So y'all probably wondering why I'm remaking one of my old fanfiction. Well, you see, I recently read it and kinda cringed at the mistakes, terrible writing and terrible story line so I wanted to adapt it a little bit. So here's Bad Kitty (Remake).
Also, just a quick thing I want to say, I don't mind if some people want to criticize this story or my writing or whatever, y'all have an opinion and it's great for an improvement! But to those who say things like 'this would never happen in the real show', the name 'fanfiction' is there for a reason - the whole point of this website is to make shows, movies and books the way we want it. But to those who have supported me through the original Bad Kitty and throughout my entire fanfiction work, thank you guy so much! I love you! Anyway, that was my rant, here's the story.
(I DON'T OWN THIS BEAUTIFUL SHOW, UNFORTUNATELY... ACTUALLY MAYBE FORTUNATELY)
The gleaming ladybugs flew across the sky as Ladybug called her miraculous. Once again, the sky was blue and the cries of the citizens of Paris transformed into cheers. Ladybug and Chat Noir jumped onto the ground and did their signature 'pound it'. The duo walked up to the victim and reassured the poor guy that everything was fine and that it was not his fault. As everyone went back to their usual routines, Ladybug and Chat Noir went onto a rooftop and laid back for a while in silence. Chat gazed at the beautiful features on his Lady's face. For some unknown reason, the beautiful features weren't as beautiful as they usually were - her eyebrows were furrowed, her lips curled into a frown and her mask did a terrible job of covering her puffy eyes.
'You okay, m'Lady?' asked Chat. Ladybug suddenly shook as she stared at Chat's face, wide-eyed. Chat apologised for bringing the poor girl out of her thoughts.
'No, it's okay and um, yeah I'm okay, just tired' she replied
'If you want to talk, I'm there, you know that right?' he said. Ladybug smiled, she knew she had someone to count on.
'I just... my crush rejected me today. It hurts - I gained up so much courage, practiced my confession, calmed myself down and all I got was a 'sorry'? I know it's not his fault and he has the right to reject me but I wish he could explain why rather than just giving me one word and leaving' Chat listened with such intent that a sudden shot of guilt hit him as he remembered his rejection to Marinette. He genuinely felt flattered that a sweet girl like Marinette had a crush on him but he just couldn't feel the same way. His love for Ladybug was unbeatable. As well as guilt, he felt annoyed and a little jealous that someone rejected his Lady; he must be a cocky guy, he thought.
'Hey, my Lady, don't feel bad. If he didn't give you a proper explanation then he's not worth it. Remember that I'm always there for you'
'Thanks, Chat. Anyway, I should probably get going, we've held back our transformation too long. Our Kwamis will kill us' she said. Ladybug stood up but just before she could fly away, Chat grabbed her hand. He looked into her eyes and opened his mouth but no words came out. Suddenly, something overcame him, more powerful than love. Lust. Why now?, he thought. The last thing he wanted was for his Lady to think he only wanted her for his own pleasure.
'I love you, my lady...' he said. Silence filled the air around them. Ladybug frowned and gaped at him.
'Chat, how can you just... I literally told you that I got rejected and you're trying to take advantage of that?' she cried. No, no, no, that's not how she was supposed to take it, thought Chat.
'My Lady...' but before he could say any further, she flew away, tears forming in her eyes. Damnit, it all went wrong! Chat felt angry, why were girls so complicated? He went home and dropped his transformation and gave Plagg cheese. Everything was just terrible, it didn't help that he had a boner either. Maybe he shouldn't have focused too much on 'those' classes. Nothing was going right, he rejected Marinette and now he got rejected. Marinette...She wouldn't mind, would she? He felt guilty for thinking that but maybe it was his only option. Guess, he could try.
'Plagg, claws out!'
Damn, I type way too fast, it took ages to write that last bit :D Anyway, I'm gonna end the chapter there and see if you guys like it! Thank you for reading!
