God damn this chapter is long. OK so this is a story me and my friend u/4106028/Lorenza453. So its about my OC Raz and her OC Lor. Not much to say really oh and if you want to see the art (by me XP) click the link Dont be scared to message either of us about anything.
Chapter one-The beginning
It was late afternoon on the desert planet, a small band of Irken soldiers made last minute preparations for the nights battle their leader a well set Irken female sporting a red leather sleeveless jacket, grey pants, metal tipped boots and grey pants. She narrowed her blood red eyes as she inspected her troops, insuring that they were at the top of their game because the success of this battle was vital to the empires plans. The group of soldiers on the planet was called phoenixes, the planet was called Trisape the third planet in the solar system Pendentent this particular planet was a desert like place with little shelter in the blazing hot sun that is up for twenty-two hours of the day and the last remaining two are freezing pitch black night with the occasional light source of the blue moon. Most Irken teams have abandoned this crusade but not the Phoenixes they were the best, There opponents where Trisapians. The phoenixes where at their base on the plateau Aronica the harshest part of the planet and there last stand.
"Ok troops this one of the most important battle of operation wolf's rain, the enemy Trisapians are a hardy race their thick hides means that your pak limbs will be useless to you and that is why we need all the help we can get. As most of you are aware this planet orbits three suns making it daylight for twenty-two hours improving their eyesight significantly. However this is their major weak point as their night vision is practically nonexistent making the two hours of night the perfect time to strike."
"remember we only have two hours before the sun rises and the advantage will be lost, but as I fought with you lot before you know what to do and the plan as you know is fool proof, as soon as the sun set's group Kiba you will take them from the west and group Hige will take them from the east while my group, Tsume, we will take the front door. The rest of you form the group Taboa you will stay close to my group and offer sniper support for strays that coming behind us" A small Irken with purple eyes stepped forwards, shaking slightly as he approached the commanding officer. She was points to a map which has the Trisapians village a rounded well guarded settlement which was built on top of a ridge looking over a small drop as a tactical retreat it was almost impossible to breach. Almost being her favourite word.
"Ma'am..." The Female spun round to face the solider her brow frowned as stepping out of line obviously he was a novice in the group.
"Yes private?"
"Ma'am are we seriously going to take them on alone it's impossible without the support of the battle tanks." The other troops all stared at their officer awaiting her response, expecting her to kill him where he stood for daring to question her judgement.
"Private we are the phoenixes the strongest, bravest and most intelligent section of the empire of course we can take them on even without the ' support' of the battle tanks "as she is saying this the soldiers could hear the gentle humming of the spittle runner "oh that and we have air support "as she is saying that a smile creeps across her and the soldiers faces. "So you go the plan are you ready" she shouts
"Yes ma`am" said the soldiers that where in the tent. They where only the foot soldiers and the battle would be tough but she could rely on the air support.
At 21:15 hours the commander had her men ready and set for the one mile trek that would take them at least twenty minuets
"Sergeant's see how much soda each of your men got" she says to her four sergeant's "if it below two litres then fill then up you have five min and nothing more we need to leave here at 21:20 hours have you got that"
"Yes ma`am" they say as they run off checking their men's soda supply. At 21:20 hours they were in format ready to go the female commander came out and looked at the formation of men satisfied that they were ready she gave the order "forward march" it would take them twenty minutes to get there and that was nonstop as they were walking to the bridge. As they got nearer to the bridge the sun was dipping and on the opposite horizon you could see the outline of the blue moon which gave of little to no light. The commander knew that the soldiers have spotted the Trisapians sentry's and where nervous but she knew they would hide their fear and questions down and get on with the battle ahead when they were quarter of a mile away from the settlement group`s Hige and Kiba branched of one to the right the other to the left getting ready to get near the edge of the bank ready to strike when the plan asked them to. At the same time group Taboa were climbing a few hills that were scattered around that point with their snipers ready and there order received and understood all that's was left was for the commanders group , Tsume, to continue on with the journey until they reached the bridge.
The commander was five feet away from the enforced doors to the settlement the light was enough for the Trisapians to see her and the five rows of men on the bridge behind her.
"Trisapians we have fought for five years now and you are the last survivors because of that I feel condemned to give you the chance to surrender" as she spoke a Trisapians showed his face from the looks of him he was an elder with a beard on a camel looking face as he wrinkled it in disgusted. He raises both his arms
"I am Thitoric, the last elder of the Trisapians we do not accept you proposal if that is what you call it, you come to our home and try to destroy us. I will tell you this is our world; our Trisape will not stand for this, archer's fiii aaaahhhhhh"
As soon as the word archers left the elders mouth the commander got out her colt and shot without hesitation hoping to stop the command as she knew that if the command was completed the plan would fail. A moment after she fired not checking to see if she hit the mark because she know her aim was true the female then checked her watch it was 21:45 the conformation took five minutes and they had arrived smack on time.
"Troop line echo move back to group taboa position once they start line delta move after two mikes you move and so forth until alpha you stick with me" the female commander shouts as she hears the elder scream from a gunshot wound.
The enforced door of the settlement start to open and the last remaining army of the Trisapians start to attack the Irken that are on the bridge, however the shots are not hitting the target as it is now pitch black
The commander shouts to her men "open fire, safety off" as soon as the word left her mouth there was a hailstorm of bullets flying towards the enemy. The commander take a peek at the time and notes that it is 21:49 hours she knows she has eleven mikes to get her men off of the bridge but she suddenly hears the tell-tale signs of the spittle runner.
"Shit, men fall back pronto!" she look to the right just in time to see the ships lining up and aiming " ruuuuuuunnnnnn!" she starts legging it towards the last stretch of the bridge just as the missiles hit the bridge. The power of the missiles shakes the bridge and it starts to crumble the commander it two feet away from the edge just as a large section of the bridge breaks she can feel the flames from the missiles behind her licking at her back and the naked part of the arms she carries on running and jumps over the gap as she is running you can hear her mumble curses under her breath.
She nearly made it to the edge but is a few inches off one of the soldiers see the commander falling down the ravine where the enemy is and grabs her hand. As the soldier grabs her hand she is bashed against the rocks and dragged upward, scraping against the rock on the way, to the safety of the side where the bridge use to connect. She looks around and sees her men positioned at the edge of the ravine she shakes herself and gives the order to execute the Trisapians that are firing at the Irken above them. About two minutes of non-stop fire the commander's voice is heard.
"Cease fire!" as she is shouting this the last echo of the gun fire is fading "Report on wounded and someone get the god damn pilots to land here now, oh and someone make a bridge to capture the rest of the Trisapians in the shelter and secure the area" as soon as the command is given there is a buzz of movement and the commander giver herself some time to check her own injuries. As she has finish checking her injuries she notes that there is nothing serious and walks towards the landing ships to talk to the commanding offices of that section of the empire.
A female Irken with lightening shaped antenna, a gold ring hanging from the right tip. Navy blue eyes, a torn grey shirt that was slightly too small for her, electric blue trench coat that was open tailed at the back, thick belt, black leather like pants, black leather fingerless gloves and standard issue invader boots stepped out of the spittle runner a cocky smirk on her face as she approached her fellow Irken commander. The Irken in red glared at her as she walked up to her, her coat blowing in the light breeze emitted by the landing ships around them.
"What the Irk Raz! I said be there at 22:00 exactly not a minute before and what do you do you come ten minutes too soon and blow the bloody bridge from under me!" The female in red growled at Raz as her face became a deep green and her already red eyes flared. Raz simply shrugged her shoulders and looked up at the slightly taller Irken.
"Lor chill, you've got all your limbs right? In my eyes that's a win besides I got bored and wanted to kick some Trisapians hide."
Lor rolled her eyes at Raz, a smile slowly spread its way across her face.
"Yeah but what about my men, cause unlike you I give two shits whether my men make it or not and if it's such a win why am I covered in cuts and burns?" she gestured to the multiple burn marks and cuts on her person. Raz raised her arms in a 'heck should I know' motion.
"Maybe cause you suck at your job commander crappy." She grinned as Lor balled her fists; the smile on her face grew into a grin as she rolled her shoulders.
"What did you just call me shuttle cock?" Raz raised an antenna and chuckled.
"Oh you couldn't understand me the first time ok. Maybe its cause you suck at you job." She paused and grinned "Commander crap…" before she could finish Lor had leapt up at her and they began to play fight on the ground, although Raz was no match for Lor she continued to poke fun at her. As they continued to roll around on the dusty ground a small Irken foot soldier marched up to them and stood in shock as his two commanding officers fought in the dirt. When he realised that they were paying no attention to him he nervously cleared his throat. Lor looked up as she had Raz pinned; as she looked away Raz kicked her in the chest sending her onto her back. Lor cut Raz a dirty look as she dusted herself off.
"Yes solider?" She reached down to help Raz up who lightly punched her in the arm.
"All enemy troops have been taken prisoner and the area secured if you wish you may leave." Lor looked back at Raz who nodded in agreement. Turning back to face the Irken Lor smiled softly at the troop.
"Thanks you solider. Dismissed." The small Irken saluted and walked away, Lor turned back to Raz and the two of them walked up to Raz's ship, a greenish blue and gold spittle runner, a few dents littered the haul but other than that it was in perfect condition.
As Raz ran her gloved hand over the port, her hands stroked one of the many dents covering the ship "Bloody gits denting my beautiful Seto." Lor sighed and shook her head.
"I still can't believe you named that hunk of metal." Raz turned to glare at Lor her dark eyes narrowed.
"Hey I made this ship with my own two hands and anyway this hunk of metal as you call it is the only thing that can get you home so I suggest you treat Seto with a little more respect. Besides your one to talk I mean you named your pistol and dagger, what where they called scrap and dumb?"
"Sam and Dean! And if you don't shut up and take us home ASAP ill introduce you to them." Raz smirked as she helped Lor into the cockpit and began setting a course back to Irk.
"Yeah yeah keep your leaka on." The navy blue cockpit closed and the engines hummed as the ship took off and exited the damaged planet's atmosphere.
As Raz put the ship into auto pilot she walked over to Lor who was sitting in the passenger seat inspecting her many wounds, she glared at Raz as she approached her, antenna pinned back.
"You still sulking over me being early?"
"Don't talk to me you jerk." Raz sat next to her friend and chuckled.
"Hey remember the time back in the smeetery when the snack machine stole your monies so we made that laser together and blow the lid off it, and then when we got caught we used the laser on the maternity drone and then rode its remains back to class." Lor smiled at the memory.
"Yeah they never found out who that was." Raz puffed out her chest.
"See so my ideas are amazing and besides that battle would have been so dull if I'd have been on time, were just that good that we need to give things a chance to go cock eyed to make it interesting." Lor poked Raz in the gut causing her to wheeze.
"You're an arrogant git you know that?" Raz smiled as she got up.
"I try." Lor laughed "thank Irk we're almost home, much longer and your ego would have filled the whole ship." Raz grinned as she leapt into the pilot seat and once again took control of her ship, landing it gracefully in the roof of their base.
