This is my first gravity falls story so tell me what you think

it was an ok day in gravity falls it was warm but

cold like the calm before the storm dipper staring at

wendy wendy pertending not to notice mabel

bedaziling waddles stan counting his money soos eating some chips wendy then asks the mystery twins if they want to go camping with nate tambery robbie tomson and lee mabel said she had a sleep

over with candy and grenda dipper the love sick

puppy replies doctor fun times will be there and gos to pack he packs a flash light snacks a tent and of

course the journle after finishing he gos down and gets in tomsons car and drive to the campsite and

set up the tents and fire pit a few hours latter there all siting around the fire talking while dipper reads number 3 robbie takes the book and says hahaha

shrimp what you gonna do dipper responds in a

stange langue semong emoc ot em evas eht koob

and out pops 20 gnomes 10 gnomes takle him 10

get the book dipper says thanks jeff and kicks

robbie dont touch the book not after last time and

prouceds to tell them when robbie last took the

book he gave his soul to save the group before him

robbie summoned the local legond the thin one the would have been fine if he hadnt insalted it there all amazed that the shy kid before them sold his soul to save them from robbie blunder dipper then tells

them to look on the bright side wendy interopes

saying there is no bright side dipper replies yes

there is when i sold my soul it basicly turnes me in to a vampire robbie to stuned to do any thing but stand and go ya right dipper then bitch slaped him

through several trees and into the knee of a giant

dipper shouts an apolige

will they acept dipper will robbie die will you revie or pm me find out next time