My first fanfic please R+R

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Chapter 1-The Veteran

Flashback-2 weeks ago

"hold up" Bill said to the other survivors as they walked through an alley in a ruined city. He kneeled down to examine the dead body of a hunter, who had been savagely killed. "Ain't seen nothin' like this before", he remarked as he observed that the body seemed just a bit more... civilized. The hunter had a rare thing about it; it had both of it's eyes (a trait unheard of in a hunter), it had the hood of the plain sweatshirt pulled back, Other than it's major wound, it had little blood on it. He was about to check in it's wound in it's throat to examine the vocal cords when Francis exclaimed "Jeez, don't let that stop you from smearing it all over yourself." Aggravated by the Francis' lack of an open mind, he wiped the blood on Francis "They're changing!" he responded. If only the others could see what he saw....

End of flashback

The four had just fought off a tank and a horde caused by the scattering of boomer bile and had made it into the safe house. After a long argument over where they would go next, Bill decided to go cool off alone. He had his trusty M16 and a .45 Magnum pistol along with a first-aid kit. Despite the pleas of his comerades, he started to walk the street alone. After a while, he started to head back but suddenly heard the something thud on the roof above him. Shit, he thought If I get pounced now, I won't have anyone to help me. He took off in a sprint back to th safe house but the hunter leaped off and landed in front of him. Bill wondered two things 1. Why didn't the the hunter scream as it pounced? 2. Why didn't it directly pounce him, and why was it hesitating now? As he reached for his Pistol the hunter knocked it to the ground. What the hell! He thought, he had never seen a lone zombie do that. Bill noticed the Hunter was heavily injured. "Please" said the hunter "I need help".

So how was that for Chapter one? Please review, I'll have another chapter up soon