This is the first story ive written ever and i know its not real good and i know i misspell some things. its still very short im still working on it. so it would be nice if you could review it and give me some pointers on how to improve...this was only INSPIRED by pete wentz & fall out boy...and the movie "bridge to terabithia" i'm not TECHNICALLY using real people because no last names are mentioned.
Pete has never actually...met angelina, but he's been daydreaming of her for a while now. he thinks to him self "a hot girl like her would never like a guy like me" She doesn't even realize he exists...or so it would seem.
Pete drifts off daydreaming again---Pete says hello to Angelina, she says hello back, then Pete comes back to the real world still staring accross the room at Angelina and David saying to him "hello...hello..HELLO?!? earth to Pete! is anyone in there?!"
Pete laughs and says "im fine dude, dont spaz out on me there."
David says "are you EVER going to ask her out? or are you just gonna keep sitting there drooling over her?"
Pete, still being very distracted by Angelina, with a very vacant look in his eye, says " ...huh?"
David sighs in frustraition and says "nevermind"
And Pete continues staring at Angelina. many minutes later however, Joe calls Pete's cellphone and invites him and David over.