this is my first fan fiction. so if its not good tell me please and I'll make it better . To the story!
MPOV
Mistical! I yelled. Yes? She said walking down the stairs, dressed in all black like her father. She raised an eyebrow. Are you ready to go to grandmas? Ya, I guess, but I don't see why I have to go. I mean i'm 13; I can take care of my self. Ya but i'm your mother, you do as I when Fang walked through the door. Daddy! Mist cheered and hugged him. Hey baby girl. He said hugging her back.
I almost forgot. I'm the great Maximum Ride. I am now married to Fang. Fang Iggy and I are now 26. Nudge is 23; Gazzy is 20(but still farting up a storm lol) and Angel is 10. Iggy started dating Nudge. Ella got mad for not choosing her and ran away! We still don't know where she's at. Jeb was shot out of the blue; the day after Ella ran away. Yeah…… sad for him (NOT).
I looked at Fang. He smiled and kissed me. Hi. He said. Hi. So you won't let her stay by herself? I knew she was going to tell him that daddy girl. I don't want her to stay by herself, I have a bad feeling. Hmmm. Plus Angel wants to talk to her and on top of that we won't be home until later at night. I don't want her to be alone. Okay, I'll tell her then get dressed for we can leave.
FPOV
What she say? Mists ask. No, but its ok. Ugh, I'm going to get my ipod. She mumbled storming off. When I was getting dressed I heard glass break and max scream. I put my pants on quickly and ran down stairs. I saw M-Geeks (is that what there called) putting Max in a bag. I ran over and punched them in there face. I saw smile and wacked my with a cane. I fell. As I tried to get up, I heard Mist screaming. Let me go! Daddy Mommy! She screamed. I tried to get up but they talked me and put some type of gas mask on me. Black spots started to take over. My last thought was I though they were all gone!
There you go my first chapter. I think its good but I want to know what you think. R&R plz