Ok, my first shot at a Narnia fan-fic, hope you guys enjoy the first chapter...
Edmund Penseive. The name of the boy who took every girls breath away at school, the all round nice guy, with the perfect hair and the biggest brown eyes you would ever see. The jock, the nerd and the band geek all wrapped into one, he can do anything play every sport, get 100% in every subject and write a smash hit song. In other words, he is the most popular guy in school. The guys wanted to be him, the girls wanted to be with him. Girls surrounded him and his entourage who sit on the stairs at lunch time, laughing at their lame told jokes. Me and my best friends Stacy and Monica were the envy of every girl in the school. Why? We were the only three girls that sat with Edmund, permanently all the time. You see, Edmund is my next door neighbour, my best friend, my boyfriend, the love of my life. We've had a special bond since we found that place, our place. The land where magic is its centre and a lion is worshipped. Edmund and I ruled this place for aslant. We are king Edmund and Queen Bernadette, leaders of Narnia. He slid something into my hand, a note.
"Read it, it's important" he whispered in my ear, putting his arms around me.
Bernadette,
I love you more that words can describe. You have always been there for me, no matter the circumstances. You are truly the one for me, the girl ive always dreamt of being with. I you're my first thought in the morning, all throughout the day and my last thought before I go to sleep but even then I cant get you out of my head because im dreaming about you.
I pull a face at Edmund and he laughs. He knows im not a big fan of mushy love letters, but he gestures me to keep reading.
I know the one thing you don't want is for Narnia to go into war, but we have no choice against this freaking tellmarines. This Saturday, we must enter Narnia and declare war. At the first sign of trouble, leave and never come back. I might not make it out alive, so if I don't, remember ill always love you.
Forever yours,
Edmund xoxo.
I look at Edmund in fear. This was our secret, we had never told anyone. What's going to happen if Edmund never shows up again? We could tell our friends, but they believe it for a second. Internet and TV have ruined everyone's imaginations. And besides if they listened to us, they would tell us to get a life. After all, Edmund was the most popular guy in school, im his girlfriend, we're both 16 and its 2010, who would believe you? But I sit here and curse the saying 'thank god for Saturday' because now, I don't want it to ever come around.
And that is the end of the first chapter. Do you like? And im sort of stuck on this, do you have any ideas what should happen? Add the white witch or prince Caspian? Click on the big green button below and tell me! Peace (yn)