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Normal POV
Jack had just woken up from his sleep. He stared at the ceiling and started to reflect how well his life was going.
Just a few years ago, humans learned that beings such as devils, dragons, and gods existed. In those few years he was able to get arcee to join his peerage along with her sisters, Chromia and Flareup. He was worried that he might not be able to reincarnate them as devils since he only had three mutated pawns left but much to his surprise it did. Whether or not it was because they we're mutated pawns or because he had the strongest evil piece system he wasn't sure.
In fact all of his pieces are mutated (excluding Xenovia and Ravel). But what surprised him the most was when the three sisters gained a third form which was that of a human/devil. He had decided to give them each normal names to use in this form to avoid drawing unwanted attention when they went on missions that required them to not be noticeable.
It was quite a surprise for Team Prime to discover that Jack wasn't human and in fact a lot stronger than they realized. The government, due to a secret peace agreement, agreed to not reveal the names of the dxd team. However the three great powers started to detect anomalies in Japan.
To make sure no one detected his signature or got suspicious on how much muscle he had he was given a modified version of Lancelot's ring which not only hid his signature and made him look weak but also had the ability to turn itself invisible .
After he was given the ring he was sent to live with his mother who was getting a better income. Although he had missed his harem he agreed to move with his mother to investigate the anomalies that were occurring.
But now he was back and he is finally going to get married to Rias and some of the other girls in his harem soon which was one of the reasons he came back to Japan. He was now currently in one of his mansions which was located in Kyoto. He was living there with the rest of his peerage and familiars. Right now he was in bed with his nude servant and Queen, Yasaka who had just started to wake up.
"That was good darling, just like the other sessions we have had." Yasaka said.
"Well I always do what I can to please my women." He replied. 'To be more accurate 45 women but who's counting anyway.' He thought to himself
"I think the rest of your peerage is waking up so do you want me to make you and everyone else something for breakfast?"
"Yes please."
"What would you like to eat?"
"I think everyone would like chocolates chip pancakes, I mean who wouldn't right."
"Okay I should be ready in about half an hour." She says while putting her clothes back on and giving him a kiss on the lips.
As soon as she left Jack started to think about those few years and how he was to marry several goddesses and how he also managed to become the head of the gods in Olympus after Zeus, Poseidon, Hades, and several other gods had sealed themselves with Trihexa also known as 666.
He rembered how Athena came to him and brought him to Olympus and told him that Zeus decided to name him the head and that Zeus, Poseidon, Hades and two other gods known as Pan and Hephaestus had left him a small amount of their power for him to use through the use of containers which he had absorbed through his pieces which had all become mutated sometime after he became a high class devil. The pieces that were used gained different symbols. Those symbols were a lightning bolt, a trident, a skull, a tree, a hammer forging something on a anvil. He also learned that Zeus had arranged for him to marry the two virgin goddesses Artemis and Athena along with Aphrodite and Demeter.
That wasn't the only powers that Jack got. He also got two new abilities not counting the one he gained during the battle against 666. Those abilities were Ddraig's which were Salvation and Time Break. Salvation was a move that cured many types of poisons and diseases while Time Break allowed him to slow down time.
It was because of Salvation that he was able to get Tiamat and (unintentionally) gained several Dragons as his familiars, who happened to be female. His other ability that he gained was when he used Dragon Dedication and gained another one of Ddraig's original moves called the Blazing Inferno of Fiery Flame. Speaking of power he also got an even more powerful form than Dragon Dedication. He called it the Crimson Dragon Drive which turned him into a Crimson Dragon. His powers in this form were mixed with the Cardinal Crimson and Diablos Dragon. The infinity blasters were upgraded into the mega infinity blasters with the help of Ddraig, who created it by combining the infinity blasters with the crimson blaster and Longinus Smasher. Instead they are located on his back which he can summon at will. In his dragon form he was considered the 10th strongest being.
Moving on devil society had also took some changes with the lose of Serafall,Sirzech, and Fallbium. Now instead of their being four satans there were seven. Those seven were Vali, Ajuka, Grayfia, Sairaorg, Diehauser, Roygun, and some member of the house of Amon. Heaven also took some major changes after the loss of Michael, Uriel, and Raphael. After they were loss Gabriel had to temporarily become center for the system and while heaven didn't suffer anymore it did not work as well when Michael was the center and the other archangels were around.
Fortunately hope was found in the hopes of a goddess names Palutena who happened to be God's and Lady Hera's secret daughter and was powerful to the point where she could become a center in the system should something happen to him and Michael.
However God had given her another purpose which was to marry him to help build even stronger relationships with the devils. Apparently, he knew somehow this was all going to happen .
However Jack soon stopped thinking about all this when Kuroka came into his room.
"Master, I hope your not to tired because this naughty kitten needs some milk."
"Not at all." Jack said as he laid back in bed.
The moment he said that Kuroka basically pounced him and started giving him a blowjob. Moans soon came from Jack as Kuroka swirled her tongue a few times on his cock as if it was a lollipop. Jack couldn't help it anymore and flipped her over to be in a 69 position and started to lick her pussy earning him several moans from Kuroka which he felt vibrating on his cock.
Jack soon told Kuroka that he was going to come which only encouraged her to suck harder in order to get her milk. Jack then come inside her mouth while Kuroka sprays him with her juices. They then start liking their juices of each other.
"That really is some good milk." Kuroka says as she gets off him and cuddles next to him.
"Whatever makes my naughty kitty happy." Jack says.
"I'm not the only naughty one in this bed."
"True but I never said that I wasn't or that I was done." Jack says earning a small laugh from Kuroka who looks to see Jack's cock is hard again. She started stroking it and asks "What position do you want to be in?" Jack just whispers in her ear causing her to blush.
"You really love to be the dominant one don't you big boy." Kuroka teases before walking to the wall with Jack behind her.
"Yep." He replied in a goofy sort of way. He starts to tease her pussy with his cock before pushing in.
"Oh yeah, fuck my brains out you sexy dragon." Kuroka moaned. Jack started to kiss her while one of his hands groped her breast earning him some moans from her. Soon they climaxed together while they were kissing.
'He will definitely wind up getting me pregnant one of these days' Kuroka thought to herself.
They heard Yasaka yell downstairs that it was time for breakfast and immediately got cleaned up and head downstairs.
A/N: This is my first fic so tell me what you think and also here is Jack's peerage and familiars.
Peerage ( they are all mutated pieces except for Xenovia and Ravel)
Queen: Yasaka
Rook: Kuroka
Rook: Mirajane Strauss
Knight: Erza Scarlet
Knight: Xenovia
Bishop: Ultear
Bishop: Ravel
Pawn: Kiyome Abe
Pawn: Le Fay
Pawn: Lavina ( she appears in slash dog and volume 21)
Pawn: Arcee her techno organic form is sometimes called Sadie
Pawn: Chromia her techno organic form is sometimes called Crystal ( On deviantart someone made a human pic of arcee based on the fanfic Only Human, that is what chromia's third form resembles just a bit older)
Pawn: Flare up her techno organic form is sometimes called Lauren( Her appearance is based off from the wings universe)
Pawn: Samus Aran
Pawn : Isuzu Sento
Familiars: Ryuuteimaru,Tiamat, Clair(Pokemon), Flannery(Pokemon), Cynthia(Pokemon), Cynder (The Spyro game series),Saphira( Inheritance Cycle),Virgo(fairy tail),Aquarius(Fairy tail), Kinana(fairy tail), cortana (halo 4), Bova Tannin ,and possibly the spectre dragon.
Harem: his peerage, his female familiars , rias, Akeno, koneko, rosseweisse, asia, jeanne,reya, tubusa yura, irina, Gabriel , elmenhide, roygun belphegor, aphrodite, athena, artemis, Demeter, amaterasu, palutena, sylphy, and katsumi.
List of familars
Xenovia: Colchis bull
Ravel : Phoenix
Mirajane : a dog spirit named Alex
Kiyome: Katsumi ( the lamia that she has)
Sento: Sylphy
Chromia/crystal: Colchis bull
Ultear: a griffon
Erza: a pale horse
Le Fay: Fenrir
A/N 3 : The format of my writing is going to be mixed with Pov's and no Pov's.
List of Greece Gods who sealed themselves with Trihexa
Poseidon, Zeus, Hades, Amphitrite, Hera,Persephone,Hephaestus,Ares, Pan, and Hercules.
A/N 4 : Sento has two rare sacred gears that are called gun make and war machine. Gun make which allows her to make any type of gun she wants with whatever effect she wants it to be. War machine is an armor type sacred gear that will have several forms/types. Also ultear, mirajane, and erza sacred gears are completely the same as their abilities in Fairy Tail and even have the same name. Also Samus power suit is an artificial sacred gear mixed with technology that she got at the Grigori.
War machine forms
Incomplete form : iron man mark 2
Pseudo species : war machine mark 1
Balance Breaker: war machine mark 2
Rook: Igor ( same color scheme as war machine)
Knight: Shotgun
Bishop : Sneaky
Queen: War machine mark 3
Character Looks:
Amatersu: black hair and gold eyes
Aphrodite: Long slightly curly auburn hair but occasionally turns herself blonde and has blue eyes.
Athena: Game of War/Strong resemblance to Kate Upton
Artemis : Auburn hair ( There are pictures of her with Orion on deviantart)
Cynder (human form) : slightly loose black hair with sone red at the ends and has slightly pale skin.
Demeter: Blonde hair ( looks like her appearance in Percy Jackson the Lightning Thief movie)
Saphira (human form) : long slightly curly blonde hair, blue eyes, and has slight tannish blonde skin tone.
Flare-up(Techno organic form) : Same hair color as her armor color and sorta like Salma's from Amagi Brilliant Park. Her hair is also long and she has blue eyes. Looks to be about 16 -18years old.
Arcee(Sadie / techno organic form) : Long black hair and blue eyes. Looks around 18-20 years old.