FallenTruth: Hey I wrote this as a thing from Arwens pov. You have to know what happens in the appendices to her and Aragorn to understand. I hope someone understands. Anyway once again any constructive critiscism is welcomed. i want to get better. I don't know if anyone likes this, but I hope someone does.
Decisions
Everytime the wind blows I hear your voice,
The sun shines and I see your smile,
I reach out, but touch nothing.
I walk in the forest alone,
I remember our conversations,
Speaking of everything and nothing.
I am adrift without you,
Alone in time,
Always alone.
I stood and watched you leave,
I chose not to follow,
to stay behind and fade.
I was happy, but once more was left behind,
He chose to go,
I was left abandoned.
I choose now to walk in the forest of Lorien,
Here I will make my final decision,
Where did it all go wrong Ada?
Why am I lost?
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FallenTruth: Please review and tell me what you think. I am not too sure about it myself. I feel like it is lacking something. Ideas are welcome.