Ok I have unleashed my crazy, really crazy idea into words. Please review and back me up, and tell me how I should improve my writing. I don't care if you criticize my writing, just as long as I improve.
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A loud severe wind blew by in the tower of guidance searching for something worthy. The first floor was filled with bodies, but none of them of any potential. The second floor, the third, the fourth, and the fifth floor, none had bodies with much potential. The dragons were useless as their minds were to complex, and the spirits were merely those like him, but of weaker power. Then with a loud jolt he sensed a beautiful power, one that was both strong of body, and mind. A dead body alone lying on the ground, with a black helmet next to it was flowing with energy. The human was clothed in dark armor, and had on a red cape and had a mark.
"Perfect, with the branded mark I should live long enough to turn the whole world into turmoil," laughed the spirit.
"Stop! Under Ashera's order we are to stop you!" shouted another spirit followed by another six.
"Ahh, the Spirit Council have come to stop me, but not even the most powerful spirits can stop me now! For I have done the impossible and absorbed a large quantity of Ashera's energy! How else have those wretched humans defeated the goddess herself?" the spirit laughed maniacally.
With a small motion a combination of wind, fire, and lightning swirled in a mass and knocked all of the spirit warriors out cold. With another motion he absorbed all of their power, and energy.
"Remember my name as you die, for now I am not Talnish, or the Black Knight. I have a new name known as the Devil Knight!" laughed the Devil Knight. With that he went inside the body, and arose as the Black Knight, but somewhat different. Dark, black demonic wings spread out from the back, and twin claws came out of the gauntlet. Two horns came out of the helmet, and a new sword appeared out of the air.
"Now to begin my conquest, ahh where should I start?" the Devil Knight said to himself as a small bat flew to him. He looked into its eyes and laughed with delight.
"Of course I shall begin in Elibe, there none may stop me. Not Ike of Tellius, and right now Magvell is too well guarded by the one known as the Demon King, but Nergal why is just a small part of dark power. Yes! This is the beginning of the end!" he laughed manically.
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Ok that's it for the intro, please please please! Review. I'm begging you, I don't care if you compliment or criticize, plus please point out any mistakes you see.