Haaaaaay! This is my first story! Wish me luck! Ok so I decided to put this story in a movie format, you know sorta like camera directions. Forgive my grammar.

~LanaLover

Open on stranger that looks Israeli, she's is pretty and is reading. Notice a star of David necklace on her slender bronze neck.

Outside Tony and Ziva are debating on which is the best Bond, Connery or Moore. Both definitely didn't like Daniel Craig. [Sean Connery was the best!]

"Tony, why are we here again?" asks Ziva.

"We are picking up a witness for The Shredder case, we have to bring her to HQ to protect her." the Italian replies in a pretty good Connery impression.

The girl hears a knock on her door, she sighs for having to put away her book, she gets up and opens the door; there stand Tony and Ziva. All Tony can do is gape at Ziva's and the girl's similarities.

Tony, Ziva, McGee, and Abby are all in the bullpen. Tony is

relaying the similarities of Ziva and the girl.

"I'm tellin' you, she and Zee both have that sexy I-could-kill-you-if-I-wanted-to look!" Tony exclaimed. Ziva smirked at that, 'cause it was very true.

"Ok Dinozzo that's enough. Gear up! We have a dead commander on base." They field agents scatter to get their gear and Abby

goes to Gibbs a "see ya later hug", she winks at McGee, he grins and

blushes.

Zoom in on a tattered body dressed in a commander uniform , dog tags

shining. Duck tells Gibbs that the Commander Jones, the body, was most

likely killed by a .45 caliber bullet, execution style, then put

through some sort of wood grinding machine, just like the crazy serial killer's,

The Shredder, who's being held on trial right now. In the background

The rest of the team are picking up and bagging evidence or taking

pictures.

Back in the 'office' the team, excluding Gibbs, are on the computer

waiting for Gibbs to inform him of C. Jones's file. He walks in and

they launch their info telling Gibbs that C. Jones had only one known

enemy, a Petty Officer McFarlane, they where pulled apart from fighting

over a commander McFarlane wouldn't listen to. Gibbs tells Tony to bring

him in, Tony replies " Can't Boss," Gibbs stops and stares. "That is

that McFarlane died in Afghanistan two months ago" Tony quickly adds.

Gibbs tells them to keep looking, they all nod and go, he stops Ziva,

shakes his head and tells her to come with him, Ziva looks as surprised

as Tony and McGee but nods her head and agrees to come with him. He

takes her to the hall outside the interrogation room.

"I need you to interrogate the witness that you and Tony picked up this

morning" Gibbs says. Ziva nods and asks "ok I just need to know her

name and what I'm looking for" Gibbs says her name is Torie Dezziri,

and to ask what she saw, exactly, the night she saw the victim get

murdered. Ziva takes the file that Gibbs hands her and walks into the

interrogation, in the background you see Tony, McGee, and

Abby try to get into the observation room connected to the

interrogation that Ziva's in. Gibbs walks in after them and nods to

show that they can watch, then Ducky comes in and tells Gibbs that he

want to hear what the witness who is going to put the crazy serial

killer in jail says, Gibbs agrees and grins a bit. (grayscale snapshot)