Wellz im bak 2 ryte mor du 2 poplar dmand . i luv da kumstruktiv krytasizum i gotz. mi fav revus r as falows
an entire fic in
text talk! -applauds- I thought it was funny. I've never read
ANYTHING like this. If you want constructive criticism then how about
spelling some words out? Making the story longer with any kind of
plot would be nice.
That's all i can offer. you could just stick
with oneshots, those work too
ch 1,
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lord person! where did you learn to type?!??!?!?!?!?!?! again if you
are trying to make fun of the show or someone's typing skills then
good job but if not it sucks type properly! even if you are making
fun of the show you could at least use words like ryte. YOU DON'T
SPELL IT THAT WAY!! don't you use spell check!
LEET DUDZ PLS GIB MI MOR I AM NOT 2 DA SPEL CHEK YET BUT I GETIN DERE
Okok diz 1 is wen inuwasha n miroku lik hav sexi time n kagomay walk in on dem an she got mad kuz she jus fond out she wus pregnant an inuwasha was da baby daddy LOL HE GOT DA SEED DUDZ n e waiz she see'd miroku wit a big ol dix in his bum n inuwasha humpin like a bunny n she runded away cryin n shit den songoh kame up 2 hur an said hay dun worry I got bby 2 n mi bby daddi is gay 2 so we kool ryte? N den day start kissin n bekum a lez family wit da 2 nu bbys and day r 2 girls so it all workz out lol yay