(yes this is my first story so lets make the comments nice and easy on my eyes, but suggestions that could potentially improve my writing skills are always welcomed, once they r put in a nice way =D)
I opened my eyes. It was a careless and extremely reckless idea and too this moment I still don't know why the hell I did it. For those of you who don't know, I am currently strapped against a pressurised fence(aka I move I get a very large shock, that meant even the smallest fraction of a movement set it off), but as to how I ended up here, pinned up against a fence with a very tricky and annoying predicament, is needless to know, I live in the present and refuse to dwell on the past, my enemies don't live long enough to learn my name, but you will now know me as Fang…
The compound, from what I could see, was at least a one hundred meter stretch from my left to right, and maybe two hundred meters in front of me their was a very large grey building. I vaguely recognised it, but I couldn't put a name or location on it. After being captive for what I guessed was three days, I was in withdrawal. My drug was different too most, and I had the only source, the drugs name, Max for short, a teenage girl with an amazing twist and the temper of an English rugby fan. The rest of the Flock, to my knowledge, were still being held captive in a location that no-one knows of(and before you ask they could be in the same place I am in, but lets be honest, again, the bad guys are never that stupid).
Even me, the almighty Fang, has issues when being held prisoner by evil master-minds, that refuse to feed me anymore then cat feed sprinkled with the occasional helping of lime juice. My wings ached like never before, worse then when I was in the School. My arms felt as if someone had gotten a bulldozer and tied a rope to my wrist and proceeded to drive. And the fact I couldn't sit down made my legs feel like a strange jelly like substance. Even if I could move, I doubt I could, the complete lack of energy was overwhelming. The heat off the burning sun reflected off of the barbed wire fencing, to make it worse the fencing formed an arched roof over my head, so I couldn't fly out if I needed too. Which means, no-one could fly in either.
It was impossible to sleep as well, just when I begin to drift off, I would move just a tiny inch and then, as if lightning had struck me, I would jump upright with a thunderous roar of pain as the fence, to which I am strapped, would send a bolt of electricity through my body…. I day-dreamed sometimes though, of what if the Flock and I were normal, if all this didn't happen, if we would ever meet, and if we did, would we love each other as we do now. I also dreamed of Max breaking down the gates and riding in on a tank and blowing that building, to which I must continually stare at(not like I have much of a choice), and rescue me, but then I would suddenly become practical, and say to myself its over, there is an army of soldiers here, better trained then the ones we faced in the past. I knew it, and everyone else here definitely knew it, that I was a slave to anything they wanted, I am just very surprised that they have left my wings in tact, but how long will that last?…
The clock on the wall ticked as another second of her life painstakingly ended and another began. Was everything that she done a mistake? She argued with herself on this topic everyday, the fight always ended as a stalemate. A young and ambitious doctor entered the room, "excuse me professor, but it appears the subject is weakening, shall we proceed with the tests as planned?" You had better excuse yourself, you have made me lose my train of taught, and they are rare to come by these days. Sorry, what did you say? Its weakening?... Already, well this has got my attention, and what of the other half? Has it weakened?" The doctor stared nervously at the floor, almost afraid to answer to authority figures that are so high above himself," No ma'am, no change as of yet." "Proceed with the plan then, and no screw ups this time, we already lost 3 specimens to these experiments"...