This is my way of learning on how to be a good writer. So if you could give tips on how to improve my writing because I like to do this professionally. I believe the only way to do that is try writing these story.
Will an average red headed teenager who was having a dull day at school. her teacher droning on the importance of geometry.
She was thinking only a few days they stop the evil Phobos from taking his sister power and freeing a world from his rule.
Though she couldn't help but wonder but how dose someone become so twisted like him.
She came out of her thoughts when the school bell rang for lunch.
She meet up with her friends.
Corniella was complaining about all the homework she received from Miss Riverdale
"Why do they have to be so much history to learn?"
"Well the world is a little over five thousands years, what do you expect." Irma commented
"Ya Ya, whatever."
"Who are you going to write about in your paper over?" Taranee curious asking
"What paper?" Will look up half shock and surprise
"You know, where we write a three page paper over a famous mathematician for math class" Taranee Stated
"Mr. Swanson said it in class today. It due tomorrow"
"No I don't remember Mr. Swanson saying that. I must of had something else on my mind" Will stated in annoyance
"So what hot guy were you thinking of?" Irma playful teasing
Will was surprise about this. Quickly saying "No nothing like that."
"Ah right" Irma said in disbeleive
"Really, I was thinking about what happen to us." Will said
"It was amazing adventure." Hay lin said
"Also, why phobos was the way he was?" Will
"Who knows, some people are born evil" Irma said coldly
"Sounds about right" Corniella agreed
"Maybe your right" Will unsure
the School bell rang
"Well I guess i see guys later" Will said
The girls headed to class
After school Will was at the locally library to do some research for her report.
Looking for a book on a mathematician. 'This is going to be fun' she thought sarcastically.
While examining row a books. One book caught her eye.
It was simple red covered with symbols with clock like piece covered in gears on the front.
Curious she open the book.
then a light coming out of the book. she immediacy drop the book. then a transparent bean books. He was an old man covered light blue cloak, holding a what looks a watch.
the old said "Hello, Are you Will Vandom?"
Will look up blankly and nodded her
"Good" he said
"Their is task that you."
So what do you think?
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