This is mine and youmustusetheforce's commentary for the fanfic- My Immortal. My reactions will be in Bold and hers will be in Bold Italics.

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AN: Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik) Oh Boy. I see where this is going already. 2 my gf (ew not in that way)Oh we're not going to be judging on that trust us raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling.Clearly U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! MCR ROX! That would be My Chemical Romance

Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way The third, esquire, two times removed...and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid Limpid? Really? tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don't know who she is get da hell out of here!). Gladly. Looking up Amy Lee right now. I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie.Ummmm, that's called incest. I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. I thought this was supposed to be about witches and wizards I have pale white skin. I'm also a witch Ah there it is, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England where I'm in the seventh year (I'm seventeen)Thank you Sherlock I'm a goth (in case you couldn't tell) Really? and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. Styling' I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow. I was walking outside Hogwarts. That's nice. It was snowing and raining It can't snow and rain at the same time. It's either one or the other or a mixture called freezing rain so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them. You're very nice aren't you?

"Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was... Draco Malfoy! No Way!

"What's up Draco?" I asked. I wouldn't be that calm.

"Nothing." he said shyly. He's not shy. Is this the same Draco Malfoy from the book?

But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away. WTF! You just leave Draco for your friends?

AN: IS it good? PLZ tell me fangz! Ummm, this story will be well known… Fangz, inanimate objects will not talk back to you.