hi guys i have decided to make another invader zim story. I will try and update the other one i have and the avenger one. Anyways this will have my oc danielle.
Before I start I guess I should tell you about myself. My name is Danielle, Dani for short. Im normal height for my age. Im 15 and i have electric piercing green eyes. My normal attire is jeans with a red shirt and black converses with a black jacket and glasses.
I hate my life. So we just moved to this really odd town. Color looks like it was just sprayed everywhere, people look like idiots, and everything was just kind of dull and gross. How can people live like this?! back in my old town _(whatever name your old city was)((just wanted to give that one as a freebe)) people where smart and stupid, all of my friends are there and it didnt look as gross as this place. "Dad! WHy did we have to move to this stupid place?! it looks disgusting out there! I could probably die if i breathed that air!" I wasnt lieing, it did look like that. "Oh, stop over exaterating. it looks perfectly fine out there." I soon after put my earphones on and decided to listen to welcome to the balck parade by MyChemicalRomance. Soon after we turned and parked in the drive way of our new house. "I still dont get why we moved" I mumbeled, appearanlty loud enigh for him to hear. "We moved so we could have a fresh start, when your mom died I couldnt handle it. so here we are now! an-" i cut him off " You couldnt handle it?! really?! I could have stayed back home and lived with my friends, but nooo instead you had to be a big cry baby and just move us to a completly new town! Which I evan doubt is evan on a map!" I was complety ticked! how dare he just think this was all hard on him! Im the one that saw her die not him! he thinks its hard on him well no! not evan close! he was in utter shock and I think a bit of fear but he soon replaced it with anger, but before he could do anyhting i ran out of the car and just ran into the city. I looked back to see if he was following me. He wasnt. Then I suddenly crashed into someone falling to the ground. "How dare you hit the almighty zim!" I look up to see a green kid. I raised an eyebrow and sarcastically said "Well sorry your royal highness" "Yes zim is royal isnt he." he said smiling. I just rolled by eyes and stood up noticing a little blood on the ground. Well there isnt any on my arms. I look down at my legs and noticed the my left knee and saw that I scraped and pretty badly. Well that'll leave a mark. "Well anyways whats your name?" He looked over at me and gave me a scowl "As if I zim would tell any human my name!" "But, you just said it! Its zim!" HE gasps like he's surprised. "Have you been spying on Zim?!" "No you just speak in 3rd person!" "What 3rd person?! Who else is here spying on zim?!" "You know what, i'm leaving." I started getting up but was pushed back down when a green dog jumped on me. "uph!" "Hi! whats your name?! Im gir! want a taco?!" He then shoved a gross looking taco in my face which I think had some bugs on it."N-no! I'm-good!" "okie dokie!" then he ate it. Lets just say i was really grossed out. "Gir no more of those silly tacos! We must return to the base!" The dog just stood there. "*sighs* now gir" "ohhhhh, ok!" the dog supposedly named gir grabbed zim and i guess you could say flew to there house. "Ok! Its official, I have finally gone crazy!" I stood up and walked around town for a bit trying to get used to my new surroundings
I worked really hard on this but please tell me if there is any errors or any way i could improve it! thx!.