Okay, so I was digging through some old fanfic documents I had written about a year ago, and I found about the WORST fanfic ever! I thought, "I wonder how many flames I'd get if I posted this on ." And so please feel free to flame this piece of crap! Seriously, I even flame it myself.

Okay, I'm gonna start fresh. My last fanfic sucked, so this one NEEDS to be better. BTW, Thisstartsoff kinda weird.

"You wouldn't happen to know where I could get some spare parts for a Runner, would ya?" Jack Atlas asked a strange man who was masked by the night.

"I can get you anything, for the right price." A gruff voice replied.

"I can pay anything. Just name your price. Hmm... how 'bout this."

"How 'bout 600 yen."

"You drive a hard bargin. But that maywork..."

"Good. Now I recommend that you all clear out before you both pay." A female voice came out from behind the two men.

"Who do you think you are, tryin' to tell us to leave?" demanded the stranger.

"Well, Ithink I'm Officer Hatsu Kagora of Sector Security, and Ithink I have full rights to arrest you all for operating in the blackmarket, and If I wanted to, ITHINKI could let you go, without ratting you all out to Officer Trudge, seeing as no harm was done, but I'm not so sure about that last one." The female voice said flatly.

"What do we do boss?" Another stranger asked from the shadows; an accomplice.

"Tell you what. I will give you all till the count of three to clear out and hide. There are plenty of alleys to cower in." The apparent officer told them.

"You, Larry, get the lights."

The accomplice pulled out a lantern. From the dim light, Jack could barely make out what looked like a stern faced, pink haired, emerald eyed 19 year old, in uniform, holding 1 finger out along with a badge. She also had a duel disk on her arm. The woman put up a second finger. "When I get to 3, it might get a little rough, so either scatter or try me."

"Oh come on, men. It's just a little girl! We can take her." The stranger (also the apparent leader) hollered. About 12 men charged forward at the lone officer. Jack stayed behind. This girl seemed oddly familiar...

The "little girl" kept her promise. "Alright. Don't say I didn't warn you." She muttered. The woman drew a card and grinned. "Eat this! Go, Trap Hole!" A giant chasm opened up out of nowhere and swallowed all the men but Jack. "You've been warned, Jackie. Don't hang around with people you don't belong with."

And with that, the officer turned and left.

"How'd it go today sis?" Kohaku called out as the heard the front door slam shut. Hatsu bounded into the room and did a victory dance across the living room into the kitchen. She pushed open the kitchen door and twirled and spun, all while humming a peppy tune that she made up as she went. Finally Hatsu stopped in the middle of the kitchen, dizzy. She made sure before moving that the room was clear; oven opposite the kitchen door, pantry opposite the back door. Crystal chandelier above the smallwooden kitchentable, all 6 chairs clear. Hatsu proceeded back to the living room, where her sister looked at her in amusement. "Another failure today, huh?" Then chuckled to herself.

"No, my oddly colored sister, today was a SUCCESS! I finally found one of the old gang! Sure, I've had to impersonate a cop, a grocery clerk, a garbage man and a sumo wrestler, but it was all worth it." Hatsu said, ready to burst from her sudden adrenaline rush.

"What was that last one? Wait... oddly colored? And who did you see?"

"Oh, come on. Mom had white hair, dad had red, so how'd you end up with TEAL hair? Oh, and I saw Jack." Hatsu giggled, remembering the expression on the men's faces as they fell down the trap hole. Fright. Shock. Priceless...

"PLEASE don't tell me you got rough while you were disguised as acop." Haku moaned, brushing a strand of her long hair out of her face.

"I had to! The men charged at me! It wasself defense! They were gonna beat me up!"

"We both know you could have taken them. Even if there were 50, you could knock 'em all out.Without using your cards. Which one did you use anyway?" Kohaku was mid-way through a sip of herbal tea when Hatsu replied.

"Trap Hole."

Haku did a spit-take across the coffee table and Hatsu had to duck to avoid getting sprayed. "You used Trap Hole? Is it still on your Duel Disk?"

"Yeah. Why?"

"That means they're all still trapped down there!"

"You're just mad that I didn't see Yusei." Hatsu sniggered.
 "You didn't see Crow, either."

"Shut up."

Kohaku sighed, victorious. "Alright, fine. You saw Jack. But how do you expect to meet up with them if we don't even know their number?"

"Easy. With this!" Hatsu held up the card Copycat.

Haha…yeah…

I know this isn't even CLOSE to a good start to a fanfic, but again, this is just so people can flame. Anyway, leave your flames and comments, but please no questions about the plot, because I doubt I'll be able to answer any!