Hi guys! I had to revise the entire story TT Apperntly I looked at my
story and there was a lot of errors ;;; So I fixed them if you guys still
see mistakes let me know!
Disclaimer: Do I look like I want to get sued? I own nothing but my clothes and the computer this is written on and the plot -x Oh and a special thanks to my beta! Kamali! x love ya babe
Looking for love in all the wrong place's(Revised)
Hi everyone! How are you doing today?! Good? Great if not I didn't fucking ask you... hehe I'm just messing with you! Anyway I wanted to share something with you all. Meaning you get to sit and read this story that will probably take maybe a story and a sequel, who knows but back to the task at hand. I met one hot, I mean fucking drop dead gorgeous guy! Who whispers to everyone Happens to be my teacher XD I know!!!! But anyway I want to share my entire story with you if that's all right with you guys...It is? Great! x enjoy!
By the way my name is Rei Kon. Nice to meet you and yes I'm a boy and yes I'm gay not a flaming fag with rainbows on my door step, (people don't take offense nothing mean meant by it ;;) I'm just a normal 16 year old with long black hair down to my caves, golden eyes, and fangs, some people mistake me for a kitten smirks. I also have some serious problems when it comes to my love life. Let's see this story starts about last week when I missed the bus for the hundredth time, and I had no way of getting to school. But for some reason today was different. On my way to school (by walking, since I'm too poor to get a car... stress) I felt dizzy, you know, like not sick dizzy but the world is spinning, to the point were I fainted. Thank god I didn't hit the floor. Something strong caught me. "Whoa" I said.
"Are you okay" the person asked. "Yea I think" I answered. "Oh I'm so sorry I didn't mean to fall on you" I panicked he must think I'm a klutz. "It's quite alright" he reassured me. My god he sounded hot.
When I finally got up the courage to look at him he was beautiful. I mean really beautiful. The first thing I noticed was his eyes. He had these ruby red eyes that at first looked angry. But the way he was holding me and the way his arms were wrapped around me immediately made me think of passion red. He had sky blue/silver looking hair, dark red eyes, creamy skin, oh my god I could die! It was love at first sight. Well, at least for me. I can't talk for him, now can I? But the way he was looking at me made me melt. We were quiet for a while in till he broke the silence. "Do you want me to let you go now?" I blushed as he helped me to my feet. "Thank you, sir." "Where are you headed?" I looked at him. It was a bit of a forward question and all I could think of was 'stalker'. One hot stalker, but a stalker none the less. "I-I was on my way to S-School. OH, NO SCHOOL!" "Would you like me to give you a ride?" I blushed at his question maybe he didn't know the double meaning behind that. Wow, I didn't realize I was such a pervert. "Um" I trailed off. "It's really no problem; my car is right over there." He pointed to the black mustang. Oh man, am I really going to get a ride from a COMPLETY HOT STRANGER! Normally I would be like "get the fuck away you weirdo. But for him I'll make an exception smirks. "If it's not any trouble." I answered coyly.
So to make a long story short he gave me a ride to school, and you will never guess what I found out next. Holy crap I could have choked. "Hello class, I will be your new teacher this year, my name is Kai Hiwatari. It's a pleasure to meet you all" "Oh...My...God" someone gasped behind me. "He's GORGEOUS!" Oh not any somebody but popular, sluty, Mariah Kon (hell I don't know her last name to tell you the truth so shoot me. But if you did you wouldn't get to read my beautiful story x now back to the story!) No relation.
He turned his attention towards me, realizing that I was part of the class. I could have died, seriously, by the look on his face. Those eyes of red were so haunting... I left class in a daze and went on with the rest of my classes. Half the time I couldn't concentrate, still thinking about his red eyes and ended up getting a detention for tomorrow. I hate my life. "Yo Rei!" someone called. I turned to see my friend Max "Oh hey Max, what's up?" "Nothing but. He trailed of." "But? What?" I asked getting impatient; I want to see my hotty teacher damn!
"Did you see the new teacher...he's gorgeous!" "Yes max I am perfectly aware of that fact. Thank you for stating the obvious. Hey what about Tyson!" "Oh him?" Max said sounding bored. " "..." I stared at him. "I'm just joking" "...right." "Hey lighten up I was just playing, you know I love him" "You had me scared for a minute. How is he by the way" "He's good. A sex maniac but good... like.. REALLY GOOD." Max laughed. I covered my ears. "Eww I so did not need to hear that!" Hello to anyone who cares. Meet Max, my sex addicted friend.
The bell just rang yippee! Like, I want to go home. Well its just another day to go home and wake up again to see the face I love and realized that we cant be together. I'M SO EXCITED! Yea fucking right you can shoot me now!...
"Alright, I'm going head home...see ya Max" "Alright bye Rei, call me later ok and tell me about your lover teacher?" "Ok" Now you see my problem. My problem's name is Kai, who is the guy I love. This guy that I'm currently in love with turned out to be my teacher! I'm okay. Fuck the world for this you all shall pay. But something tells me this will be a good thing. I hope, at least. He's really hot.
-- there it is the revised and totally redone. Tell me what you guys think. I plan on doing all the chapters over cause it work
Disclaimer: Do I look like I want to get sued? I own nothing but my clothes and the computer this is written on and the plot -x Oh and a special thanks to my beta! Kamali! x love ya babe
Looking for love in all the wrong place's(Revised)
Hi everyone! How are you doing today?! Good? Great if not I didn't fucking ask you... hehe I'm just messing with you! Anyway I wanted to share something with you all. Meaning you get to sit and read this story that will probably take maybe a story and a sequel, who knows but back to the task at hand. I met one hot, I mean fucking drop dead gorgeous guy! Who whispers to everyone Happens to be my teacher XD I know!!!! But anyway I want to share my entire story with you if that's all right with you guys...It is? Great! x enjoy!
By the way my name is Rei Kon. Nice to meet you and yes I'm a boy and yes I'm gay not a flaming fag with rainbows on my door step, (people don't take offense nothing mean meant by it ;;) I'm just a normal 16 year old with long black hair down to my caves, golden eyes, and fangs, some people mistake me for a kitten smirks. I also have some serious problems when it comes to my love life. Let's see this story starts about last week when I missed the bus for the hundredth time, and I had no way of getting to school. But for some reason today was different. On my way to school (by walking, since I'm too poor to get a car... stress) I felt dizzy, you know, like not sick dizzy but the world is spinning, to the point were I fainted. Thank god I didn't hit the floor. Something strong caught me. "Whoa" I said.
"Are you okay" the person asked. "Yea I think" I answered. "Oh I'm so sorry I didn't mean to fall on you" I panicked he must think I'm a klutz. "It's quite alright" he reassured me. My god he sounded hot.
When I finally got up the courage to look at him he was beautiful. I mean really beautiful. The first thing I noticed was his eyes. He had these ruby red eyes that at first looked angry. But the way he was holding me and the way his arms were wrapped around me immediately made me think of passion red. He had sky blue/silver looking hair, dark red eyes, creamy skin, oh my god I could die! It was love at first sight. Well, at least for me. I can't talk for him, now can I? But the way he was looking at me made me melt. We were quiet for a while in till he broke the silence. "Do you want me to let you go now?" I blushed as he helped me to my feet. "Thank you, sir." "Where are you headed?" I looked at him. It was a bit of a forward question and all I could think of was 'stalker'. One hot stalker, but a stalker none the less. "I-I was on my way to S-School. OH, NO SCHOOL!" "Would you like me to give you a ride?" I blushed at his question maybe he didn't know the double meaning behind that. Wow, I didn't realize I was such a pervert. "Um" I trailed off. "It's really no problem; my car is right over there." He pointed to the black mustang. Oh man, am I really going to get a ride from a COMPLETY HOT STRANGER! Normally I would be like "get the fuck away you weirdo. But for him I'll make an exception smirks. "If it's not any trouble." I answered coyly.
So to make a long story short he gave me a ride to school, and you will never guess what I found out next. Holy crap I could have choked. "Hello class, I will be your new teacher this year, my name is Kai Hiwatari. It's a pleasure to meet you all" "Oh...My...God" someone gasped behind me. "He's GORGEOUS!" Oh not any somebody but popular, sluty, Mariah Kon (hell I don't know her last name to tell you the truth so shoot me. But if you did you wouldn't get to read my beautiful story x now back to the story!) No relation.
He turned his attention towards me, realizing that I was part of the class. I could have died, seriously, by the look on his face. Those eyes of red were so haunting... I left class in a daze and went on with the rest of my classes. Half the time I couldn't concentrate, still thinking about his red eyes and ended up getting a detention for tomorrow. I hate my life. "Yo Rei!" someone called. I turned to see my friend Max "Oh hey Max, what's up?" "Nothing but. He trailed of." "But? What?" I asked getting impatient; I want to see my hotty teacher damn!
"Did you see the new teacher...he's gorgeous!" "Yes max I am perfectly aware of that fact. Thank you for stating the obvious. Hey what about Tyson!" "Oh him?" Max said sounding bored. " "..." I stared at him. "I'm just joking" "...right." "Hey lighten up I was just playing, you know I love him" "You had me scared for a minute. How is he by the way" "He's good. A sex maniac but good... like.. REALLY GOOD." Max laughed. I covered my ears. "Eww I so did not need to hear that!" Hello to anyone who cares. Meet Max, my sex addicted friend.
The bell just rang yippee! Like, I want to go home. Well its just another day to go home and wake up again to see the face I love and realized that we cant be together. I'M SO EXCITED! Yea fucking right you can shoot me now!...
"Alright, I'm going head home...see ya Max" "Alright bye Rei, call me later ok and tell me about your lover teacher?" "Ok" Now you see my problem. My problem's name is Kai, who is the guy I love. This guy that I'm currently in love with turned out to be my teacher! I'm okay. Fuck the world for this you all shall pay. But something tells me this will be a good thing. I hope, at least. He's really hot.
-- there it is the revised and totally redone. Tell me what you guys think. I plan on doing all the chapters over cause it work