Going Under
B(black)R(rose): Hey everybody, this is my first fic so please be nice when you review but
I am open to all suggestions. If you have any please say so. I hope that the song I chose
fits, (I think it does) the song is called "going under" (thus the title) by Evanescence.
"Conversation"
'thoughts'
//song lyrics//
Ryou-good
Bakura-bad
Chapter One: A Violent Prison
//Now I will tell you what I've done for you
50 thousand tears I've cried
Screaming deceiving and bleeding for you
And you still won't hear me//
'He beats me, he lies to me, he controls me but I still love him. Not matter how hard I try
to push him out of my mind I can't he is my other half, he is my love. He will never hear
me I would never tell him, I can't. I don't know how much he would hit me, I don't know
if he would be able to stop. I won't tell him.' A poor, shattered and beaten Ryou lay on his
bloodstained bed, in his darkened room. Ever since Ryou had found that ring his life had
been nothing but pain. He had not known true happiness since. Bakura, the spirit of the
ring has beaten a defenseless Ryou. In-fact there is rarely a day that goes by that Bakura
has not beaten Ryou. The only time that Ryou is truly safe is when his father is home and
even that only keeps Bakura from hurting Ryou physically. Bakura still prays on Ryou's
mind. Bakura lies and makes Ryou un-trust himself. Ryou's thoughts were interrupted by
an alarming ring. "Agh!" Ryou's tattered body screamed in pain. Ryou reached over and
slowly picked up the phone afraid of who is on the other end. "Hello" Ryou asked.
"Hey, Ryou? It's me Joey."
"Hi Joey"
"Ryou!" An angry Bakura interrupted the two friends phone call. "Ryou, what
have I told you about using the phone? You can only use it with my permission and with
me on the other phone. Give me the phone!" Bakura snatched the phone out of Ryou's
weak hand.
"Hello?" Joey called from the other line.
"Joey?" Bakura questioned.
"Yeah it's me, is this Bakura?"
"Ryou can't talk right now he is sick." That was a lie Ryou was not sick. Ryou
was never sick like Bakura often stated. There was a small silence when Joey questioned
Bakura and then Bakura mumbled an entire conversation to Joey on the phone, but
Ryou's ringing ears could not hear what he said.
"Oh, well I'll call him sometime later then."
Bakura slammed down the phone, obviously furious at Ryou. "What so you think
you were doing? Are you trying to piss me off? Because if you are..."
Ryou cringed at the thought; he never wanted to make Bakura mad. His body
ached at the thought. "No" Ryou mumbled "I would never..."
"Don't blabber on you sappy child. You know that I hate that" Bakura interrupted.
"I'm sorry" Ryou murmured.
"You worthless little rat, don't try and get me to pity you. No one ever will. I'm all
you have don't you understand? That was Joey calling to say that you two are no longer
friends. He said that he can't have a weak friend like you, he said that when you're at his
duels. You keep him from dueling his best because he said that he needs to 'keep and eye
on you', he is right you need to be watched. You can't be left alone. If it weren't for me
you probably would be dead by now. Don't you see? Without me you are nothing. You
have no one."
The small Ryou stared blankly in shock at the things Bakura just said about his
friend. 'Is it true? Am I really holding Joey back? When Bakura gave me Yugi's letter,
Yugi said the same thing. Maybe it really is true. Maybe I am too weak and really do need
someone to depend on. No it can't be true!' "You lie!" The small child produced such a
loud voice that it rattled not only the mirror but Bakura as well. Bakura was shocked at
the small child's outburst; he immediately turned to face Ryou. Ryou soon realized the
mistake in his protest.
"How dare you! I am all you have, I look after you and care for you and this is
how you repay me?!?" Bakura raised his anger-shaken fist and swung it at a small and
terrified Ryou.
//Tormented daily defeated by you
Just when I thought I'd reached the bottom
I'm dying again
I'm going under
Drowning in you//
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BR: I'm really sorry that its so short but I just wanted to get something posted, I'll update depending on how many reviews I get. If not many people like it I don't know if I'll keep updating.
B(black)R(rose): Hey everybody, this is my first fic so please be nice when you review but
I am open to all suggestions. If you have any please say so. I hope that the song I chose
fits, (I think it does) the song is called "going under" (thus the title) by Evanescence.
"Conversation"
'thoughts'
//song lyrics//
Ryou-good
Bakura-bad
Chapter One: A Violent Prison
//Now I will tell you what I've done for you
50 thousand tears I've cried
Screaming deceiving and bleeding for you
And you still won't hear me//
'He beats me, he lies to me, he controls me but I still love him. Not matter how hard I try
to push him out of my mind I can't he is my other half, he is my love. He will never hear
me I would never tell him, I can't. I don't know how much he would hit me, I don't know
if he would be able to stop. I won't tell him.' A poor, shattered and beaten Ryou lay on his
bloodstained bed, in his darkened room. Ever since Ryou had found that ring his life had
been nothing but pain. He had not known true happiness since. Bakura, the spirit of the
ring has beaten a defenseless Ryou. In-fact there is rarely a day that goes by that Bakura
has not beaten Ryou. The only time that Ryou is truly safe is when his father is home and
even that only keeps Bakura from hurting Ryou physically. Bakura still prays on Ryou's
mind. Bakura lies and makes Ryou un-trust himself. Ryou's thoughts were interrupted by
an alarming ring. "Agh!" Ryou's tattered body screamed in pain. Ryou reached over and
slowly picked up the phone afraid of who is on the other end. "Hello" Ryou asked.
"Hey, Ryou? It's me Joey."
"Hi Joey"
"Ryou!" An angry Bakura interrupted the two friends phone call. "Ryou, what
have I told you about using the phone? You can only use it with my permission and with
me on the other phone. Give me the phone!" Bakura snatched the phone out of Ryou's
weak hand.
"Hello?" Joey called from the other line.
"Joey?" Bakura questioned.
"Yeah it's me, is this Bakura?"
"Ryou can't talk right now he is sick." That was a lie Ryou was not sick. Ryou
was never sick like Bakura often stated. There was a small silence when Joey questioned
Bakura and then Bakura mumbled an entire conversation to Joey on the phone, but
Ryou's ringing ears could not hear what he said.
"Oh, well I'll call him sometime later then."
Bakura slammed down the phone, obviously furious at Ryou. "What so you think
you were doing? Are you trying to piss me off? Because if you are..."
Ryou cringed at the thought; he never wanted to make Bakura mad. His body
ached at the thought. "No" Ryou mumbled "I would never..."
"Don't blabber on you sappy child. You know that I hate that" Bakura interrupted.
"I'm sorry" Ryou murmured.
"You worthless little rat, don't try and get me to pity you. No one ever will. I'm all
you have don't you understand? That was Joey calling to say that you two are no longer
friends. He said that he can't have a weak friend like you, he said that when you're at his
duels. You keep him from dueling his best because he said that he needs to 'keep and eye
on you', he is right you need to be watched. You can't be left alone. If it weren't for me
you probably would be dead by now. Don't you see? Without me you are nothing. You
have no one."
The small Ryou stared blankly in shock at the things Bakura just said about his
friend. 'Is it true? Am I really holding Joey back? When Bakura gave me Yugi's letter,
Yugi said the same thing. Maybe it really is true. Maybe I am too weak and really do need
someone to depend on. No it can't be true!' "You lie!" The small child produced such a
loud voice that it rattled not only the mirror but Bakura as well. Bakura was shocked at
the small child's outburst; he immediately turned to face Ryou. Ryou soon realized the
mistake in his protest.
"How dare you! I am all you have, I look after you and care for you and this is
how you repay me?!?" Bakura raised his anger-shaken fist and swung it at a small and
terrified Ryou.
//Tormented daily defeated by you
Just when I thought I'd reached the bottom
I'm dying again
I'm going under
Drowning in you//
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BR: I'm really sorry that its so short but I just wanted to get something posted, I'll update depending on how many reviews I get. If not many people like it I don't know if I'll keep updating.