Just a little poem I made about Haku, please review...


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Soft snow falling down,

No one else but me around,

Lost, without a purpose to be,

Empty-hearted in the land of the sea,

Why do I exist, why am I there,

If I was to die tomorrow who would care?

Freezing, hungry ready to die,

Even if I want to, I have no more tears to cry,

Just a tiny speck in this large white earth,

Was it a mistake giving me birth?

But there is a glimmer of hope you see,

A man...who has the same eyes as me,

He asks me to be his tool, be his weapon...

I accept of course how could I turn down my reason to exist,

Though, I had no desire to kill,

But for him I certainly will,

Blood, sweat, tears I would do anything for this man,

For he made me what I am,

Now I fight...not for me, but for him, the one person that saved me...

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