A/N:

Welcome to Love Hine: Revised. This will be the second story I have started on the frist one is Evo. , which isnt going anywhere because I haven't got any reviews to keep it going, untill I get more reviews, nothing. Any who Love Hina: Revised an AU story. I know what your thinking ........" Keitaro fall for some other girl or something along angst and a sudden death", nope sorry. To start off, some of you may know but in the manga vol. 1, all the way in the back is some of the original chracter designs and story line plot. Well thats all for now, but the rest of this chapter will tell more. (Naru fans are going to hate me and Keitaro fans are going to be screaming 'Hell Yeah'. I see a patended Naru Group punch coming)

Bios:

Keitaro Urashima -

Age - 20

Eyes - Dark green , )

Hair - Dark Brown

Hobbies - His motorcyle, studing, helping out people anyway possible

Over all: Studing since his early teens he has alway felt the need to prove him self, so he has always felt since childhood the need to get into Toudai. Interduced to the story frist, called to his Grandmother's will reading ( Sniff; yes shes gone) and called upon to inheirit the the Hinata Ryokan. He can alway see something good in a person but views alot of other things one sided

Midori -

Age - 19

Eyes - Indigo

Hair - pitch black

Hobbies - Caring for turtles, her friends, and just about anything

Over all: Ok, here we go, Ingridents: Naru's looks, Mutsumi's personallity, Shinobu's emotional personallity wa-laa, instant Midori. Granny Hina calls her to ryokan before she dies to talk to her but loses her memory completly after falling through the ceiling naked, head frist on to Keitaro head. Kind of slow and absent minded and also clumsy.

Motoko Aoyama -

Age - 17

Eyes - Forest green

Hair - Raven black

Hobbies - Kendo, Swordmansship, (absent mindly) writtng over-dramatic love novels

Over all: Very different. A dedicated swordwoman of the acient God's Cry and heir to her families dojo. Most of the time very serious but gets nervous in front of certain male citizens.

But when she opens up she is very kind and caring. Also is troubled by her past.

Kaolla Su -

Age - 14

Eyes - Pale blue

Hair - Almost platium blond

Hobbies - money, gossip, science, inventions

Over all - Yes the darling Su has turned into a Nabiki. A gorgeous foreigner, her homeland and anything besides in the present are unknow. Every now and then though you glimps the real her.

Shinobu Maehara -

Age - 13

Eyes - Dark blue

Hair - Dark blue

Hobbies - cooking, house hold chores

Over all: Cares deeply for every one but hates Keitaro at frist. Because of family trouble she moved into the ryokan and makes up the rent by doing mo of the household chores and cooking for everyone.

Mitsune/Kitsune Konno -

Age 20

Eyes - I don't know I "see" them but my guess is their light gray or dark hazel

Hair - Drity blond (Rare for an actuall Japanese women)

Hobbies - Freelance writting, collecting, sake

Over all: Quiet different. More caring and less abusive use of sake and the like. She help alot of people through their social problems.

Haruka Urashima -

Age - ? (early 30's my guess because in the original she was in Junior high when Keitaro had flashbacks of his youth)

Eyes - Brown

Hair - Dark Brown

Hobbies - her Tea shop......... what?! I dont know, smacking people with that paper fan.............. nope to much of the original

Over all: Sweat kind person, gives help when needed and advice, also a single mother.........yep.........

Disclaimer -

I do not know if the orginal story and characters are copy righted but if they are ........ o well I'm using them . Whats theirs' is theirs' and whats mine is mine.

Key:

Japanese: ".........."

Foreign lauguage(stated): "....."

Thought: '.........'

Reading aloud: .........

R/R Plz!

KaOn