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Summary: She lost everything and now is cold and seeking revenge. He lost everything and lusts for bloodshed.......What happens when these two meet? Emotions....Romance? NOT USAGI/VEGETA!
Chapter 1: Lost Souls
"Baka onna...why did you have to get yourself hurt?" A black spiky haired man yelled. "Yesh Vegeta you have to be so cold? A blue haired woman asked while lying in a hospital bed. "Honestly "Vegeta you need to chill out." Woman spoke again. This conversation was only a distant memory...he lost that woman 2000 years ago....now immortal and lost everything. The woman he loved died and his son and daughter....dead. All was lost and gone now he lusted for blood and suffering to show how much pain he was in but in his opinion earthlings were not worthy opponents. After wishing immortality from the eternal dragon of earth and trying hard to revive his wife but failed miserably..... He had emptiness.
"Neo-Queen Serenity NO!" A young woman screamed as her queen and best friend was brutally attacked. "Rei...be strong and live." The queen said to the woman before dying. The haunting memories ran through her mind every breathing moment for the last 2000 years. Granted immortality from her queen she looked no older than 23. "I swore back then that I'd have my revenge.... And I shall carry it out." She said with a monotone. Her blood red gown flapped around her in the black winds while her raven hair danced and played with the wind while a vision came to her. She looked at the planet Earth and sighed.
Vegeta heard of a legend long ago about a time of great peace being destroyed and one warrior was left after the war that broke. He never believed it until one day he sensed a power level that rivaled his...it was coming from the sister planet of Vegeta.... Mars. Rei sensed a dangerous sinister power coming towards her small kingdom and saw her people take shelter. "My people are frightened of this force.... But is it powerful enough to rival my crystal.... the Hell Crystal?" Rei asked herself while taking a blood red crystal out of a cased brooch. "Your highness we must get you to shelter!" A guard said to the Queen of War. "No my kingdom is in danger...I must protect it." Rei said.
Vegeta who flew to the red planet landed on it and saw a grand palace in the distance. He wondered onto the palace grounds then he saw in a red gown standing before him holding a red crystal in her cupped hands. She had dark icy violet eyes and long raven hair that touched the ground. "Your highness you should leave to safety." A guard to her left said. "You dare question my judgment?" Rei hissed. N...No Queen Rei." The guard said shakily. "You threaten my kingdom with your negative aura what do you want?" Rei asked Vegeta. "I'm looking for a worthy opponent to fight." Vegeta said. "So you come to challenge War?" The guard on Rei's right asked. "Yes, now where is he?" Vegeta asked.
"She is right here." The guard on Rei's left said. "What...this onna is War itself?" Vegeta asked. "Yes, you seem to have a problem with that?" Rei asked and her crystal shimmered while her anger twitched. The guards on Rei's sides slowly backed away while shaking in fear. Vegeta looked at Rei and sensed the powers of hell in the crystal. "Is that the legendary ginzou (sp?) of Hell?" Vegeta found himself asking. "Yes, it is." Rei said. Vegeta could sense something within her.... sorrow, pain, anger, hate, and bloodthirsty wanted revenge. He could read her like a book. Her eyes showed that she saw a lot of blood, pale skin showed she was a fighter he found all of this out by just looking at her.
Her slim petite form moved slightly in a twitch for this guy was checking her out how dare he!
End of Chapter 1: Lost Souls
What do you think.... Pretty good or did it suck? Please don't flame me unless my story was THAT bad k? I need at least 20 or 30 reviews so I can post the next chapter I am now currently typing chapters 2-8 and if you wanna know why I am not releasing the other chapters is because I want to leave you all in suspense got a problem with that TUFF LUCK!
Well thank you for reading my first chapter......
Summary: She lost everything and now is cold and seeking revenge. He lost everything and lusts for bloodshed.......What happens when these two meet? Emotions....Romance? NOT USAGI/VEGETA!
Chapter 1: Lost Souls
"Baka onna...why did you have to get yourself hurt?" A black spiky haired man yelled. "Yesh Vegeta you have to be so cold? A blue haired woman asked while lying in a hospital bed. "Honestly "Vegeta you need to chill out." Woman spoke again. This conversation was only a distant memory...he lost that woman 2000 years ago....now immortal and lost everything. The woman he loved died and his son and daughter....dead. All was lost and gone now he lusted for blood and suffering to show how much pain he was in but in his opinion earthlings were not worthy opponents. After wishing immortality from the eternal dragon of earth and trying hard to revive his wife but failed miserably..... He had emptiness.
"Neo-Queen Serenity NO!" A young woman screamed as her queen and best friend was brutally attacked. "Rei...be strong and live." The queen said to the woman before dying. The haunting memories ran through her mind every breathing moment for the last 2000 years. Granted immortality from her queen she looked no older than 23. "I swore back then that I'd have my revenge.... And I shall carry it out." She said with a monotone. Her blood red gown flapped around her in the black winds while her raven hair danced and played with the wind while a vision came to her. She looked at the planet Earth and sighed.
Vegeta heard of a legend long ago about a time of great peace being destroyed and one warrior was left after the war that broke. He never believed it until one day he sensed a power level that rivaled his...it was coming from the sister planet of Vegeta.... Mars. Rei sensed a dangerous sinister power coming towards her small kingdom and saw her people take shelter. "My people are frightened of this force.... But is it powerful enough to rival my crystal.... the Hell Crystal?" Rei asked herself while taking a blood red crystal out of a cased brooch. "Your highness we must get you to shelter!" A guard said to the Queen of War. "No my kingdom is in danger...I must protect it." Rei said.
Vegeta who flew to the red planet landed on it and saw a grand palace in the distance. He wondered onto the palace grounds then he saw in a red gown standing before him holding a red crystal in her cupped hands. She had dark icy violet eyes and long raven hair that touched the ground. "Your highness you should leave to safety." A guard to her left said. "You dare question my judgment?" Rei hissed. N...No Queen Rei." The guard said shakily. "You threaten my kingdom with your negative aura what do you want?" Rei asked Vegeta. "I'm looking for a worthy opponent to fight." Vegeta said. "So you come to challenge War?" The guard on Rei's right asked. "Yes, now where is he?" Vegeta asked.
"She is right here." The guard on Rei's left said. "What...this onna is War itself?" Vegeta asked. "Yes, you seem to have a problem with that?" Rei asked and her crystal shimmered while her anger twitched. The guards on Rei's sides slowly backed away while shaking in fear. Vegeta looked at Rei and sensed the powers of hell in the crystal. "Is that the legendary ginzou (sp?) of Hell?" Vegeta found himself asking. "Yes, it is." Rei said. Vegeta could sense something within her.... sorrow, pain, anger, hate, and bloodthirsty wanted revenge. He could read her like a book. Her eyes showed that she saw a lot of blood, pale skin showed she was a fighter he found all of this out by just looking at her.
Her slim petite form moved slightly in a twitch for this guy was checking her out how dare he!
End of Chapter 1: Lost Souls
What do you think.... Pretty good or did it suck? Please don't flame me unless my story was THAT bad k? I need at least 20 or 30 reviews so I can post the next chapter I am now currently typing chapters 2-8 and if you wanna know why I am not releasing the other chapters is because I want to leave you all in suspense got a problem with that TUFF LUCK!
Well thank you for reading my first chapter......