AN; heyt guys this is mah first fic so please tell me whut yhu think I werked real hard on it . It realy has a gret massege. Yah I'll talk to you after this fantabulous chapter. REVIEW PLEASE.
I wke up in me drak yellow and rd rom. I smell th sent of my naighbur strumming her gitar. 2dai, is the dai….THE DAY I CHOOSE MAH DESTNAII. I look up to the sky and breathe the scent of a new life about to dawn. Nuthing will evar be da symew.
I sit at the tblae eating mah puridge. (I was listenin to Lis MEirables on mi IPOD. Omg tht wuz lyke mi fovate movie I wz lyke cryin in the thetre like from the second the movie strted I was just sbbing and every1 told meh to shut u[ but I was like NOOOOOOOO. ANY WAYS the son was "Nd The Tiggers Cum atNight" yak no the one were Fantinine Was singn abt howq lif sucks cxuz she's a hoeee) My MOM cums in and says, "So lik r u exciting for choosin day?."
And I'm lik
"Omg shut it motha"
"So wich thing will will ya cjhooss?"
"Im totly goingi to chase amitee" (omgsh I was totly lyin lik ewwsies amitee suks so I wil choose divauntless fo shure)
Oh I forget to to describe me. So my nqme is Flame Bullet Winchester but my friendz call m e Flabullet. My hair es rojo (psers my friend juss taught meh some Spanish that means green hair) nd it looks lika fire flame thing (so thas how I got ma nayme yadig) Today I was wearing a yellow sundress with the words "Rebel" written in red blood over my boobs.; I hav a birth mark on majh shoulter tat looks lika mah moms pillow (yadig?) Also mButy toenails r painted blak wiff red musical notes on thbemm (ya feel me I like that sort of stle)
I'm neva goin to fit in here/. My soul is too darke fo dis place. Sumtimes when I look at mah motha I sometimesa feel lika she isn't ma mother (Yadig?)And my brother Gavron Hansel (omg like in lis mes!?yadig) sometimz sseems like he isn't my blood relationsz. Like whn all da peopol sing I just wanna cry. I am DAUNTLESS. But mostly I AM DIVERGENT!
Uhh wayt I furgit to tell ya about my apitiude test. So imam do dat now. So I walked in da place and sat down and wen in the simulation and then I got out and this erudite bitch tol me I was amity. Ad dat was it. From that day on I lived my life as a die virgin.
DAaaa next dai…..
I was in the middle of the room and all eys were on me. I felt like I was being sufoctef. I had to make my choce noa: condir ar duntless? If imakethewrongchoiceitcouldha untmeforever. I lokked around da rom. Familiar faces, cheering me on .They screm "DAUNTLESS" and da other half scremes "ERU DIE" They all sang to me nin an amitee tune. What wil I chose? WHATG IS MHY DESTINEY!? All of a sudenm, I saw a face in my periferal vishon. Hies eyes wer dark. And empy. I serchd for da answer to all my q's in his face. He gave meh a single nod. I knew dat forever, I was ment to be dauntuss".
But den I saw sumfin I dd not like (inert figer waggimg here). SOME DAUNTLESS BLONDIE NEXT TO MAH TALL DARK DAUNTLESS MAIN. Hummm acca-scuse me I saw him first. She entwines her hand with his. HUMMMMMMM. WHAT. She givs me a bitch slap face, so I jus walk up to her and bitch slap her FACE! Da crowd gose wild. Ppl start thrwing rocks and tomatoes at the dauntlss girl. My tall derk, handsme man just smiles and giggles and says "Thas why I luv you" I giv him a wink nd get back to business.
Noa I am confident and I kno mi choic esta clear. DAUNTLESS IS THE WAY FPOR ME. I drip my blood over the coals and then make my ways over to the dauntless section I stand neer my big strong man thing but he is makin owt with that gurl slapped. WHATVEVER THERE'S MANY OTHER APPLES FOR ME TO EAT IN DAUNTLESS. So I grab a guyand mak wit him to get that odder guy jelous.
It werks.
So my bifg strong hunk a junk walk ove to meh and saysa "Whass yp name?
I loke him strait imn da eys and say
"Flame Bullet Winchester. Whsa yurs? Baby"
He kneeled down, and proplld himself up to the sky. He flew fr lik 10 secnd den started runnin on da walls. He jmpeed from wall to wall. Every1 was staring at hm. He flew to da centr of da room and floated ther for a fe w secomds. Der were little blu sparks floatin around him. Den he did something so unesspected….he shot bak to da grond and started runnin in circls around me. Da hole room gaspd. He ran fastr and faster….and soon ther was a circl of fire around me. Mah red hair was flying everywhere. Den he flew up so high no one could evn see him anymore. Den he slmmed down onto the ground, punchin it wiff one buffy fist. Den he slowly got up…
"My name is Tobias" he said. Every1 gasped.
"ya and I be Tris and dis is mah mane so back da heeeel of. Transfer." She said with disgust.
"JUST CUZ I WONT BORN DANTLUS DON'T MEAN I WONT FIGHT YU"
"I'd like to see you try and beat her up. She is a laday of steel." Tobias says and then starts sexily kissing tris…iguess.
After 10 MINUTES of dem kissing we go get on the train. BUT GOTTA JUMP. Oh noes. I hyave a disability and I dn't kno how to jump. (it's really and issue like I needa aget that check out cuz like I almost died today cuz I couldn't jump on this freaking tran like wtf) SO I run next to the train and I try with all my might to jumo but I cannot. All the sudin strong arms swep meh up and strat running fast. Then fly in to the train car and set me don lightly. But I look around 4 my saviur and I am the only one in the cr.
It was my taobis.
I know.
AN: Oky doky so uhhhm ya I guss dat was it guys! So anyways bk to Lis mes it was soo gud aw shiitty it was amazn movies so tell meh wat u tink of lis mes nd also of my fanfic. PS: It is a fanfix of Divergent. Also my bff Jenny inspired da main charcter SHOUT OUTR JENNYY! woop