*A/N- Hey guys! So this is my first fanfic! So this story is an alternate
Ending for right when Eddie kisses Loren but the twist is he hasn't
broken up with Chloe yet. Hope you enjoy.
* Loren's POV- Is he really leaning in to kiss me?! Is this for real? *
I was so caught up in thinking that I hadn't noticed that his lips had touched mine. I gladly accepted his kiss. After about a minute I pulled back
Eddie- Why did you pull away?
Me- Eddie! You have a fiancé! You can't kiss another girl!
Eddie- Oh. You're right. Sorry Loren. I didn't mean to put you in that
position.
Me- It's ok! I better get to bed! Goodnight Eddie.
Eddie- Goodnight Loren.
I slowly closed the door. I leaned against the door wondering why I had stopped him. Little did I know, my mom was watching me stare off into space.
Nora- Lo? Why are you staring off into space?
Me- MOM YOU SCARED ME! But I am staring off into space because
Eddie just kissed me.
Nora- WHAT?! What did you do?
I explained the whole situation to my mom
Nora- Well I know you are upset that you stopped things but that was a good
choice sweetie.
Me- Uggh! I really wanted him to break up with Chloe BEFORE he
kissed me!
Nora- I know sweetie, I know. He just has confused feelings right now.
Maybe he will break up with Chloe for you.
Me- Ya I guess so. Well I'm going to go to bed now. Night mom. Love you.
Nora- Love you too sweetie
*Eddie's POV- Should I break up with Chloe! I mean she's hot and all but it's different with Loren. When I kissed her I felt a spark.
I opened the door to his penthouse and there was Chloe….only in a bra and panties. She looked so hot and I wanted to pounce all over her, but yet she I didn't want to.
Me- Chloe, I think we need to talk.
Chloe- About what babe?
She leans closer to me and starts kissing my neck. I lean towards her lips but then stop in my tracks.
Me- CHLOE! I'm serious! We need to talk!
Chloe- Ok. What is it?
Me- Well I have been thinking that we need to break up.
Chloe- WHAT?! I AM YOUR FIANCE EDDIE! ARE YOU LEAVING ME FOR THAT SON OF A BITCH VALLEY GIRL?!
Me- Yes I am. But she is not a son of a bitch. I think you are referring to yourself.
Chloe- How can you say that to me?! (Letting fake tears flow) I am your fiancé!
Me- Uh don't you mean EX fiancé!
Chloe kicks me in my private parts REALLY hard! It made me more than angry
Me- CHLOE GET OUT OF MY HOUSE AND NEVER COME BACK. GIVE ME YOUR HOUSE KEY AND YOUR RING. I NEVER WANT TO SEE YOU AGAIN
Chloe- But Eddie! (Still fake crying)
Me- GET OUT NOW!
Chloe- FINE!
She lays her key and ring on the table and walks out. The door was still opened.
Me- Thank God!
Chloe- (From down the hall) I heard that!
Me- (leaning out the door) GOOD!
And with that I slammed the door.
So that's my first chapter! Pretty boring buts it's just the beginning. Did you like it? Please review and tell me if you liked it and if I should do another chapter! Bye! XOXO