Hello. I am NoctourneOfShadows. As you may have known, I am the author of the story Mare Season. Recently, I have had second thoughts about the flow of the story. It didn't really feel right to me. It had some bland characters and the previous chapter were badly written. So, I have decided to remake the story with some new characters. There will be some of the OC's from the original story still in here, but the one's I did not connect it will be erased from the story. Sorry to those who submitted said OC's, but they didn't feel right to me to have in the story. Also, I am rewriting Mare Season to have slightly less explicit content in it so I can remain under the radar of Fanfiction. But don't worry, you sociopaths will still get some sex scenes, so don't worry. So, here is the story for you all.
"Princess Celestia!" A voice roared throughout the entire throne room. The doors were slammed open as Celestia looked up to see what the intrusion was. A stallion was being held down by a couple of guards. This stallion was darkish blue, with a black mane and tail. His cutie mark was peculiar, it was a dark cloud with a moon behind it.
"We are very sorry Princess, but this stallion insisted on barging in." One of the guards holding the stallion down told Celestia.
"It's alright guards, let him speak. As Princess, I give the right to all those to speak their mind." Princess Celestia politely told the guards as the guards released the stallion. The stallion stood up and walked closer to the Princess, but not close enough for her to sense danger. "Now, what is it that you want to say?" Celestia asked the unknown stallion before her.
"I am sick of Mare Season!" The stallion roared out angrily.
"Excuse me?" Princess Celestia said confused.
"I am sick of the month of Mare Season. The season that you made so that mares can automatically buck any stallion they see in sight. It isn't meant to be, stallions and mares should only buck when they meet the ones they love, that is the natural law, not this stupid season you created. It must stop immediately!" The stallion told Celestia firmly.
"Mare Season was created to populate the world with foals. The total populace of the land of Equestria is 10% stallion and 90% mare. So lesbianism is often occurred in this country, so Mare Season was created so that all mares could populate the world with beautiful foals to keep Equestria going. It might not be natural law, but Equestria needs Mare Season to function." Princess Celestia said to the stallion before her.
"It still isn't right! If mares want to be lesbian, let them be lesbian. The world can still function without Mare Season. Lust isn't always the answer to solve problems. So Princess Celestia, since you will not agree to get rid of Mare Season, how about we make a little bet?" The stallion requested.
Princess Celestia rose an eyebrow, seeming a bit interested to hear the stallion's proposal. "Go on." She requested.
"You see Princess, my name is Midnight Storm. My family used to create inventions, just simple things we wanted to create for the general public. And I created something that you might find some interest in. It is called a heat detector. It can detect the heat signatures within a ponies' body. I have created exactly 8 of them, and I have decided that the bet I propose to you is that I hand out these eight heat detectors out to eight different stallions, and during the entire course of Mare Season, we have a competition to see if all 8 stallions succumb to the lust that you created with this cursed season. If all 8 stallions succumb to lust, then it will decide that Mare Season should stay lawful, but if even one of the stallions survive a whole month, then that means that they do not like this lust and Mare Season should become unlawful and end forever." Midnight proposed.
"Wow, what an interesting proposal. But if I am to accept, I must accept 3 things from you." Princess Celestia requested.
"Sure, go ahead Princess." Midnight said politely.
"One, you must not give yourself a heat detector. Two, if I win, then Mare Season is the right way to go for reproducing children, and Mare Season will continue for three months instead of the casual one month. And three, for your arrogance against the throne, if you lose, you must accept the worst fate possible. Since you hate lust, if you lose, you must mate with the Princess herself." Princess Celestia requested.
"Wait, you!? I mate with you if I lose!?" Midnight yelled out.
"Yes." Princess Celestia responded.
Midnight thought about this. If he were to lose, then all the stallions in the country would suffer a cruel fate to be constantly raped for about 3 months. And also, Midnight promised himself he would never mate out of lust again. The next mare he would buck would be his wife and he would love her. But if he lost, he would have to mate with the Princess, the one he hated for making a season like this. He carried the country of stallions on his back with this decision. "Fine, I accept."
"Good. Mare Season starts in a week. You better hurry." Princess Celestia smiled.
"Oh don't worry, I will." Midnight Storm told Celestia as he walked out the door followed by the two guards. The guards closed the large doors and followed Midnight outside.
"You do realize what you have just done." One of them said. "You just put the sake of the world on your shoulders." The other one said, almost like they were twins finishing each others' sentences.
"Don't worry you two. Bass Note and Dawning Vision. You two are my first candidates for becoming two of the eight stallions. You in?" Midnight requested.
The two guards took off their helmets. One of them had a light blue mowhawk and his coat was forest green. His eyes were darkish purple and his cutie mark was unseen thanks to the armor. The other one had a red mane with a few pieces of his mane looped over his face. His coat was white and his eyes were green. The forest green one was Bass Note and the white one was Dawning Vision. Bass Note was known as a drummer alongside with Flash Sentry in his band and Dawning Vision was known as a writer. They are both brothers by blood and were born on the same date, so they were twins. If they had the same coat color and mane color, along with the same style, they would look alike completely.
"Sure." Bass said. "We're in." Vision responded.
"Good. Report at my Mansion in four days. We will have our meeting there at that time. I shall go receive the others. Bye for now my friends." Midnight said as he lifted his dark blue wings and flew up into the air quickly. He then proceeded to fly off towards Ponyville. Bass and Vision looked on as they saw their friend depart.
Now tell me what you think of it so far. Sorry for the chapter being so short, but I promise that the next chapters will be slightly longer. I am hoping for 2+K word chapters so that the story doesn't seem like it goes by too quickly. So make sure to comment and favorite/follow this story if you like it. If you don't like it, please leave a comment explaining why or PM me. If you have questions about what is being taken out, please PM me. Thank you and bye.