Okay, Taffeh A. Llama kind of inspired me to try a freeverse thing. You're wonderful, Dearie! Uh, I don't own PJO, if I did, The House of Hades would come out tomorrow. Oh, and thanks for the wonderful reviews on Spiders, I love you all!
Tell me what you thought, it's my first try.
He let go
But not of you
How could you think
he would do anything
d-i-f-f-e-r-e-n-t?
He said he loves you
And now, together, you're
F
A
L
L
I
N
G
|
\/
Into the pits of
\HELL/
But you're together.
so it doesn't matter.
You don't ~speak~
just h*o*l*d each other
and pray to the GODS
that you'll both survive the
| FALL |
BeCaUsE iF oNe Of YoU dIeS
the other will die of a
b\r/o\k/e\n | h/e\a/r\t
Black
Black
Black
you're still falling
you're starting to wonder
*Will I go splat or thud?*
you wonder if you're even
¿STILL ALIVE?
was death so fast?
No, you can still hear
~the~wind~
whipping past your ears
wait
what's that #noise#
louder
LoUdEr
LOUDER
wailing, screaming, screeching
THE SOUND OF TORMENTED SOULS
Worse than the Fields of Punishment
you cover your ears
it doesn't help to drown out the screaming
)Monsters( congregate
around pools of
bloody, black ink,
_/\_oozing from stalagmites_/\_
you don't know how you can see
there's just the Black
Swallowing you
you are tiny
you are insignificant
you are doomed
You instantly wish he had
{saved}{himself}
but no.
He had to let go of
-the-ledge-
Damn that *Seaweed Brain*
Well, that was cheery.
It did make me feel better though. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE REVIEW AND TELL ME HOW IT WAS!