Cursed Emotionless
Disclamer- i don't own any of the characters. However, I do own the plot. This particular chapter wouldn't have been written this well, without the help of my sis. Thanks for all the help.
Prologue
Tenten leapt gracefully onto the tree, an action she had perfected long ago. She had watched as her friends became couples, had watched as her friends stayed together in a tight groups that she wasn't part of. Sometimes she wondered if she was like a lone wolf, surrounded with packs of wolves. She was standing on a branch of a cherry blossom tree watching a couple sit and watch the sunset. Unable to watch this she glared at the red sun as if it was its fault. The sad memory came in mind even though many times she had pushed this memory in the back of her mind.
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The stormy night was horrible and even the most serious of ninjas weren't training. The weather however did not affect one ninja. Hwahh! She screamed as she pelted kunai at 5 incredibly pink teddy bears. 3 teddy bears were completely mutilated. However, 2 remained untouched. Don't get frustrated. I can do this. She said to herself. Hwaa! she said as her eyes were closed and she tossed 5 kunai. Then out of the blue an unsettling feeling came as she opened her eyes. One of the kunai was stuck in the family picture. Taking this as a premonition she ran to her parents' room and kicked open the shoji door. Blood was everywhere and in the middle of this mess was Orochimaru licking the blood off his fingers. Aaah, the last one. Well, this will be fun, he rasped.
So pissed off was she that she flung every weapon she had, missing him completely. (Not realizing that this was a legendary senin) "You are not worth my time" Orochimaru said. He summoned Manda, the giant snake. "Take care of the brat and you can have the left overs." After saying this he disappeared in a cloud of neon green smoke.
Blinded by the smoke she fell to her knees, in the most vulnerable position, without weapons or strength. What would I do?
Summoning up the last of her strength she thought, "Dad was always skilled with weapons which I don't have. He always told me to look on the bright side. I don't even have chakra left! I wish I were like mom, having almost an endless amount of it. Why did I get the bad genes?"
Pain made her stronger as she yelled, "YOU CAN'T KILL ME! I WILL NOT DIE NOW, BY YOU!"
"Relax child, I will not kill you. Free me from this Orochimaru when you get older and I'll spare you. A life for a life. To reassure him I CURSE you to be emotionless until you kill him. Learn how to unleash that chakra from your mother and that accuracy of your father, which was why he killed them.
A teardrop scar slowly appeared on her arm. She felt no different however, she didn't even realize that her knees were bloody.
I …..Promise. she stuttered out.
Manda slithered out the window into the dark of the night. She dropped to the floor attempting to cry but failing. Surrounded in her parents blood, did not make this better for her.
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End of Chapter 1
So people is the story good? I'll toss in Neji later along with Hogwarts. This year they will be 2nd years. Now, go REVIEW please. By the way if the next chapter isn't written as well, sorry. My sis is really busy and can't help. But I'll try to improve on my own.
