Retelling time. This is a remake of my story Sarah's Choice, my first Labyrinth fanfiction. I hope you like the remake.
I don't own any of the characters from Labyrinth they belong to the Jim Henson Company. I own all of the OC.
Thanks for reading and please review.
Prologue
The Goblin King lounged on his throne. His head against one arm and his legs hanging over the other. In his left hand, he held a crystal orb. Inside he watched with pain in his heart. The one woman he had ever truly loved standing in front of a mirror in a wedding gown. A gown chosen for someone else. Someone who wasn't want he seemed. He watched as she twirled in the gown. His hearted dropped even more in his chest. Ten years of pain and loneliness. Ten years of watching her from afar. Ten years of yearning for her. Ten years of waiting. Ten years since he had spilled his heart to her and she had refused him.
Of course after she had refused him, he had realized she had been too young to understand. But after waiting for her call him for ten years, he had to watch as she choose another man, no a piece of scum to lowly to even touch her feet, to be her husband and not him. Slowly he swung himself to set properly in his throne. He watched as everyone left her alone her face fell. She looked in the mirror. "I wish I could see The Goblin King one more time."
A smile creep on his face, quickly he stood and threw the crystal into the air. "Sarah, you just made my wish come true and now I'll make yours come true and more." He moved quickly toward the room of stairs. "I have yet to loose you or you would not have called me."
Well, there is the rewritten prologue. I'm not removing the original. It's staying put. I'm offering to be a beta. So look at my beta profile to see if we fit. Review please. I want to hear what you think of the rewritten version of Sarah's Choice.