okay for all my old reviewers if you remember this one i have decided to remake it
since i haven't updated it in so long and the older one sucked anyways so here it goes the new .hackending. disclaimer:i own nothing R&R
I walk down the street feeling the cool breeze of the autoum air blowing against my cheeks. I listen to the kids as they play in their yards and the vooices of adults making jokes with other parents and watch as leaves fall from the trees hitting my blue jeans and getting stuck in my hair that comes down to my neck. my name is chris a male with brown eyes and dark brown hairwith strands of gold.
"Hey chris!" Someone yells from behind me I turn around to see a girl running towards me wearing a blue suit skirt and topwith green eyes and light brown hair down to her shoulder blades.
"Oh hi Leah," I say smiling while I wave.
"(Huff) Where have you been for the past week everyone has been worried?" Leah asked wheezing and gasping for air.
I scrunch my eyes and say "I was on vacation."
"Chris whats wrong?" Leah asked not fooled by the lie and shaking her head.
"I.I'll tell you later i really have to go now okay." I say
"Okay bye."Leah says. I walk down the road and eventually reach my house.
The doors unlocked so I go in and sit next to the computer. I type in my user name Felix and m,y password and log on. I see the golden spirals around me as they disapear and I am in the city of Mac Anu. I look at my hands in brown gloves I wear a black shirt and jeans with flames up and down them with black boots, and use the heavy blade weapon called rising sun. I have blue hair a little past my ears and blue eyes.and i walk down to the shoping section and an npc asks.
"Would you like to bye some weapons?" but i pass by him I go to the boat rental shop and rent a boat for two hundred gold. I sit down and it slowy drifts away from the dock I lay down and doze off.
"Yee haw." I hear as someone crashes into the boat it's a girl in a blue skirt with stars onit and a white top and brown hair in a bun with gold eyes and the twin blades known as dragon cutters. It's Leah once again only in the world her name is destiny.
She lays down next to me and asks "So... do you want to go to a dungeon?"
why should I i am already stronger than you and everyone else in my friendslist bu ii'll tell you what pay me four hundred gold and I'll take you. I say being a smart ass
"Fine I don't want to go by myself anyways." She said "But I still don't see why you have to be a smart ass about everything."
"Because it's fun." I say grinning. We get off the boat and walk for the chaos gate, but before we reach it we hear a loud pitched screech and the sky turns red, everyone stops moving except the two of us the sky starts to look as if it is cracking and in the middle of the city square we see a huge rose sprount from out of the ground.
"What's going on?" I say as we run down toward the rose. when we reach it the ground around us turns gold and shines up at us and the rose opens revealing an little girl inside.
"Who's this girl" Leah asked
"I don't know." I say touching her forhead and she wakes up
"where am I?" The ,mysterious, girl asks.
so what do you think about the remake r&r