This is my first fic

Sorry for speech and grammar mistake 'cause English isn't my mother language

R&R please...

One Last Time

A young man with orange hair sped along the freeway on his motorcycle, his silver- haired boyfriend riding behind him.

His helmet, covering most of his head, bit into his forehead, and he felt a trickle of sweat slide down the side of his head.

Toushiro had his head leaning slightly on his shoulder, watching the farm side fly by quickly.

They were going fast… too fast for his comfort.

"Can you slow down?" Toushiro asked tentatively, loudly so Ichigo could hear.

"Oh, this is how fast it should be, and besides, do you want to get to the party on time or not?" His voice sounded as carefree as it always did, but, unknown to him, was barely covering a part of him that was screaming.

"Well, I guess…"

A few minutes passed, and Toushiro knew they would soon come to the curve of the freeway.

Suddenly, Ichigo called out to him. "Can you hug me for a moment? I'm cold."

Toushiro looked at him strangely, but the wind was freezing, and he wrapped his arms around his torso anyway.

A moment later, he commanded him to take off his helmet and for him to wear it. When he asked why, he simply replied, "My forehead was getting too hot."

He, feeling just a bit doubtful, obeyed again, placing the helmet to his head.

A week and a half later, an old man, a doctor by the name of Isshin, received a newspaper clipping from his friend and neighbor, who had recently attended a funeral.

A paragraph read this:

"15 year old Kurosaki Ichigo knew his breaks were wearing loose, and could cause serious injury if he did not replace them. However, he did not, thinking he would replace them after a few more rides.

Two days later, while riding with his Boyfriend, Hitsugaya Toushiro, he knew the horrible had happened; the breaks no longer worked, and they were riding at 70 MPH on Freeway 8-80. Because he was wearing the only helmet, Ichigo knew one of them would die.

Hitsugaya notes that he had asked him to hug him and wear the helmet, lying to his and saying that he was cold, then hot.

He now knows that he lied to him for two reasons: he wanted to feel his arms around him one last time, and he wanted him to live.

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