Okay, this is my fist story and(of course) its about a vampire. All of this is my story. My characters and plot. Its under copyright laws. so no touchy. I hope you like it

I WANT REVEIWS! I don't care if their nice or mean, just send me reveiws!

BlackWater1

I ran through the trees trying to get away from the monsters following me. Ahead of me loomed a palatial mansion, which seemed to have a vibration of evil. As if bad deeds had been performed there, but it was the only shelter in sight so I ran in its direction. When I reached it I knocked on the door,breathing hard out of exhaustion. The door opened and a sallow skinned servant stood there. "May I please come in? I'm lost. I have no food," I begged. The servant stared at me coldly. "Vermin like you are not welcomed here," he replied even though he could feel the palpable coldness of the air outside

"Don't say that Williams!" a voice said from behind the servant. A man stepped out from behind him. He was dressed in proper dinner attire; his skin was as pale as the servant's, his long whitish blonde hair pulled back in a ponytail. Unlike the servant he had a much more affable approach. "Welcome to my home," he said kindly and offered me his arm. I followed along and slipped my arm in his. He seemed to be such a proper gentleman. "My name is Malci Vastrut, what is yours?" He asked me. "Shila," I replied. Malci nodded and kept on walking.

He led me to a room in which a young girl servant was waiting. She also had the same pale skin as Malci and his servant. "Beth, take Shila to her room and give her proper clothes then escort her down to dinner," he told her. "Yes my Lord," she said as she grabbed me. I was surprised by this man solicitous attitude towards me, a stranger at his door. The dress I was fitted in was an old Victorian that was blue with few frills.

The girl named Beth ushered me down stairs were we met Malci. I greeted him with a curtsy and venerated my self in front of him for his generous attitude. "I'll take her the rest of the way," Malci told Beth. She scurried away and I was taken to the dining hall. It was gorgeous with a crystal chandler in the middle of it. We sat down to eat. There was a variety of food. Some I had never seen. We ate silence until the end when Malci stood up and walked to my end of the table. "Would you like to accompany me to my library?" he asked me. I nodded and he showed me to his library.

It was huge and occupied with tons books, it seemed almost cramped. He offered me a chair and I sat down in it. It was full and soft. Malci sat in the chair opposite of me, that unlike mine looked stiff and hard, but he seemed to sit in it indolently like a silly child. He began to talk about things like the weather and subjects like that. He talked about his books and their contents. I started to loll off into an ennui state until he mentioned something that caught my attention. "Of course those beastly fellows out there don't let you get any sleep. They're almost like monsters," he said softly.

To be continued…

don't worry theres more to be written. Look foward to the next one "BlackWater2"

I hope you liked it! ;- )