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-WHAT! --I heard a shout of down stairs. It was Edward's shout.

I run down and saw Renesmee, Jacob and Edward. There was something in their looks… Renesmee was so freak out like if she were waiting more shouts or to be thrown out of a the house. Jacob… was… like happy but at the same time… like if doubt , fear and shame about something… And Edward... mad.

-What is happening?—I asked calmly

-Asked her—said Edward in a cold voice.

-Reneesme, whats is it?

-mom… I'm… marrying Jacob—she said slowly

As soon as I heard that I take out the shield and said ´folow me. NOW.` so he did. We ran all the way to the hut. Once we get their I start.

-WHAT IS THAT SUPOSE TO MEAN!! SHE´S ONLY 8 YEARS OLD!!

-I can´t stand it too. But it`s her decision so we can´t do anything—he said with calm voice.

He wrapped me in his arms. i manage to calm down and kiss him.

-so……--I started

-so maybe….

-maybe we should give them our blessings?—I just… didn't like it, but they love each other so….

-we should, lets get back.

We run with our hands entwined. When we arrived they were all sitting at the living room.

-reneesme, jacob?- I call them

-coming

Tookig her hand I drag them to the kitchen. Still coudn´t bieleve what I was about to do. Edward and I still were with our hand entwined a he was looking at me with big eyes. After taking a deep breath I start

-Reneesme… tou know I marry your father… at a pretty young age… because we were deeply in love…

-yes I know mom-she whisper. I sighn.

-ok. You´ll have our blessing…. With one condition-I said with a big smile.

Edward was smiling too…oh! Right. I hadn´t put on the shield again.

-come on , Bella! What else?-jacob scream

-Jacob! Just shut up, ok? Shes just 8 years old and is getting married-he nodded, so I continue- I don´t want to be grandma at least for ten years more.

-Thanks mom! You are the best!!!-She scream excited. She was jumping of happiness. She gave Edward and me a kiss on the check and run into Alice.

So…. What do you think? Please give me ideas!

I know im not good at grammar or… well sometimes writing.

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