Written for the Freeverse Prompts Challenge on the HPFC for the prompt "Falling". I hope you'll like it.
Please review.
It's dark
(oh so dark !)
But soft
(something forgotten)
I'm falling, falling
Through It
(And I shouldn't be)
It's easy (hard)
It feels good (tearing me apart)
Surprising (terrifying)
Time disappearing
For an hour-long second
It is a (harsh and cold)
A life taken (stolen)
Too soon.