizuki's words, "what you hear, you're the Kyubi 12 years ago destroyed the village, you were sealed for the fourth Hokage" Mizuki was saying happy to see the expression on Naruto's face. however, a noise that came from the nearby bushes interrupted the happiness, the 3 saw Sakura fell from the bushes showing the same expression of surprise that Naruto had.
Sakura take advantage of the fact that Mizuki didn't know she was there, so she thought attack when he lowered his guard. "Oh, Iruka do not know how you figured it out, but that does not matter now, I'll just take the scroll and go, but before that, I'll tell the truth to Naruto," 'truth? Which truth?' "DON'T YOU DARE" Iruka cry, leaving Sakura surprised, 'What is the truth that they are talking about?' "For 12 years, has been a law, but we were forbidden to tell you" Mizuki said "tell me, Tell me what?" asked Naruto "you're the Kyubi that attacked the village 12 years ago" Sakura wanted to scream when she heard that, but she knew it she does, she would ruin the element surprise, so only just kept listening, "What are you talking about?" Naruto and Sakura hear sounded scared, "what you hear, you're the Kyubi that 12 years ago destroyed the village, you were sealed for the fourth Hokage" Mizuki said. Sakura began to see how it all made sense now, the glares of the villagers, why her mother told her to stay away from him, everything started to make sense, now she would try to stop Mizuki, and would deal with the matter of Naruto later. She would move from her position, taking advantage of Mizuki was distracted, but to take the first step, Sakura tripped over a branch and she ended up falling out of the bushes, ruining her hiding place, her element surprise, and the possibility that she help Iruka.
Mizuki for a moment he was worried that the Anbus others have found, but that concern disappeared when he saw who was "ah, for a moment I thought I was in trouble, but it's not," said Mizuki happy to see it was just Sakura .
Sakura didn't know what to do, she lost the element surprise, she had no chance against Mizuki, he was a chunin, and she was a genin now graduated from the academy, she knew she had no chance, "Well, enough talk, It is time to end this," Mizuki said as he pulled the first large shuriken on his back, "You see Naruto, all hate you, no one will come to help you," said Mizuki as he turned the shuriken in hand ready to throw, and greater concern Iruka and Sakura looked like Naruto began to surround a strange energy, 'then what Mizuki said is the truth' Sakura thought. Mizuki seeing that he had to finish quickly throw the shuriken against Naruto, Sakura expected to see Naruto murdered by Mizuki, but instead she saw Iruka took the attack on her back, Sakura was surprised the action of her sensei 'Why he protected Naruto?' thought Sakura as she watched Iruka began to spit blood "are you okay Naruto?" Iruka said "Why protected me Iruka Sensei?" Naruto asked surprised "because you went through what I pass" said Iruka surprising both Naruto and Sakura "like you Naruto I was an orphan, and not having anyone who was beside me, was all alone, for that reason like you, I became the class clown to call attention and let people see me, I know you try to smile all the time, but I know you're hiding inside a great pain for being alone, because they have no parents, no friends, I know what that feels... you should having suffered so much, I'm sorry Naruto, I should have done a better job" Iruka said as he began to cry.
Sakura with each passing minute, she felt she knew less about Naruto, if Iruka said was true, Naruto has never had anything that could be called a happy life, 'How come you can keep smiling despite having suffered so much?' Sakura thought seeing with new eyes the class clown. Naruto didn't know what to do, so he decided to flee the scene with the scroll as fast as he could, Mizuki went to Iruka as he tried to get up, "I'm sorry, but Naruto is not one of those who change their minds easily, he will use the scroll to get back at the village, I had seen those eyes before, these are the eyes of a demon "Mizuki said as he approached Sakura, in an attempt to defeat Mizuki, she tried to hit him when he was near but the attempt was in vain, quickly caught her hand, put it on her back and tied her hands with ninja cable. Mizuki would take her with him in search of Naruto, when he left, Iruka removed the shuriken back moaning in pain "ha, ha, Naruto is not as you say, Mizuki".
Mizuki was happy that he was close to getting the power he wanted, but more importantly, he had a hostage who could use if he was persecuted, Sakura in an attempt to free herself, she tried to kick Mizuki failing miserably, but Mizuki replied hitting her in the face, "You know, I know you're no problem, can you be the best kunoichi of the class, but that's just because the council change the rules, exploiting the desperation after Kyuubi attack, they reduced test standards graduation from the academy so we could quickly increase the number of ninjas in the village, if they had remained exams at regular standards, more than half of the class had failed, you included, you just could approve because you were smart, but if you had done physical examinations they withdrew, definitely you had failed, and you would not have been a kunoichi. Even better, it's fortunate that among the techniques required for graduation include worst Naruto's technique, which is even one of the simplest, that was the reason why he couldn't become a ninja, "said Mizuki while a frightened Sakura is listening, and felt Naruto and she had been deceived. if what Mizuki said was true, she didn't deserve the hitai-ate, 'Really pathetic am I?' was her last thought before being hit by Mizuki, which left her unconscious.
Naruto was jumping through the trees, and behind him appeared Iruka chasing Mizuki tied hands and feet, and mouth covered, "Naruto, I already capture Mizuki, now give me the scroll, we have to go with the Hokage" Iruka said Naruto, who stopped his escape, only to ram Iruka and rescue Mizuki, when he fell to the ground, Naruto became a hand seal "KAI" he said, with that, the genjutsu that was set in Sakura was deactivated, just time for her to wake up, "you know, used to Sakura so she looked like you was a dirty trick" Naruto said as "Iruka" was wrapped in a cloud of smoke revealing Mizuki, "How did you know I wasn't Iruka?" Mizuki said, to what "Naruto" also wrapped in a cloud of smoke, "because I'm Iruka." Iruka said with a smile on his face "I see," Mizuki said with a grin.
Sakura saw a wounded Iruka and Mizuki a smiling, still frightened by the events that even her mind tried to process, were too much excitement for one night, and despite being free, she was paralyzed by fear, she could do nothing while Mizuki approached, "you became the murderer of your parents to protect him" Mizuki said "I will not let an idiot like you get that scroll" Iruka said "you are the idiot, Naruto and I are similar," said Mizuki in a mocking tone, "similar?" "if you use what is in the scroll, you'll do whatever you want, there is no way that this fox don't try to use the power of the scrolls, you have to admit even if you don't like," Mizuki said acting as if he had victory in their hands, "yes" Iruka said.
What 3 didn't know is that Naruto was hiding in a nearby tree, listening to the conversation, 'I knew, even Iruka sensei supported him, nobody trusts me' thought Naruto sad and resigned "the Kyuubi would, but Naruto is different, he is my friend, and one of my students," said Iruka surprising Sakura, and Naruto was still hidden, "I had a conversation today with the Hokage, about Naruto, he explained me the difference between him and the Kyuubi, both are two completely different things, Naruto is just Kyuubi's prison, Naruto keeps it at bay, the last will of the Fourth Hokage, was that people saw him as a hero to keep locked up Kyuubi, but by the prejudice of the villagers, he had to suffer loneliness and discrimination of all, however, he gave himself the goal of becoming Hokage, so he was respected by the people, maybe he isn't the smartest or the strongest, but he hasn't given up, he isn't the Kyuubi, he is a citizen of Konoha" Iruka so said Naruto He began to cry for happiness, knowing that someone was defending him.
Sakura cried too, but by guilt that she was beginning to feel, to hear that from Iruka made her feel for the first time in her life as a fucking bitch, the village had to respect Naruto as the last will of the Fourth Hokage, but instead he only met rejection and discrimination. and what made her feel most guilty was that she only contributed to that abuse, she wanted to find in her memory a moment that she has been kind to Naruto, but only made her feel worse because only she remembered yelling, insulted and belittled. even worse, as she had in her memories biggest memory was beating him to make it go away, especially when he asked her out, it was almost daily 'a simple "no" would have sufficed, but no! I had to treat him like crap, why I didn't mention about Hinata? is obvious that she has feelings for Naruto, in the end I think Hinata was the smartest person in the village' thought Sakura 'I can't believe the damage he did to an innocent boy, what have I done?' said inner Sakura who did she finally burst into tears, she felt it was not only unfit to be called kunoichi herself, but it was not suitable to call herself a human being.
"Well, enough talk, I just need to use a hostage in my escape, and Sakura will serve me better than you" Mizuki said as he pulled the last shuriken in her back, starting to spin it in his hand, "Now die, Iruka" Mizuki screamed as he dangerously close to Iruka. Iruka tried to move but his injury didn't allow him to move, and Sakura was paralyzed with fear and she could do nothing, but before Mizuki could deliver the coup de grace, Naruto came out of hiding, and landed a kick to Mizuki's jaw, causing the shuriken let go and crashed into a tree, "Don't go near Iruka-sensei or Sakura-chan or I'll kill you!" Naruto said seriously, leaving surprised to Iruka and Sakura, "Naruto, Why did you come here? RUN!" Iruka said worried, while Mizuki rose "you shouldn't have done that, Iruka could not defeat me, do you think you can? You will not last even a single blow," Mizuki said mockingly, "then I'll beat you a thousand times" Naruto said while making a seal of hands "Kage Bunshin no Jutsu." Naruto scream and a huge cloud of smoke appeared, when it cleared, hundreds of Narutos appeared around him, that vision made Mizuki started to panic, and Sakura and Iruka were surprised, "ATTACK!" shouted all Narutos in unison as they approached Mizuki as he gave a beating, and Mizuki screamed like a pussy.
After the beating, Mizuki was completely unconscious, "heh heh, I think I've spent a little" Naruto said as he scratched back of the head, "Naruto, how could you do the "Bunshin no jutsu"?" Asked surprised Sakura, "it is that that was not the "bunshin no jutsu," that was the "Kage Bunshin no jutsu," unlike the "bunshin no jutsu" these clones are not illusions, these are solid clones and can fight with them, but the technique requires much more chakra," said Iruka feeling proud, "Naruto, come here, I want to give you something," Iruka told Naruto, who approached him, "Naruto, wait," said Sakura. Sakura understood what Iruka wants to give Naruto, and she took the hitai-ate that she had in her pocket, and went to Naruto, "Here, you deserve it more than me," Sakura said as she explained what Mizuki told her while she was kidnapped "and after all I've been through, I realized that I am no good to be a kunoichi, and you worked hard to take this, take it," said Sakura. 'I have much to be corrected with Naruto, and this is something that he deserves more than me,' thought Sakura as she watched Naruto approached her and instead of taking the hitai-ate, he would move closer to Sakura, "Sakura, you strove to become a kunoichi, you won your hitai-ate, don't you dare and throw like that, that's yours, I will return to the academy, and I'll try next year, after all, now I have a great new jutsu with that I can graduate next year, tebbayo" Naruto said as he kept his smile, which made Sakura begin to cry "* sob * How * sob * how come you keep smiling * sob * even in a situation like this?" Sakura said between sobs, "long time ago I realized that cry and running is useless," Naruto head down a bit, but Naruto quickly began to hear the cries of Sakura sounded more strong, "I * sob * I'm * sob * I'm sorry I * sob * mistreated all these years * sob * I was a fool," said Sakura releasing her guilt she felt at the time, "Don't worry Sakura-chan, I forgive you" Naruto said putting a hand on her shoulder while Sakura was still crying, "Well, now I have to try to graduate next year," said Naruto sad, "you don't need to wait, Naruto," Iruka said removing googles and putting his hitai-ate in front of Naruto, "Naruto congratulations, for your graduation" Naruto said while Iruka let out a huge smile while hugging Iruka despite being hurt, as the sun rose behind them.
After recovering a bit, Iruka charge Mizuki bound hand and foot, 3 returned to the village to get to the Hokage tower, and outside his office, Sakura's parents were notoriously preoccupied, seeing Sakura entering with Naruto, her mother came to hug Sakura, pulling Naruto aside, "Sakura, you had us worried, did he made you something?" said Mebuki glaring at Naruto, "I told you to stay away from him Sakura, he just means trouble, now I understand why not come back ..." "Mom! stop," Sakura said suddenly cutting the words of her mother, "Mom, never again insult Naruto like that!" said Sakura as she extended her hand to help Naruto, leaving his mother scared" Sakura, that guy..." "He was the one who rescued me mom, Mizuki tricked Naruto and I heard what he was up, ask the Hokage, I told him everything I heard," said serious Sakura, seriously looking at her mother, Mebuki looked at Iruka , trying to ask him to help her, "you'd better wait till I finish giving the report, Sakura, wait here, Naruto come with me," Iruka said opening the office door and entered with Naruto.
After a while, Iruka and Naruto left the office, Naruto left the office, Iruka went after him and talk to Sakura and their parents, "let's go Naruto, I'll take you to eat ramen, I invite" said Iruka, what made Naruto began to jump for joy, but he stopped and approached the Haruno family, and before he went out the Hokage's tower, Naruto near to Sakura "Sakura-chan, do you want to go with us?" Naruto said with a smile. Sakura until yesterday, didn't understand why that annoying insistence ask her for a date, but now she knew why. she didn't reject the way she did regularly to him, "Okay Naruto, but will not be a date! I'm still in love with Sasuke-kun, we go as friends, okay? "Said Sakura, to which Naruto smiled" okay Sakura." 'Well, it's a start' thought Naruto, happy that at least Sakura was accepting an invitation to something.
Upon entering the office of Hokage, Hiruzen told them what happened to Sakura's parents, including the fact that Mizuki broke his law, and told Naruto and Sakura about Kyuubi, before he could continue, Mebuki interrupted "if Sakura knows, then why Sakura is approaching that demon?" Sakiri was cut by Hiruzen's KI, "better take care what you say Mrs. Haruno" said the Hokage showing why he was the Hokage. "Mom, Naruto isn't the Kyubi. Iruka-sensei told me the difference between Naruto and Kyuubi, and I know that he isn't the Kyuubi, mom, never again say so, or I will not direct the word again," Sakura said her mother, after interruption, Hiruzen finished telling the events leaving terrified to Mebuki. when he mentioned that Iruka decided to approve Naruto as a ninja, which almost caused her a panic attack, which would have made her scream again, if not for the threat of his daughter was still present, "Sakura, now you know about the Kyuubi, you should know that's a S class secret punishable by death, so you must keep the events of the previous night in secret, okay Sakura?" said Hiruzen looking at Sakura, "Yes, Hokage-sama" Sakura said "well, you can dimiss," said the Haruno family Hiruzen while leaving his office.
Outside the building, Naruto and Iruka were waiting, she leave of her parents, Sakura began to accompany the 2 to your destination, but then, one last question hovered over his head "Naruto, why only you go to that restaurant? Having many in the village" Sakura asked, "because it is the only restaurant in the village which not kick me, and treat me well, until yesterday I didn't know why he always threw me, not only restaurants but all the shops, or they gave the worst merchandise and overpriced" answered Naruto, Sakura, could not avoid seeing the villagers looking at Naruto with hatred in their eyes, 'we did a lot of damage to Naruto for something he had no control, I have to change my attitude toward him. I will not be his girlfriend, but at least I'll be your friend' thought Sakura as they went to their destination.
Before you read this part, as I said earlier, the title will hate you, and please read before criticizing, because the title is certainly to misunderstand.
Masashi is an asshole, chapter 1: 666 Satan.
Before you comment. NO, I will not say that Masashi is Satan's son, a Satanist, or that their story is made by the devil's influence, the name of this chapter because it is the reason that Masashi Kishimoto ruined his own story, You see, 666 Satan believe it or not, it's the title of a manga (known in some parts of the world as 'O-parts hunter' for very obvious reasons), and most interesting is his author, Seishi Kishimoto.
To start with the obvious questions, Seishi Kishimoto? Is he a relative of Masashi Kishimoto? Yes, he is the brother of Masashi Kishimoto, more specifically, his twin brother, also mangaka and 666 Satan is one of his works, and the reason that Masashi do misuse their history and surprisingly, the reason why his story is flawed, and most importantly, the reason why this section has the title Masashi is an asshole. I mention this work because in this manga, you discover the problem of Naruto, and the reason is because in principle, Naruto & 666 Satan are the same story, different ideas, different base elements, different characters, but in the most basic, is the same story. so much so that I can tell both stories with a single review:
The story is about a child who is an orphan and is treated as an outcast (Naruto Uzumaki/Jio Freed), he does not know because it is treated that way, but that does not stop him and help that child to forge a goal (to be Hokage/conquer the world), the reason he is treated as an outcast is because he has a powerful creature sealed within him (Kyubi/Satan) that everyone afraid, to advance the story he starts make friends and people gradually beginning to recognize its existence, one of his friends for wanting to complete a vengeance wants to kill him (Sasuke Uchiha/Jin), and another knew him as a psychopath (Gaara/Cross) and then became his friend . But this guy has to fight against an organization (Akatsuki/Stea and Zenom) have a secret but evil goal, but to get that goal need to catch some creatures (bijus/Angels & Demons) that are trapped in certain people (jinchurikis/gensekis) that they serve as containers of these creatures, and must enclose them in a special container (Gedou Mazu/Kabbalah and qliphoth), and interestingly the most powerful creature of all is locked inside the protagonist.
In the most basic form, with one review, I explain both jobs, and I start this chapter explaining the only noticeable differences between the 2 series, in the case of Naruto, it isn't necessary to explain the basic elements of the story because all by this time you already know (jutsu, elemental continent, villages, Akatsuki, the Bijus, etc.) I will highlight only the point that it is completely based on Japanese folklore. Now, 666 Satan in this story, events are not held on a continent but an entire planet, and on this planet there are devices called O-parts, which give extraordinary abilities to those who use them, but not everyone can use the O-parts, only certain special people have the necessary powers to use them, and these people are called O-parts tactics, or by the abbreviation OPTS, and in this story, there are not one but two organizations that want to gather 10 angels and 10 demons, gathered in special containers, the Kabbalah and qliphoth (in this story, Seishi called reverse Kabbalah, but I'll use real name and if you do not believe me look it that name exists, search in Google) and getting them all, leaders of the organizations will make their dreams come true.
If you wonder why the similarity in the stories, I have a theory about this, you see, I think the reason is the same story, it's because Masashi and Seishi, originally wanted to do a manga together, but when they had the basic elements the script done, they fought because both had their own ideas and items to use within the script, and because both not reached an agreement, Masashi and Seishi did their own stories on their own, I say this because the argument of plagiarism is unsustainable, Naruto began publication in 1999, and 666 Satan began in 2001, but 666 Satan end publication in 2007 while Naruto ended its publication in 2014 (I'm not counting the gaiden for reasons I'll explain later) and both stories have too many similarities.
Now why nobody noticed this? Well the answer is simple, Seishi's Manga is little known, to have an idea, if you seek the 666 Satan fan fictions (look for it on this page with the name of O-parts hunter) you will find less than 30 fan fictions. Just that says that this story is almost unknown.
With that in mind I will destroy the first argument of the fans who want to explain why Masashi did wrong their story, and replace it with my argument that will see more and more plausible as you progress through the comparison of the stories, and is, Masashi Kishimoto ruin your story because he prostitute his work (making merchandise, movies, video games, etc.) on the contrary, Masashi ruined his job because he didn't prostitute, Masashi sadly don't change anything about the story, and when he did, he did because the fans would give him a negative review, not because he realized that he was wrong, and the few changes he made to the script were made at a point where instead of creating positive change for the story, only created a forced and terrible plot twist, many of the plot points he had for the story, put them before time, or after time, making fans, wishing that certain events happen in the story and that Masashi had not even intended to put in first place.
If you want to counter-argue what I'm writing, please seek Seishi's Manga, and read it, especially because at the end of each episode of this fan fiction (I will explain the similarities between Naruto and 666 Satan) I'll spoil Seishi's story for you to see these things in common, in fact I made a video about it on YouTube and the video is called "el final de Naruto 666 Satan," (it's in Spanish and I don't complete the English subtitles) in fact I did before I left the chapter 694 of Naruto's manga, and I will say this, that video is a resume of the similarities between the stories, and lasts 46 minutes.
