This is my first yu-gi-oh fiction so review for me please.
Yugi:walks into YAmi's room) I have something random to say...
Yami:(Watching tv) What?
Yugi:I got high off of a banana! (Laughs insanely)
Yami:(looks at him in a weird, then leaves ) Okkkaaaaayyyyy...
Yugi:wait! I'm also a banana stalker!
Yami:Stop with this, this madness. (runs and bumps into Jounouchi) Jou!
Jou:Hey. Yami!
Yami:Jou, help me!
Jou:Guess waht, I'm gay!
Yami:WHAT!
Jou:I'm gay and I wear thongs underneath my pants! (skips along happily) LA aLA LA...
Yami:What the hell (runs away and see Honda dressed as Bugs Bunny) what the-
Honda:Quack!
Kaiba:(steps out of his limo with his pulse rifle from Ratchet and Clank) Bye Quack boy (aims and shots Honda)
Honda:QUACK (falls off tree) XX
Anzu:(dressed as Chiibi-usa) Hooray! Quack boy is dead! (dances)
Kaiba:(shots her, too) SHut the hell up!
Anzu:XX
Yami:What the hell is going on here?! (feels a tap on his shoulder) Huh?
Mono-chan:drags Justin timberlake, Sora, and Axel gehind her) sup!
Yami:Um... hi...
Justin:How the hell did I get here?
Sora:Don't worry, you'll get used to it, right Axel?
Axel: SUre do...
Mono-chan:Shut up now say hi to Yami.
Justin,Sora,Axel:Hi Yami...
Mono-chan:(looks around)KAIBA!
Kaiba:Fuck off! (aims pulse rifle)
Yami: I'm so confused!
Mai:(dressed as Minnie mouse) Hello!
All:...
Mai:what?
All:...
Mai:...(cries and runs into a feddle position)
yami: That was weird.
Mono:chan:SHoot her.
Kaiba:My pleasure. (shoots Mai)
Mai:(dead) XX
Yugi: I LOVE BANANAS!
Mono-chan:Good-bye! (throws Yugi into outer space)
Yugi: OO AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! (flies into the sun)
Yami:OO
Mono-chan:Don't worry, he'll be back
15 seconds later
Yugi:(reincarnated) Whoa...
Mono-chan:(tying up Kiba) Hey. He's back.
Kaiba:How the helldid this happen?
Sora: You lost in Uno remember?
Kaiba:Shut up...
Mono-chan:
Yugi:DUDE! I SAW THE BEGINNINGAND THE END OF THE UNIVERSE! (transforms into an S) SCI (then an F) FI! (starts having a seizure) I'm a living SCI-FI!
Mono-chan:hit Yugi with a baseball bat)
Yugi:XX
Yami:What the fuck?
Mono-chan:You're next.
Yami:?
Mono-chan:(throws Yami into outer space) Bye!
Yami:(flies into outer space and screams like a girl)
Sora:May his spirit rest in peace.
Yami:(flies into the sun) It's too bright! AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!! (opens his eyes and sees the set of X-PLAY) The hell? (hears a trunk)Huh? (looks to his right and sees atrunk driven by Adam and Morgan , the host of X-PLAY)
Morgan:Move Adam!
Adam:BUt I wanna drive (cries like a baby)
Morgan:(shoot Adam in the crouch)
Adam:O.O NOOOOOO!!
Morgan:Now it's your turn you yu-gi-oh freak!! (laughs insanely)
Yami:(pees on himself)Aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh
DUDE!
Yami:(falls off the couch) Ow! What the-(looks at the DVD case) No more watching 'The Exorcist' anymore for me... (leaves and heads into the bathroom)
END
Yami:WHY AM I SO WET AND SMELL LIKE PISS!!
...Um...End...
