Hey guys, I'm back and ready to write stories. First of all, the story "The Life of Jay Serside" will not continue, it will be put up for adoption for anyone who wants it, I'm sorry to end it for those who enjoyed the story. And of course, the remake of my Sith story "Rise of the Ancient Empire" is happening. Anyway, here's the remake.
Today, I had trouble getting into my account, but I'm here!
Out in space, there was a Pelta-class frigate flying in hyperspace. Finally it came out and was near the planet, Korriban.
"Why are we here?" asked one of the clone troopers. "We should be heading to Coruscant right now, not here."
"I'm checking the computers to see what the problem is" said the captain of the ship, whose name was Sper. "Maybe, we went in the wrong way."
Just as the captain was about to check the computers, everything shut off and left the ship dead in space.
"What's happening?" asked another clone.
"I'm not sure everything got shut down." Sper told them.
"Great. We're sitting ducks out here." Another trooper said.
Then a mysterious force pulled the ship towards Korriban. Everyone handle on to something and was confused on what's happening.
"Ummm…Please tell that your moving the ship." A trooper asked Sper.
"No" Sper answered the trooper.
Then the ship was in the atmosphere and was heading towards a mountain.
"Turn the ship around!" one of them said.
"I can't the ship won't move." Sper said as he tried to turn the ship out of the direction of the mountain.
Finally, the ship crashed into the mountain and the parts of the ship fell and were on fire.
(In the Jedi Temple)
The Council members were sitting in their seats, discussing a matter that just happened, when Anakin and Ahsoka came in.
"You summoned us, master." Anakin said as he and Ahsoka bowed.
"Yes. A ship missing, there is." Said master Yoda. "Near the planet, Korriban, it has."
"What shall we do, master?" Ahsoka asked.
"Go to the planet, Skywalker; with you take your padawan." Yoda said.
"I'll accompany Anakin." Obi-Wan said to Yoda.
"Very well, dismiss." Windu said as the Council's meeting ended. Anakin and Ahsoka left and headed for hanger.
(Jedi Temple Hanger)
"Alright Snips, I suggest you be careful during this mission." Anakin told Ahsoka.
"Why? It's not like I've been to planets before why is this so different?" Ahsoka asked.
"Ahsoka, Korriban was the planet where the Sith species came from and it also has a powerful sense of the Dark Side." Anakin explained to Ahsoka.
"Now I remember, the Great Hyperspace War was what ended the Sith species and left Korriban, a barren of nothing." Ahsoka said.
"Even thou the Sith species are gone, you still have to mindful while on Korriban." Anakin said.
"You got it, master." Ahsoka said.
Anakin and Ahsoka waited for Obi-Wan, until he finally came and they went inside one of the three Jedi Cruisers to take them to Korriban.
(Korriban – Valley of the Dark Lords)
There were old structures with old statures of Sith, told to be built for the Siths that have died. Then, there was a loud yell from a distance.
A young Sith male with black hair, red skinned and light golden eyes, whose about 17 years old. He was shirtless and had black pants on. He was holding his red lightsaber in his hand as he saw a group of Hississ coming towards him.
The Sith jumps in the air and onto the back of one of the five Hississ and stabs his lightsaber through the creature's back, killing it.
Two Hississ jumped and surrounded the Sith. One of them jumped and clawed the Sith across his back; the Sith screamed and cut the Hississ in half. He threw his lightsaber into the throat of the other.
The last two Hississ ran towards the Sith. He lifted up a boulder and dropped it on the Hississ, killing it.
Leaving the Hississ and the Sith in a stare-down. The Hississ ran towards the Sith. The Hississ stopped and was levitating in the air. The Sith was force choking the creature, until the creature stopped moving and was dead.
The Sith turned off his lightsaber and he heard the sound of clapping. He turned around and saw his master.
"You did well, Dathlan. But, I feel that you could've done better." His master, Naga Sadow said.
"What! I just killed five Hississ and all you could say is 'I could've done better'." Dathlan said angrily.
"You shouldn't talk to your master like that." Naga said as he shot some force lighting at Dathlan.
After Naga stopped, Dathlan got up and walked to his master. "I am sorry." He said as he bowed.
"Good, now come let's head home." Naga said to Dathlan.
"Yes father." Dathlan said as he and his father went back to the empire.
(Near Korriban)
The three Jedi Cruisers came out of hyperspace and were heading towards Korriban.
Anakin and Obi-Wan both saw the planet while on bridge. "Prepare for landing." Anakin told Rex.
"Yes sir." Rex said as he left.
One of the Jedi Cruisers landed on Korriban. Anakin, Obi-Wan and Ahsoka, along a group of clone troopers walked out of the ship.
Ahsoka looked around and saw nothing but rocks, mountains and dry riverbeds.
"There's nothing here, but rocks and dirt." Ahsoka stated to Anakin.
"We must look to see if we can find the ship." Obi-Wan said.
However, they unaware that they were being watched by a group of black-furred Tuk'atas. "Go warn the Emperor of the Jedi." One of the Tuk'atas said.
One of the Tuk'atas ran towards the Empire to find Emperor Naga.
(Inside the Sith Palace)
Dathlan was getting his injury treated by his mother, Aumias. She was being aided by Calab, a black furred Tuk'ata.
"Look I understand that you need training but you shouldn't have gone against a group of Hississ." Aumias said to Dathlan.
"I understand mother, but father wants me to become powerful just like him." Dathlan explained.
Aumias finish tendering to Dathlan's wound. Dathlan walked out to the balcony to see the whole empire.
Dathlan sees a Tuk'ata running towards the palace. Dathlan ran down to see what's happening and got his father.
They both saw the Tuk'ata outside.
"What is it?" Naga asked the Tuk'ata.
"My lord, we have spotted Jedi, not far from here." The Tuk'ata told them about the Jedi. "What shall you want us to do?"
"How many Jedi are there?" Naga asked.
"Three." The Tuk'ata answered.
"Bring one of them to me." Naga said. "If we have one, the other two will follow."
"Yes my lord." The Tuk'ata said as he ran off.
"Stay here and call me once the Tuk'ata comes back." Naga tells Dathlan.
"Yes father." Dathlan said as he watched his father go back into the palace. He turned and sat down on the steps of the palace.
(The site of the Jedi Cruiser)
A group of clone troopers walked to Anakin and Obi-Wan. "We haven't seen anything here, sir." One of the troopers informed.
"Alright than, get some rest." Anakin said.
They troops walked back to the ship. "Why haven't we found anything?" Ahsoka asked.
"I'm not sure, Snips." Anakin said.
Then, a group of Tuk'atas jumped and attacked the campsite. Clone troopers got their blasters and fired at the Tuk'atas.
Anakin, Obi-Wan and Ahsoka activated their lightsabers to fight off the Tuk'atas.
Four Tuk'atas went off Anakin and Obi-Wan, while three Tuk'atas went off Ahsoka.
A Tuk'ata jumped at Ahsoka, but she force pushed it away from her. While dealing with the two Tuk'atas, the three one knocked Ahsoka into a stone wall, knocking her out.
"Take the girl back to the emperor." The Tuk'ata said as he watched the other take Ahsoka and ran off towards the Empire.
"Let's head back." The other Tuk'ata said as he and all the other Tuk'atas left.
When Anakin and Obi-Wan saw this, they were confused. "Why would they attack us and then leave?" Anakin asked.
"I'm not sure." Obi-Wan said.
Anakin looked around and didn't see Ahsoka anywhere. "Where's Ahsoka?" he asked. "Have you seen here?"
"No" Obi-Wan said.
"Oh no, the attack was a delusion to probably take one of us and they got Ahsoka." Anakin said.
"You're right, but more importantly where and to whom did they take her to?" Obi-Wan asked.
So what do you think of it so far, Ahsoka got kidnapped and is being taken to Naga. Anakin and Obi-Wan don't know of the Sith still being there, but especially that they're alive.
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