Wow. Maybe it's finally time I got off my lazy butt and decided to give a new story
Okay, so I don't own DB
Read and review! Enjoy!
Lying in a wooden coffin, buried deep underground in the Old City, a teenage girl's bright green eyes snapped open. Coughing on the small amount of dust that managed to drift into the coffin, she banged on the top part of the coffin above her. Hearing the wood crack, she quickly shielded her eyes as dirt and other debris fell on top of her. Digging as much of the dirt away from her mouth as she could, she gasped for breath as she continued to choke on the remaining dirt. Slowly, she began to drag herself to the surface. Finally, she breached the surface and struggled to pull herself out of her prison. Once she was finally able to pull herself out, she collapsed on the ground, gagging on a piece of dirt stuck in her throat. Once it finally decided to fall out of her mouth, the girl summoned the strength to sit up. Rubbing the back of her head, the gunshot that killed her was gone and the scars from receiving torture as punishment for failing was gone. After 1 year, which instead felt like 120 years, she was able to get out of the pit. However, it came with a price; she had only one more chance, this one chance, to finish the mission she had a year earlier, and if she failed this time, she was out of chances and damned to the pit forever. Standing up, Kitt Wonn whistled and her fiery red dragon, Wyldfyr, came racing to her side. Leaping onto her loyal red dragon, she took off. She was going to make Dragon City suffer…suffer even worse than she had when she was being punished in Hell…starting with the leader of the once feared Dragon Eye crew, Moordryd Paynn.
Wow. No hostility at all...
So, give me a review. I know it's incredibly short, but still want input on how I did.