Hi guys I'm back, SO I have just decided to retry my effort at the second story for my bleach high school dxd fan fiction, I know I royally screwed the first attempt right up the wazoo and I feel pretty silly that it took me 8 chapters to realize just how bad it was so to all the people out there that read my first one and loved and then read that well flop I am SO SO SO SORRY, I hope to make this one better so please R&R my chapters with your thought and if there is anything at all even the minute-est of details please don not hestitate to message and I'll find away to fix my chapters so without further shit dribbling and yada yada yada here is my first chapter enjoy
Chapter one: Declaration of a game,
A few days after Ichigo Rias and Akeno went to speak to Rias' brother and father in the underworld, a messenger came by the house to speak to the group and officially announce the games time location and rules so that all the non devil participants could fresh up on the way the game would work.
"ahem, ATTENTION ALL YOU LOWLY HUMANS THIS IS A MESSAGE FROM THE GREAT SIRZECHS GREMORY, ALL OF YOU TRASHY HUMANS WHO WISH TO PARTICIPATE IN THE RATING TOURNAMENT BETWEEN THE GREAT RISER PHEONIX AND THE LOWLY ICHIGO PLEASE PREPARE YOURSELF FOR BATTLE IN 4 WEEKS DURATION ON THE DAY OF THE FOURTH WEEKS END YOU SHALL BATTLE, TILL THEN TRAIN." The messenger said as he disappeared in a blue circle,
As Ichigo and the rest of his friends stood there dumb struck and rather ticked off at the way the man spoke about them Ichigo with a tweak in his eye said
"That...scumbag...son...of a...oh how I'm gunna...oooh, you're so dead riser you and your whorish harem are so freaking dead"
Just as Ichigo was about to about to flip out to and let loose a swing of curse words Rias stepped in and said
"ok now easy Ichigo he was obviously paid off by riser in some form or another to do that but my question is why in the hell did he say 4 weeks not 4 months, puzzling, look how about you go find Issei and have a training session you may feel better after that"
Ichigo in huff kissed her on the check and left, to find Issei, meanwhile Rias called Akeno to the dining area
"My president so nice to see you two 'interacting' so early in the morning" Akeno teased as she smiled like a silly school girl
"Akeno we just had a rather rude messenger from riser phoenix and he in between his insults basically said nothing about the rules time or location other than one thing, that the games have been moved up to four weeks from now"
"what four weeks, you sure about that, did your brother or father say anything about that, maybe riser paid this fool off to also say four weeks to throw us off" Akeno said trying not to put to much acknowledgement on the situation
"either way we need to go see my brother he needs to shed some light on this matter"
Both the girls stepped into a transporter circle and moments later appeared in the throne of the palace of Sirzechs gremory,
"Hello brother"
"hello Rias, may I ask why you are here"
"sure, I am here to ask why the hell you moved the rating tournament from four months from now to four weeks and why in the hell did risers pain In the ass messenger come and insult Ichigo and then leave without even explaining any of the details, all he did was act like a complete fuck and I had to struggle to keep him from barging in here and ripping the head off every fucking asshole in sight, you explain right now or so help you I'll kick your ass boy"
for the first time in Sirzechs life he was genuinely scared of his little sister, as he sat there wondering what to do he snapped to and said
"Hold on a messenger from riser appeared in your home today, that can't be right the only messenger supposed to go out should be mine, tell me did he say anything at all that about times location or rules"
"Only that four weeks from now the games will start up"
"well then at least he didn't totally screw us over then, look either way the damage is done, you see any messenger sent out by one of the seven pillars is a formal change in the plans, meaning the games are now four weeks hence forth, but seeing as he wants play like this and try to cheat ill send out a new messenger with some altered rules to the ones I wanted to set down, please go home and wait for my messenger to come, we were both allowed one messenger by father I guess I will use my messenger to relay a change in rules, see you later sis"
Before rias could ask what her brother meant by all that she was taken by the shoulder by grafia and they both disappeared into a transporter circle and appeared in Ichigo's house moments later,
"Rias I think you should relax for now, I want you and Ichigo and all your friends to continue going to school and training till the games commence, leave the worries to me and your brother, also till the games start you are not set foot in the underworld at all lest you be disqualified, as of now your relationship with this young man has set your residency in the real world at this location to set foot in the underworld is a violation of the current rules of the tournament of invading the competitions home space so, please remain here Rias, goodbye"
And just like with her brother Grafia was gone before she could get a word in edge wise, as she sat on the couch in the living room rias looked out the window and sore Ichigo and Issei sitting on the grass smiling,
"Well at least their getting along" she said with a smile
OUTSIDE
"yo Ichigo tell me how did Rias end up falling in love with you after just one day, I'm curious how does a girl end up with a dude after one day that's now where near enough time to get to know a guys enough to even like the dude as a friends let alone as some you like enough to ask them out on date so tell me how did you do it how did you win her over in one day"
"I didn't do a thing really, well other than the night before rias, koneko and kiba all ended up face to face with and adjuchas hollow, and when I stepped in there was a devil there that was classed as rogue I think she called it, well this devil somehow managed to kill the hollow and feed on it before It disappeared, so the devil changed into something well weird, it went after rias and the others I had to go hollow to kill it, first time in ages to I might add, it wasn't until I killed it I noticed rias and the others there watching me mask and all, when I turned they surrounded me, I ended up incapacitating them, next day at school we remembered each other power signature and at first sight fell for each other, a corny story at the centre really but the truth is truth really"
Issei looked at Ichigo dumbfounded and thought "you sly prick you went out and scoped her out didn't you, then when you handed her, her ass you jumped and made good of the situation like a true perv, I taught you well" Issei said in a cocky laugh
Ichigo's vain in his temple pulsed and he extended his arm and launched Issei across the yard,
"You sick son a bitch Issei I'm going to kill you" Ichigo screamed as he felt a pulse run through his body, and he collapsed on the grass unconscious,
Inside the house rias had heard Ichigo yell at Issei but not seen him collapse, "haa was good while they lasted, huh what's that's sound"
"YO ICHIGO" Issei screamed as he ran over to his friend, as he bent down to pick him up a black wave of reistu flooded ichigo's entire body and a ichigo's Gilgamesh armour appeared on his arms and legs but it kept growing it covered his chest and abdomen it grew around his head like a helmet then suddenly two white horns grew from his head and the armour engulfed them too in a scale like coating, two red eyes glowed from the sockets in the helmet and the blades on his back flared in red and black flames,
"yo dude you ok in there say something man, YO YOU HERE ME" Issei said aloud just as went to tap on the mask Rias screamed
"ISSEI NOOO, DON'T TOUCH HIM, HE'LL KILL YOU" she said as a red circle appeared beneath him just a blade swept past Issei and a small cut appeared on his neck as he appeared next to Rias.
"ISSEI what in the seven hells did you do, why is like this after 3 years he hasn't once entered that form he said and now of all times you did something to tick him off didn't you"
Issei looked at her then pointed as a fully armoured in red and blue neon veined armoured Ichigo hurtled toward them Rias quickly teleported them to the underworld where a cut appeared on her arm and blood flooded down her arm as Issei called for help.
"Issei what did you do to him" she asked more forcefully
"Look president I did nothing we had joke about how he met you and he socked me like always, it was just our usual joke, then he suddenly grabbed his chest and passed out cold then all of a sudden a black wave engulfed him and then well you saw the rest tell me what the fuck is he"
Rias sighed and only said "you know how a few years back there was that massive invasion of the lower quarters of hell just after the vali incident well, that invader that we had so much trouble with was him, it was our Ichigo, and now he is back but this time in the real world, the human world and he much, much stronger"
MEANWHILE IN THE HUMAN WORLD
Ichigo was on rampage around town he was blowing up buildings sacking highways and melting fields the city was on fire and the entire soul society 13 guardian squads were there entrapping him in a kido barrier witch only lasted about 5 seconds before he cockily put one finger on it and it exploded.
Just as he was about to move a purple barrier was erected and one of ichigo's horns fell to the floor of the purple barrier and he turned human again but this time he was different, his skin was pale and he had a hole in his chest, he had red and blue tattoos all over his body running in lines mirroring veins also his Gilgamesh armour was no longer gauntlets and leggings but a full body suit of pitch black armour representing that of heavy plate mail, his blades had changed as well,
His great sword was no longer a strait edged blade but a heavily toothed blade with an eye in the hilt, the short blade had grown in length and replacing itself on his back the blade had growth in length and girth and become that of a cleaver but instead of pitch black the blade was covered in red lines leaking lava and on fire, a small spike extended from the hilt downwards like a spur, it was dripping a green ooze like poison,
As the barrier dissipated 3 forms floated in the air one the size of a tank with a black and purple right arm and one pure white on his face he had a swirling mask covering each side in the same colours, the man to his right was a man dressed in a full white suit with blue stripes up one side and a bow just as tall as him with two eyes at the top and bottom of the limbs, the female who was slowly letting the barrier down had long flowing orange air an two hair pins resembling flowers, the tall man picked up Ichigo and the girl let her power return to the clips, while the smaller man let his bow disappear in to thin air,
"well-well-well kurosaki you finally unlocked all your power, to bad this happened when you did it you foolish prick, well guys lets go I assume his new house around here somewhere"
Ok guys that's the first chapter I hope you all enjoyed reading it so please R&R my chapter I wish know what I can do to make the following chapters good, so speak up and tell what you got, till next phoenix out
choa