Galuna Island, with a secret!

Chapter 1

Many year's earlier...

"Ototo(Japanese for little brother.)! Ototo!" I scream as I rush past the elders and into my home town. Now piles of rubble and giant area's of fire. My name is Silver, and I am an ice mage. I have really long silver hair that drags on the ground. I have two tiny braids from the front of my hair that is pulled back and attached to my hair in the back. I have bright blue eyes almost silver looking with tan skin. I have a strange birth mark that looks alot like a girl trapped in ice. Little did I know, that was my fate. (My home town currently is being destroyed by Deliora. Back to the story! ^_^) I scream in terror as I find him clinging to Deliora's back. "Ototo!" I scream running towards Deloria despite the desperate calls of my aniki. (Japanese for big brother.) Reaching Deliora's feet pick up a rock and throw it at him. Yeah, yeah I know. What can a little rock do. I was 6 at the time, can't really blame me I knew like, two spells. Anywho, "Ice make! Net!" I shout using both hands I make a net big enough to hold my ototo in. The ice was carved with lilly's, my favorite flower. I watch my ototo drop off the back of Deliora and into the net. "Ice make! Griffin!" I shout again and a huge ice griffin appear catching the net before flying towards safety outside of town. I unluckily get stuck with Deliora who had turned around and was headed straight towards me. I screamed before a light blinded me and I felt suspensed in air for a second, then everything turned black...

Hey I am new so please try not to give me just negative comments only. Well that's just chapter 1. I hope you enjoy the 2nd chapter will be out soon! Please be patient cause I do have a life outside of this.